古人云,天生我材必有用,请你描绘生活中的一件事,说明

古人云,天生我材必有用,请你描绘生活中的一件事,说明 篇一:2010届高三作文备考讲义 观点论证型 观点论证型:此类作文往往要求考生根据目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。议论文的表达方式以议论为主，叙事说明为辅。一般具备论点，论据，和论证三大要素。 该体型考题提出一种观点，通常会要求考生对此观点进行论证。较为常见的方式是在第二段要求考生举出具体的例子来说明这一观点，即我们常说的例证法。而在第三段中，又往往会要求考生表明自己的态度、做法，在日常生活中有效的实践这一观点，或要求考生给出最佳的实践。因为所有的段落都以某个观点为核心展开，所以我们称之为观点论证型试题。 I( 真题呈现: 1 2005年 上海秋季高考作文: 古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无 论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society. When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood. From this old man,be a use for my talent, you will succeed. II(作文模式: 行文模式:观点提出?观点论证?观点总结 2 模版1: Para1. Many people believe that 社会现象/事实现象。 The truth is deep and profound. As we know, 具体表现一。 In addition, 具体表现二。 Para2. 观点论证 There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is阐述第一个例子。 This is close to suggest 观点正确性 For another example, 引出并说明第二个例子。 Moreover, 阐述第三个例子。 Para3. 观点总结 All mentioned above tell us that重申观点。 But ( one thing we have to notice is that ) 。 In short, 总结全文。 模版2: ? As a saying goes, … //There is a famous proverb that…// Some people hold that …//…is widely accepted today.// … is a very nice piece of wisdom. --- 直接提出本文的观点 . ?There is no denying that …--- 进一步强调观点的正确 3 性 ? If …, …. If … not …. --- 正反论述 ---举例一具体论证 ? There are numerous examples supporting this argument ---承上启下 ? Take … as an example. … ?This is close to suggest… ?For another example, …---总结例一 ---举例二具体论证. ? All mentioned above tell us…//Judging from the evidences offered，we might safely draw the conclusion that…---总结上文，重申论点 . 模板2具体可以表述为: 开始段:提出观点。?? 中间段:对观点进行论证，包括理论论证和事例论证。????? 结尾段:总结观点或表示个人决心或提出具体做法。 ? 这一模板主要适用于论证具体的观点这一类型作文的写作。在许多考试中出现的话题如:温室里的花朵经不起风雨; 终点即是新起点; 自信——成功的关键因素之一 等作文都适用于这种模板。其他可以使用此模板的话题还有对个人言论正确与否的论证，以及包括对名言警句、哲理、谚语等的论证。 4 III、仿真试题 你怎样理解“有志者事竟成”，试举例说明。 IV、范文展示 Where There Is a Will, There Is a way (1) Many people believe that the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(2) The truth is deep and profound. (3) As we know, as long as a person possesses a strong will，he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is.(4) In addition, if he persists, he will eventually succeed. (5) There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (6) A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect from the people all over the world. (7) This is close to suggest that a strong will is a vital factor to one’s final success. (8) For another example, Cao Xueqin met lots of hardships in his pursuit for literature, but finally completed his world famous book Dreams of Red Chamber. (9) Moreover, among us senior high school students, those who persist studying hard and make it eventually also are good examples. (10) All mentioned above tell us that if we wish to succeed, 5 we must first have a resolution and remember the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (11) But one thing we have to notice is that a strong will must be accompanied by a right direction, which shouldn’t be blind. (12) In short, whatever you do, please remember: Where there is a will, there is a way. V、自我测试 1(有一首歌中唱道“Don’t let no small frustration ever bring you down. Just take a situation and turn it all around! With a new attitude, everything can change.的确，你的生活 终究应该有你来掌握(Life is what you make it.)。遭遇挫折 时，消极逃避还是积极面对，你的态度往往会决定一切。请 结合你生活中的一件事说明此道理。 2(俗话说:“孰能生巧”( Practice Makes Perfect)请你 描述你生活中的一件或两件事，说明此道理。 3. 有一句谚语说:与其选择财富，不如选择好名声。(A Good Name Is Rather to Be Chosen Than Riches)请结合你 生活中的某件事例，谈谈你的感悟。 例文1: The truth is deep and profound. It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly. 6 The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English. For another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. All mentioned above tell us that // Judging from the evidences offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect. 例文2: (From Ms Wang’s former English teacher) As a saying goes, a good name is rather to be chosen than riches. Although it’s natural for the dairy workers been reportedly killed by (contaminated) milk powder. This is the second scandal than wealth. Good name lost, wealth follow its heels. As the top of milk products have also in the milk-powder gate, and proved not 7 to their but to apologize and take measures to make up for the losses, but I doubt whether it’s useful name is rather to be chosen than wealth. (186 words) 例文3:“Life is what you make it” is a very nice piece of wisdom. In one way, it makes us think of ourselves as carpenters. We take the materials, tools and imagination that fate has given us and we build our own unique lives that bring us either happiness and success or unhappiness and failure. However, frustrations, small or big, are inevitable in our life, which may easily bring one down. I still remember the dark period in my life when I transferred to a key high school one year ago, I couldn’t adjust myself to the new environment and I couldn’t understand what teachers taught and I often got myself stuck in the endless and difficult homework, which really made me frustrated. I couldn’t help feeling myself an idiot and was ready to give up. Fortunately, I happened to listen to the song “Life is what you make it” and was greatly inspired by the lyrics that with a new attitude, everything can change. I realized that there were always many challenges and setbacks in our life and what really mattered was that we should always be 8 optimistic and determined to overcome the difficulties with great efforts. After months’ hard work, miracle happened eventually. I began to get used to the new life and success rewarded my efforts. The precious experience tells me that with materials, tools and imagination that we have within us, we all have the ability to build a life we can be proud of and feel comfortable with. 现象解释型 1. 现象解释型作文的定义及基本结构: 现象解释型作文通常要求考生丛试题的提示性文字、图 表或图画入手，描述提示性文字、现象解释型作文的基本结 构是:首先描述现象并说明其现状;然后分析这种现象产生 的图表或图画所反映的现象，对该现象进行解释、分析并加 以评论。 原因或相关影响;最后提出建议或总结观点。 2. 高考真题呈现: (2001上海卷) 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、 环境和经济可能产生的影响。 描述现象段 ? 说明原因段 ? 总结观点段 3. 现象解 释型作文模板 模板A: Nowadays / Recently, ____________________(存在现象), which has aroused great concern. 