精品文档读后续写导练2学案“Willyoucomewithus,Susan?too.””criedseveralgirlstoaschoolmate.“Wearegoingtothewood“Ishouldliketogowithyouverymuch,”repliedSusan,withasigh,finishthetaskgrandmother“butIcan’tsetmetodo.”“Howtiresomeitmustbetostyathometoworkonaholiday!Rose,”saidoneofthegirls,shakingherhead.“Susan’grandmothersistoostrict.”Susanheardtheremark,and,asshebentherhead,shewipedawayatear,andthoughtofthepleasantafternoonthegirlswouldspendgatheringwildflowersinthewoods.Soonshesaidtoherself,“Whatharmcantherebetheinmovingmarkgrandmotherputinthestocking?Thewoodsmustbeverybeautifultoday,andhowIshouldliketobeinthem!”“Grandmother,said”she,afewminutesafterwards,“I’readymnow.”“What,sosoon,Susan?”Hergrandmothertookthework,andlookedatitveryclosely.“True,Susan,”saidshe,layinggreatstressoneachword,“true,Icounttwenty;and,turnsasfromthemarkyouhavenevercheatedme,youmaygoandamuseyourselfasyouliketherestoftheday.”Susan’scheekswered,andshedidnotsay“Thankyou.”Assheleftthecottage,shewalkedslowlyaway,notsingingasusual.“Why,hereisSusan!”thegirlscried,wheninedshetheirjocompany;“butwhatisthematter?Whyhaveyouleftyourdear,oldgrandmother?yasked”.the“Thereisnothingthematter.”AseatedSusantheserepwords,shefeltthatshewastryingtocheatherself.Shehadactedalie.Atthesametimesherememberedhergrandmother’swords,“Youhavecheatedneverme.”“Yes,Ihavecheatedher,”saidshetoherself.“Ifsheknewall,shewouldnevertrustmeagain.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Whenthelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________导学1:原文内容摘要情节1:Susanwasinvitedtothewoodsfullofflowersbutcouldn’tgo,notfinishtheworkofgrandmother情节2:Susanmovedthemarkinthestocking,cheatedhergrandmother情节3:Susanwasallowedtogo,withredcheeks,feelingguilty.精品文档导学2:续写情节推理Paragraph1:可能的情节发展从上文情节1和3可推知:othergirlsenjoythemselves,Susannothappy从Paragraph2的段首语可知:theymadeacrown,thecrownwasforSusan合理的细节增加:thereasonwhythecrownwasforSusan可用词汇及篇章技巧可用的关键词:flowers,Rose其它可用的词语:enjoyoneself,but(Susan和她的伙伴们的心情对比)Paragraph2:可能的情节发展从情节3和Paragraph2的段首语可推出:Susanwouldrefusetowearthecrownandexplainthereasongobackhomeandapologize可以详细描述的情节:Susan拒绝佩戴花冠的情节及情感
现可用词汇及篇章技巧可用的关键词:cheated,tears,grandmother,home其他的可用词语:notdeserve,placeonthehead,apologize在描述Susan的错误时,可以引用原文中的相关语句:removethemarkgrandmotherputinthestocking导学3:续写微作文1.她的伙伴们都在到处跑着,自我娱乐,可Susan却独自坐在草坪上,希望此刻她能在家中,和奶奶诉说自己的过错。(用wishing作伴随状语,注意其后用虚拟语气)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________当大家说着这些话的时候①,花冠戴到了Susan的头上。Susan立刻摘下了花冠,扔到了地上,说:“不要给我花冠,我不配!我欺骗了我的奶奶。”当她说这些的时候,泪水滑过了她的脸颊②。(①中用被动语态;②中用flowdown或rundown,注意down要用介词)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.精品文档导学4:根据前面的指导,完成读后续写______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案:Ⅲ.续写微作文Hercompanionswererunningaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansataloneonthegrass,wishingshewereathomethismomenttellingherfaulttohergrandmother.Asthesewordswerespoken,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.InamomentSusantookitoff,andthrewitontheground,saying,“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit!Ihavecheatedmygrandmother.”Whileshewassaying,tearswereflowingdownhercheeks.Ⅳ.根据前面的指导,完成读后续写Paragraph1:Whenthelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods,hercompanionsranaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansatonthegrass,wishingshewereathomeadmittingherfault.AfterawhileRosecriedout,“Letusmakeacrownofflowers,andputitontheheadofthebestgirlhere.”Soonthecrownwasfinished.AllthegirlsagreedSusanwasthebestgirlbothinschoolandathome,sotheydecidedshewastowearit.Paragraph2:“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”Asthesewordswerespoken,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.Inamomentshetookitoff,andthrewitontheground,saying,“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit.”Thegirlslookedatherwithsurprise.“Ihavecheatedmygrandmother,”saidshe,whiletearsfloweddownhercheeks.QuicklySusanlefttheothergirls,wentbackhomeandapologizedtohergrandmother.“Susan,”saidhergrandmother,“Iamsohappyyouhaverealizedyourfault,andyouarestillmyownlittlegirl!”.