雅思ILETS小作文常用句型汇总_老顾

动态图作文的6个必备句式 必备句式1：分词结构 1. 电力供应差不多增长两倍（double），从50 涨到100。 正确的：Electricity supply nearly doubled, rising from 50 to 100. 学生答案：Electricity supply was nearly doubled, rised from 50 to 100. 错误1：doubled不及物动词，没有被动 错误2：rise的过去时是rose 错误3：doubled和 rose两个动词，没有连词，而且不并列，最好rose改成分词 2. 开荒（land clearance）是土地退化（degradation）的主要原因，占据了10%。 正确的答案：Land clearance was the main reason for degradation, accounting for 10%. 学生答案：The percentage of land clearance was the main reason for degradation, accounts for 10%. 错误1：accounts for一般现在时，时态不对 错误2：“percentage…accounted for”永远是错的 3. 人口上升到61亿在2005，在2006年轻微下降到60亿之前。 正确的答案：The population rose to 6.1 billion in 2005, before declining slightly to 6 billion in 2006. 学生答案：The population rose to 6.1 billions in 2005, before being declined slightly to 6 billion in 2006. 错误1：billion, million, thousand, hundred 等都不应该加s 错误2：increased, declined这些词都是不及物动词，没有被动 必备句式2：用while, 或者although引导的状语从句 ， 或者是but引导的并列句 4. 结婚的数字上升，而离婚的数字下降。 正确的答案：The number of marriages rose, while the number of divorces dropped. 学生答案：The amount of marriages rose. While, the number of divorces dropped. 错误1：amount一般是用于吨、克、公斤这些量词的名词 错误2：While是连词，要连接两个句子。 5. 虽然读科学的男生比女生要多，这个数字在下降。 正确的答案：Although men outnumbered women in science, this number declined. 学生答案：Although men outnumbers women in science, this number was declined. 错误1：outnumbers时态不对 错误2：increased, declined这些词都是不及物动词，没有被动 必备句式3：用after which, during which time, by which time, when, where 引导的定语从句 6. 手机用户的数量在2005上升到2百万，在那之后数字保持水平。 正确的答案：The number of mobile phone users rose to 2 million in 2005, after which the figure remained constant. 学生答案：The amount of mobile phone users rose to 2 millions in 2005, after which the figure was remained constant. 错误1：amount一般是用于吨、克、公斤这些量词的名词 错误2：billion, million, thousand, hundred 等都不应该加s 错误3：remained系动词没有被动语态 7. 这个趋势一直保持到2005，在那一年，离婚人数显著上升。 正确的答案：The trend continued until 2005, when the number of divorces rose markedly. 学生答案：The trend continued and remained constantly until 2005, when the number of divorces markedly rose. 错误1：副词修饰动词，应该在动词后面。 错误2：remained 后面只能加形容词，所以是constant. 必备句式4：使用倍数 8. 老年人的百分比在2005年是1955年的3倍（15% 相比5%）。 正确的答案：1： The proportion of elderly people in 2005 was three times the figure in 1955 (15% versus 5%) 正确的答案：2：The proportion of elderly people in 2005 was 15%，three times the figure in 1955 (5%)). 学生答案：The proportion of elderly people in 2005 accounted for 15%，which was three times than 1955 (5%)). 错误1：“percentage…accounted for”永远是错的 错误2：which was多余 错误3：主语是proportion，和1955对比不恰当 错误4： 你可以说three times higher than 或者three times the figure for …或者three times as much as …但是没有其他可能性 9. 在伦敦的居民看到了房价5倍的增长。 正确的答案：1： Residents in London saw a five-fold increase. 正确的答案：2： The housing price in London rose five-fold. 学生答案：The housing price in London rose five times. 错误：在动态图里，一般是rose five-fold 10. 出生率在2010年是1.2%，大概是2005年的一半。 正确的答案：The birth rate in 2010 was 1.2%, around half the level in 2005. 必备句式5：使用比较级和最高级 11. 年轻人比中年人更加可能为了职业而读书。 正确的答案：Young adults are more likely than middle-aged people to study for career. 12. 美国的犯罪率比其他国家要高。 正确的答案：1： The crime rate in the United States was higher than in other countries. 正确的答案：2：The crime rate in the United States was highest. 必备句式6：there be 句型 13.在教师工资的费用上有显著的上升。 正确的答案：There was a marked increase in the spending on teachers’ salaries. 静态图表作文的5个必备句式 1：while引导的状语从句，有时候也可以用and并列连词连接 在美国，开车的人最高，而骑车的人最少。 翻译：In the US, the proportion of car users was highest, while those who travelled by bike accounted for the lowest proportion. 方法2：倍数的表达 中国使用公共交通工具的数字是美国的三倍。 翻译：In China, the proportion of people who took public transport was 67%, three times the figure for the US. 方法3：比较级的用法 美国开车的人比中国的人的比率高。 翻译1：In the US, the proportion of car users was higher than the figure for China. 翻译2：53% of Americans travelled by car, 46% higher than the figure for China. 方法4：最高级的用法 美国开车的人最多 翻译1： Car users accounted for the highest proportion. 翻译2：The proportion of car users was highest. 方法5： in comparison with, compared with/to的用法 美国开车的人是53%， 对比中国的7%。 翻译：53% of Americans travelled by car, compared with 7% of Chinese people. 的5个常用句式 翻译：巧克力会转移到烤箱（oven），被加热和变成液体。 常用句式1：用where或者in which引导的定语从句 答案1：Chocolate is sent to the oven, where it is heated and turned into liquid. 常用句式2：使用before或者after+分词的结构 答案2：Chocolate is sent to the oven, before being heated and turned into liquid.