同等学历英语写作模板

学苑中心培训系列 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 1页 同等学历英语写作模板 注意：此模板内容分三部分， 一部分是 3 篇热点范文，另一部分是写作，最 后是一些开头、中间和结尾部分的套用句型 作文系列 1 你对星巴克咖啡店是否该搬出故宫的看法, Should Starbucks leave the Palace Museum ?(the forbidden city) 面题材的实用型模板 : Recently, there is a heated discussion on the issue of .星巴克存废之争..Those who criticize .其存在... argue that..它与传统文化不和谐. They claim that 它该搬出去.... But people who advocate.留下来., on the other hand, maintain that..这无关紧要, 符合时代潮流且能赚钱. Every medal has its reverse 事物有两面性/ But for my part I complete side with (am against) the former/ latter. Firstly, it may result in.环境不和谐... because.故宫是传统文化精华... Although.能给人 休息环境..., we have to.考虑不止商业利益而是文化保护...Secondly, a number of factors proves the groundless of arguments supporting. 留下来...For example..垃圾, 文化心理不接受,.Last but not least, to achieve the goal, however,. we still have .......to( 为了促进旅游的同时,我们要展示出对自己文化的 热爱) .... To sum up/conclude/summarize, all the evidence justifies an unshakable view that.(文化的独特性不能 被商业行为所污染... It is high time/ urgent/ necessary that ...measures be taken to (是时候采取措施保 护自己的传统文化了) ...... 将中文替换为英语词组和带动词句型的句子即可. 关于星巴克的 Sample Writing 范文: Should StarBucks Leave the Palace Museum? Recently, there is a heated discussion on the issue of saying Yes or No to the Starbucks in the Palace Museum. Those who criticize its existence argue that it is out of tune with Chinese culture, they claim that a schedule be made to let it go. But people who advocate keeping it, on the other hand, maintain that we shouldn’t make a fuss because it is the symbol of globalization and can bring us foreign exchanges. Every medal has its reverse. But for my part I side with the former. Firstly, the discomfortness at heart because star bucks here has completely destroyed the peaceful harmony and solemnity of the palace, the diamond of Chinese culture. Although starbuck can offer the place to relax, we must have the consciousness of culture protection. Secondly，he palace museum is not a place for people to amuse themselves by joining themselves in some comic programs or easy-going games but to enrich their minds by reviewing history of the past of the country. Last but not lease, to achieve the goal of successfully hosting 2008 Olympic Games, however, we still have to show to foreigners our deep love to the culture of 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 2页 our ancestors To summarize, the uniqueness of Chinese culture can not be sacrificed for the benefits of business activities. It is high time we took actions and Starbucks has just told us why. 作文系列 2 My views on the star spokesman in advertisements 写作词汇和材料 1Rise to fame and fortune overnight 一夜成名 2 entertainment industry 娱乐业 3 enrich spiritual life 丰富精神生活 4.money -oriented 向钱进 5. income disparity 收入差距 6.star admiration 明星崇拜 7. fake products, inferior products 假冒产品,劣质产品 作文框架 With the ecomomic take -off brought up by ， People 开始追星. They are 离我们很远 because but at the same time 又离我们很近.Why ? When you 打开电视, you 会看到明星出现在广告里.as if 他们用 的产品非常好, 值得推广. (问题产生背景) (问题焦点) The day of consumers' rights exposed 问题产品,arousing 群众对产品质量,particularly 明星代言产品质量的关注. AS far as I am concerned, I 反对明星做广告. First of all, pop starts 为钱而 做广告, they never pay attention to 质量. (再来个疑问句) Can you believe they are really users when they are 同时为多产品宣传? In the second place, products speak for themselves 名人广告的重复播放 将损坏观众对他们的好印象。 Moreover, as starspokesmen find it easy to 赚钱 by 做广告 ing ,his 艺 术精神会丧失 and yong people 将效仿, ( 两面看问题,不能打击面太广)It goes without saying stars enrich people's spiritual life but we should not forgive the dark side. All in all, it is necessary that effective measures be taken 约束明星做广告 if we want to 建设社会 主义精神文明. What people need is 产品质量 rather than 明星效应 . My views on the star spokesman in advertisements （sample） Pop stars take up our spiritual life in the information age. They are so far away from us in real life because they belong to the upper class but at the same time you can not evade them, particularly in advertisements on TV screen when they are promoting certain products as if they enjoyed using them and wanted to share the experience with you. One March 15 , the day of consumers' rights a TV channel exposed a faulty product promoted by a famous entertainer, arousing directly suspects and blames among audience on the trustworthy of celebrities. As far as I am concerned, I am against the star spokesmen in