CET-4 Wring

nullLecture one Lecture one CET-4 WritingFour levelsFour levels14 points. — 切题. 达思想清楚, 文字通顺,连贯性好.基本无语言上错误,仅有个别小错. 11 points — 切题.表达思想清楚, 文字通顺,连贯性好.但有少量语言错误. 8 points — 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够连贯,语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误. 5 points — 基本切题. 表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多数为严重错误. Patterns of CET-4 writing Patterns of CET-4 writing Argumentation Exposition Practical writing (应用文) Letters (2) chart writing(2) null比较性论说文Where to live—in the City or in the Country? Which is a Better Source of News — Newspaper or TV? 对策: 1).对赞成的事物或观点要大写特写,而对其缺点要一笔带过. 2).对反对的事物,要重墨针砭,而对其优点则要少写或略写.评论性论说文 评论性论说文 My attitude Towards Advertising Class Attendance Should not be Required? 对策: 1.客观地分析正反两种观点 2.提出自己的观点并加以评论阐述性论说文阐述性论说文Why I attend CET-4 Test? Why I Came to College? 对策: 正面阐述作者自己的观点和理由图表作文图表作文Students Use of Computers Change in People’s Diet 对策: 1).描述图表内容特别是图表中的变化趋势. 2).解释某一变化的原因 3).作出结论或提出存在的问题解释性论说文解释性论说文Two-day weekend Practice makes perfect 对策:1). 解释某一事物如谚语,政策 2).重要性, 必要性, 危害性 3).实际运用null 对比式模式1 Some people are inclined to A for the following reasons. Firstly , _____________. Secondly , as we often observe, _________________. Other people , however, prefer B. They think __________. What’s more, _________. To me, A is more attractive in that B is the following items that can’t be compared with A. Clearly, B____. And my personal experience certainly drives me to choose A.null模式 2 Nowadays, __________ become popular in our daily lives. But ________? Generally , there are two opinions toward it. One opinion is that ________ because _______. The other is __________. People who hold it argue that _______, consequently _________. In conclusion, I may say that ______. Because ________. In a word __________.null模式 3 At present, quite a few people think __________. It sounds good because________. Therefore ,________. On the contrary, there is a famous saying that__________. To my knowledge,___________. Besides , it should be always remembered that _______. Can Money Buy Happinessnull Should Men and Women be Equal There is heated debate over whether men and women should be equal in this world. Most people take it for granted that men is superior to women. They maintain such an idea because the phenomenon all over the world show men make up most proportion of the workforce, and most women just stay at home for housework and take care of children. What’s more, the leaders of companies are largely men. People , naturally , are under the illusion that men have special talent for politics and economy. nullAs for me, I hold the idea that men and women should be equal. Both of them are created equal. In addition, it turns out that women are as distinguished as men in some field from politics, management to science. nullIn contrast , people who advocate human right argue that women’s talent are as good as men. There is every indication that they have their abilities to compete with men. In their view, women can do very well provided there is no gender discrimination. In addition, they will take advantage of their potentials if they are offered the same opportunities as men, even better in some fields. Wu Yi, the vice-chairman of our country, is a case in point. null 阐述主题式/ 概念型模式1 A famous saying goes that ________. It means that__________. I have had such experiences for many times. __________. It’s also the same in ___________. Another case in point is _____________, ___________. I like the saying __________, which encourage me __________________. Practice makes perfectnull模式 2 __________means ______________. A good example of this saying is ___________. __________, but without ______, you can never __________. Moreover, _________. The only way to solve this problem is to __________. Another example ______________. Only when you _________ can you________.null More haste, Less Speed A famous proverb goes that more haste, less speed. If you emphasize only on speed but ignore the quality of your work, you will get the opposite effect.nullSecond explanation of the proverb: The more hasty you are, the slower you achieve completeness and success In short, haste makes waste. null Suppose that you are preparing for your final examination. The fact that you have no enough time makes you very worried ,consequently all your efforts lead to nothing because you do it in such a haste. Another case in point is “Great Leap Forward”, China’s socialism construction in 1950’s. The leaders at that time wished to realize communism in a shorter period time. However, the economy was totally damaged due to the mistake in the policy.nullIn conclusion ,whatever you do, please remember the saying– more haste, less speed. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you are most likely to benefit a lot from it. Type 3: 概念型/解释性论说文Type 3: 概念型/解释性论说文 More haste, Less speed 1) explain the idiom 2) give examples to support your view 3) offer a brief summary of what you have discussed in the former paragraph.null解决办法式 模式1In recent years, we have to face a problem that____________. People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. Firstly ____________. Though this method has its good sides like that it can ________, one of this bad sides it brings about is that _____. Secondly , ______ is another means. But it also has its advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, _______. On the other hand_______. All in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do ___it with our brains and hands, we one day resolve this problem.nullThere are many ways to _________. First ,_________. Second, ______________. Third,__________. As to me, the second way fits me, and the reasons are as follows. For one thing,___________. For another things, this choice benefits me in a way that ______________. As as student in the modern society. We should ________________. In conclusion, above all the reasons, my way to __________ is to _________________.模式2null利弊式 模式1 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ,_________. Besides , _______________-. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _____. To make matters worse,______________. Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to _________.null 模式2 Since __________, ___________. No doubt, it allows us to do may things that__________. For example, ________. The second benefit we can reap from it is that_________. Yet, it may give us some troubles as well. For instance,_________. As a result, ___________. And if _________. I would like to______________________.null图表式 模式1 From the graph, we know the statistics of __________ and ___________. It can be seen easily that_________. There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the following are the typical ones. For one thing, _______. In addition,__________. The main reason is that________________. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe __________.null模式 2 As shown in the pictures, We can see that____________. From the figure in the chart, we can come to a conclusion that________________. There are reasons for __________. First , _____________. Second,____________. In conclusion/therefore,___________null批评、抱怨、投诉模版 Date:_________ Dear: _________ My name is ________. I am _____. I venture to write you a letter about _________The focus of the complaint is _______ For one thing, _________. For another, ___________ Honestly speaking, ______. But ______. Besides, _____ All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope ____________________. Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours Signature:________ null.     申请信(公司) I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in … 2)   I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experiences needed for the position of … advertised in the paper. 3)   I shall bring with me the full details of my testimonials as you request. 4)   I should rather be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself. 5)   It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of …in a firm such as yours.