9 _____________________________________________________(此现象的表现或补充说明等). There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Among all the reasons, ____________________(原因一) plays a critical role. Moreover, _____________________________________________________________(原因二). Besides, _______________________________________________________________(原因三). All these above reasons contribute to _________________________________(最终结果或影响) As far as I am concerned / As to me, _____________________________(我的观点/态度等). For one thing, __________________________________________________________(理由一). For another, ___________________________________________________________(理由二). In a word, ___________________________________________________________(总结全文). 模板B: 描述现象段 ? 说明影响段 ? 总结观点段 Nowadays, 10 ______________________________________________________(总述现象) ____________________________________________________________(现象表现一/原因一). In addition, __________________________________________________(现象表现二/原因二). As everyone knows, ___________________(该现象) has brought great effect / influence on _____________________(影响对象). First, ________________________________(影响一). (For example,) _________________________________________________(进 一步说明影响一). What’s more / worse, ______________________________________________________(影响二). In addition, _____________________________________________________________(影响三). As far as I am concerned, (it’s high time that) ______________________(我的建议或态度). One the one hand, __________________________________________________(建议一/原因一). On the other hand, _________________________________________________(建 议二/原因二). All in all / Therefore, 11 ___________________________________________________(总结全文). 篇二:2005年上海高考英语卷作文例文 2005年上海高考英语作文范文 古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)。通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无 论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 Many peiple, especially those who think they are not as talent as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine. Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn’t do well in school, he jonined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You 12 know what? He has set up a recycleing factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying:” There must be a use for my talent!.” 篇三:1999-2015年上海高考英语作文及参考范文 历年上海高考英语作文及参考范文 1999上海高考作文及范例 一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英 语;我认为。。。。。。(观点、理由) Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them. In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of 13 English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.(166words) 2000年上海高考作文及范例 1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想 An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident. One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our 14 homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her. She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her. A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words) 2001年上海高考作文及范例 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可 能产生的影响。 Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be 15 listed as follows. First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believethe tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application. Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces. 16 Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words) 2002年上海高考作文及范例 2002年的作文题提供了一幅图片，图片上女儿在学骑自 行车。奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救 箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车，深怕女儿摔着了。图片 下面有一行字:你们让我骑好吗, 简述图片，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的 感想。 Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child. We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves. We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So 17 I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future? For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.(219 words) 2003年上海高考作文及范例 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信， 谈谈你的看法和建议。 受信人:徐海青寄信人:黄平写(来 自:www.zaidian.cOm 业网:古人云,天生我材必有用,请 你描绘生活中的一件事,说明)信日期:2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003 18 Dear XuHaiqing, You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it. Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations. A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life. I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words) 19 2004年上海高考作文及范例 老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求 你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。 Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’ t know whether I should accept the task or not. Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent. However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps… No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself. Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187) 古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my 20 talent)。通过描述你 生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为 有用的人。 There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society. When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood. From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed.(200 words) 21 2006年上海高考作文及范例 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过 比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。 南方大学北方大学 学费 8000元/年 5000元年 招生人数 20人 10人 优惠政策无加20分 I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one. From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it eolls more students. After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help 22 develop my personality required as an astronaut. 以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容: 1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物; 2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 A Present for Father’s Day The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him. Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends. 2008年上海高考作文及范例 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容: 23 ?你是否会参加比赛 ?你做出该决定的具体理由 Version 1: A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition. Version 2: Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in 24 a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate. There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates. For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself. 25