advertisement. First of all, the 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 3页 stars have accepted large sums of rewards from big firms to act as their spokesmen; can you hope them to give a fair judgment to the promoted products? In the second place, products speak for themselves. Repeatedly aired ads of stars will annoy audience and destroy the good impression the stars left them from TV, movies. Moreover, as the star spokesman finds ads. the easy way to get money overnight instead of painstakingly acting, his art spirits may be lost and the money-oriented code of conducts may be set to young people , particularly his fans. It goes without saying stars enrich people's spiritual life but we should not forgive the dark side. All in all, It is necessary that effective measures be taken to redress the negative effects of star spokesman. What people need is product qualities rather than the slim figures, beautiful faces and tender words of star spokesmen 作文系列 3 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College students deals in stocks . You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1．当今大学生炒股已引起争议 2. 说明你对这个问题的态度。 3． 结论 Related Vocabulary 素质教育 quality education 理论实践结合 apply theories to practice 社会风气 general mood 财富急剧增长 multiply one’s wealth 就业难 employment difficulties / hard to find jobs 大学扩招 college enrollment expansion For ： 1. It can enrich students’ experience 2. It is a good way to apply theories to practice 3. Stocks dealing can test and train EQ 4. For rural students, it can lighten (alleviate) the pressure of tuition 5. It can provide means for student’s to start their own business after graduation Against: 1. Too much time on business and no time to study 2. The money oriented code of conduct 3. It may give rise to moral decline 4. It may create burden for parents 5. Campus rich men affect romance in college Template: There is no denying that 我们生活在信息社会 and 大学生都跟着变了. Take 大学生炒股 as an 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 4页 example , more and more.开始自己事业, which 引起社会争议. Some people suggest 这不合适. 理由如下 第一. collge students 不应转移学习精力 because 第二. the campus 是学习的地方 and stocks dealing 破坏了学习气氛 But as far as I am concerned, 我 strongly in favor of ( 假设) 学生炒股. Firstly, 可以理论用于实 践. It is a good example of quality education. secondly, stocks dealing can 培养学生_____ , 改进___ and 教给 ___, especially for 农村大学生. Finally, in view of 就业难, stocks dealing can 鼓励学生 创业 However, there is good side and a bad side to everything. It is advisable that students 把学习当做第 一要务, 把炒股当成一种社会实践 Sample Version My Ideas on College Students Deals in Stocks There is no denying that we live in an information age and college students are no longer what they used to be. They are more economic minded, practical and eager to accept new ideas Take stocks dealing for example, more and more college students have opened their accounts and begun buying in or selling out stocks and bonds, which has stirred a heated discussion inside or outside the campus. Some people suggest this is the business for working people but not suitable for college students. The reasons are quite simple. First of all, college students should not divert their energy from study to business because they bear the hope of parents to become the talented people. Secondly, the campus is the place full of academic spirit and stocks dealing has undermined the atmosphere of pursuing truth and knowledge. But as far as I am concerned, I am strongly in favor of students dealing in stocks. My reasons may go as follows: firstly Students can learn how to apply theories to practice, not just from text books or labs. It is a good example of quality education. Secondly, stock dealing can enrich the EQ, improve the IQ for students and teach them how to be financial independent, especially for rural students. Finally, in view of the job-hunting difficulties after graduation, stocks dealing can help and encourage students start own business However, there is good side and a bad side to everything. It is advisable that students regard learning as their first business and stocks dealing one of their social practical courses. 同等学历作文的写作流程及套用句型 1.1：审题环节：3 分钟 目标：判断作文类型，选择写作模板 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 5页 1.1.1 作文类型 1． 两面型：对于一个事务的两面看法：该住校外还是住校内？财富重要，还是健康重要？ 2． 果因型：解释一种现象的原因： 3． “How”型：对于一种问题提出解决办法：如何解决能源危机？“五一”、“十一”长假丰富了人们 的业余生活，促进了旅游经济的发展，同时也带来了交通拥挤、环境污染等问题。