英语作文写不好,就是因为这些 隐形

作文写不好,就是因为这些 隐形 平行结构方面的错误 这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不 可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。 1、误:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents. 正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen) 误:A great change has been taken place since then. 正:A great change has taken place since then. 误:But it may occur some new problems. 正:But some new problems may occur/arise. 误:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard. 正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard. 【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一 般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文 中类似的错误较多:Our country has taken place a greatchange in many fields. 2.、误:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster. 正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster. 误:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power. 正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life. —————————————————————————————————————————————————— ——— 误:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now. 正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now. 【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例 较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。 断句方面的错误 一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全， 这就成为断句。 误:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. 正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it. 【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的， 只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。 连词方面的错误 作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。 误:One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies. 正:If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies. 【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连 词和连接副词来明确标示出因 ————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。 搭配方面的错误 学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六 级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在 表达"上海交通越来越拥挤"这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与 crowded搭配的。 1、误:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. 正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. 【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic， moderate，surprising等 搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle. 2、误:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. 正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldn't afford it. 【说明】price只 和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular， —————————————————————————————————————————————————— ——— prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive， cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldn't afford it. 由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读 过程中多积累，还需要克服中 文中诸如"速度快"、"价格贵"、"学习知识"、"人减少"等搭配的 影响，避免写出look book或see book 这样的笑话来。 误用方面 学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地 表达作者的意思，而且也会 闹出笑话。 1、误:With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy. 正:With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy. 2、误:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life. 正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life. 【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。 Industrious是"勤劳的"，"工业上的" —————————————————————————————————————————————————— ——— 应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示"产生、实现"，而这里的意思是"影响"，应换 成affect。 来源:文都教育 —————————————————————————————————————————————————————