请就“经济 发展”与环境保护问题向有关部分写一封信，提出自己的见解和建议。 4． 综合型＝果因＋“How”型 5． 图型：果因型或综合型的变体 1.2.提纲环节 两面型 果因型 “How”型 图表型 开头段 提出双方观点 提出现象＋过渡句 提出问题＋过渡句 描述图表 中间段 要驳斥观点的原因 自己观点的原因 1 原因 1 方法 1 原因 1 自己观点的原因 2 原因 2 方法 2 原因 2 自己观点的原因 3 原因 3 方法 3 原因 3 结论段 双方观点结论 现象前景结论 方法前景结论 趋势结论 第 1 步：写出开头段 模块 1：两面型提出观点开头（转折法开头） 模板：It is widely accepted that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进 行一些修饰）, can bring some positive results / are beneficial, essential for mankind on the grounds that (简单句，加一些笼统的原因，注意与后文区别). However, others argue that___________（主题的近 义词，避免与上一句重复）, more often than not （副词做插入语）, is harmful to the people _________(接定语从句，也可以使用for引导的表因果关系的并列句) 例如：工作压力是好事还是坏事？ It is widely accepted that pressure in work, forcefully imposed on the employees in this competitive world, can bring some positive results on the grounds that it can stimulate the staff immensely. However, others argue that stress, more often than not, is harmful to the people who cannot assume excessive pressure in their work. 问题型段落 It is widely accepted that assisted suicide and euthanasia, causing dispute, can’t be performed if murder the patient to some extent. However, others argue that the assisted suicide and euthanasia can bring about great benefits. 模块 2：果因型提出现象 Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic/issue arousing general concern is that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰），谓语＋宾语＋ 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 6页 定从。In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this (phenomenon, increase, situation, problem…….) Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic aroused general concern is that stress, more often that not, is harmful to the employees who cannot assume excessive pressure. It is no simply task to identify the negative effects of this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors./ In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this problem. 模块 3： Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the___________（主题）, _____________（名 扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰）The immediate consequence is 简单句，名词写完. The longer-range result can be ___________恶果since this problem ___________（原因状从）Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this. Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the high pressure in work, invariably brought to everyone in this competitive world. The immediate consequence is the damage of individual employee’s health. The longer-range result can be a decline in physic for the whole workforce since this problem has become more evident in each working unit. Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this. 模块 4：描述图表开头： According to the table, there was a sharp decrease in the number of _________ (主题)from five million in 1960 to three million in 1962, which was followed by a rapid increase over the next two years. The number dropped again from almost six million in 1964 to five million in 1966, 4 million 1967, 3 million 1968 respectively. The years from 1986 to 1990 saw a steady rise in the number of . _________ (主题) Also it can be noticed that in 1960, the number reached the bottom, while 1990 saw the peak during this period. In conclusion, 简单句写出说明的问题 主语 动词过去式 副词 The price The population The rate Decreased, fell, declined, went down, dropped How quickly? Gradually, slowly, slightly, somewhat Increased, rose, grew, went up, climb, double Quickly, sharply, rapidly, drastically, significantly, substantially Remained, stayed Steady, constant, stable 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 7页 第 2 步：中间段的提纲 模块 5：两面型中间段提纲 所要驳斥的观点的原因 所支持的原因（复杂） 原因 1（简短） 原因 1+恶果（原因）+例证 原因 2（简短） 原因 2+效果 原因 3（简短） 原因 3 例如： 所要驳斥的观点的原因 所支持的原因（复杂） 工作的动力 损害健康+对工作单位造成损失+清华老师 死亡 激励员工 损害工作热情+只有热爱工作，而不是压 力，对工作更加有利 工作量提高 降低效率 第 3 步：写出最后段 模块 6：两面型结尾： Essential to some extent as ___________is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate ______________(自己的 观点). If those who only acknowledge its benefits can take into consideration of the side effects it brings, then ___________ (主题)may not seem acceptable. 例如： Essential to some extent as work pressure is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate reducing it by efforts. If those who only acknowledge its benefits can take into consideration of the side effects it brings, then too much stress in work may not seem acceptable. 模块 7：因果型结尾 From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that __________(主 题)。We must call for an immediate action, because the current situation of (主题) _____________, permitted to continue, will surely lead to the end/destruction/damage of/to ______./ This situation/tendency will surely continue that it deserves more intensive research and public concern. 模块 8：How 型结尾 Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success/solution, but the pay-off might be worth the effort. It will help/benefit/contribute to_____________(效果) eventually. 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 8页 1.3：写作 模块 9：中间第 1 段 The principal arguments advanced by those approving of the high pressure in work are that it can be transformed into motivation（从句 1）, that it can spur on the staff （从句 2）and that more work can be done under the stress.（从句 3）。注意：3 个从句要短，要明确 模块 10：中间第 2 段 But according to me, I firmly hold that its negative effect overweighs its benefits for the following reasons或work strain is more devastating than beneficial. First, too much pressure can damage employee’s health.（简单句） It is the decline in health that in return produces a negative effect on the work.（强调句） For example, due to the high pressure in work, a prominent journalist died on his way to interview a scholar, which is a tragedy and loss of the whole country （例证句）. 模块 11：中间第 3 段 Besides, the enthusiasm of the staff can be quenched if they are exposed to overwhelming stress. Virtually, only by the love of one’s career, rather than the external pressure, can the employee be driven to accomplish the tasks in work as quickly and as well as possible. (倒装句) 模块 14：中间第 4 段 Finally, a strained mind of the employee may reduce their efficiency in work, the most important factor to improve the output for each working unit.(n1,+ n2+名扩) 理由库：12 条 (1)节省时间／成本 (2)提供方便和快捷 (3)环境保护／卫生 (4)发展机会／教育机会 (5)扩大知识／增加经验 (6)休闲放松／减缓压力 (7)增加就业 (8)富有乐趣 (9)增进友谊／便于交流／互相学习 (10)有助于身体健康 (11)提高效率 (12)适应竞争激烈的社会 1.4：检查 拼写和语法的错误 第三部分 补充模板 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力 第 9页 3.1 图表说明问题句式： 1. The chart/graph/table/diagram/picture shows/displays that . . . 2. As (can be) shown in / According to the chart/graph/table/diagram/ picture, . . 3. The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal (that)... 4. It is clear/ apparent from the chart/ graph/ table/ diagram/ picture that... 3.2 数据变化的句式： 1. The number of (private cars) increased / rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/ substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from.., to... 2. There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from.., to... 3. There was a boom in the number of (private cars) from.., to... 4. The number of (private cars) climbed/jumped/rose suddenly / were sharply up / soared to . . . in . . . 3.3 图画说明寓义句式： 1. The information/message/implication/suggestion of the picture could be ... 2. The picture could be interpreted/translated into ... 3. Symbolically, this picture reveals/shows/demonstrates/displays ... 4. It is generally accepted/acknowledged/agreed/admitted/understood that... _/As is symbolic revealed in the picture .... 3.4 解释原因 1. The reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing .... For another.., 2. .. . is also / partly / solely / chiefly responsible for the problem. 3. It is no easy job to identify the reasons for . . . which involves several complicated factors. For some... For others... 4. A number of factors could account for/lead to / contribute to / result in/be conducive to... 5. It will exert a far-reaching/profound impact/influence/effect on... 6. There are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon. 3.5 提出谚语处 1. Here is an old saying .... It's the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today. 2. One of our ancient philosopher said .... Chinese people have always been holding their idea to be one of their stands of morality. 3. One of the great early writers said that... 3.6 说明事物优点： 1. Nothing / Few things can equal / match with/be compared with . .. in terms of... 2. For all / in spite of / Despite the disadvantages / side effects, it has its compensating advantages / beneficial effects. 3 .... has a positive impact/influence/effect on people's lives. 4 .... is playing an increasingly important role in people's lives. 3.7 说明事物缺点： 学苑中心培训系列教材 内部资料，翻版必究 www.xycentre.com 智力服务于中国，提高企业与个人整体竞争力