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四 级 作 文 评分标准： 满分为15分。　阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。 2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。　 5分……基本切题。达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。　 8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。　 11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。　 14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。　 口诀: 漂漂亮亮 清清爽爽 马马虎虎 糊里糊涂 一塌糊涂 评分样卷 2002年1月四级作文 A letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus (14 points) January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr. President, I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus. Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. Those presented suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions. By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service. Best wishes, Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 2005年6月18日英语四级作文及范文 Teacher’s Day (14 points) Teaching is the most glorious and respectable career. On Teacher’s Day, I’d like to express my innermost appreciation and gratefulness to all the teachers in the world. Teachers are the elevators of human souls. I still remember how my teachers pulled me through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first preparation test for the college examination and I was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue! Patiently, my English teacher analyzed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on. My chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learning. Their help enabled me to survive the competition and will surely benefit me in the future. Perhaps I’ll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from teachers. But I’ll try to be a useful person and become their pride.   四级写作常见句型 （1） 用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型 ①As the graph depicts, … ②From the cartoon /picture, we can see that … ③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph, ④The table shows / indicates / reveals that … ⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that … （2）用于句首提出论题或现象的句型 ①Recently , …has become the focus of the society . ②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. ③Nowadays there is a growing concern for … ④Nowadays it is common to hear /see … ⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life . ⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of … ⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that … ⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes … ⑨In recent years, there is a general tendency … ⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face . （3）用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型 ①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to … ②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold … ③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others, however, disagree with it . ④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim … ⑤Some people suggest … Others, however, hold the opposite opinion. ⑥On the one hand, people tend to … On the other hand, they feel … ⑦Some people argue that … Others, in contrast, believe that … ⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that … ⑨On the contrary, there are people in favor of … ⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about … (4）用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型 ①My own experience tells me that … ②In my opinion, we should attack more importance to … ③As for my own idea about … I believe … ④As far as I am concerned, I plan to … ⑤Personally, I prefer … ⑥In my view, both sides are partly right in that … ⑦But for me, I would rather … ⑧My own point of view is that … ⑨In conclusion, I support the statement that … ⑩As regards me, I tend to choose … （5）用于书信写作的常用句型 ①Thank you for your letter of … ②It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf of … to accept … ③Thanks so much for your letter, which arrived … ④ I am writing to you with reference to … ⑤ I am writing to you in connection with … ⑥ I would be grateful if you could / would … ⑦ I would like to know some information on … ⑧ It will be appreciated if you can / could … ⑨ I would also like to know if you can / could … ⑩ I look forward to hearing from you. （6）用于结尾的常用句型 ①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that … ②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that … ③It is high time that something was done about … ④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that … ⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that … ⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed , I strongly recommend that … ⑦It is clear , therefore , that … ⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to … ⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to … ⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that … ⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is … ⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one … ⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to … ⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that … ⒂ Only in this way / in so doing, can … 真题 1999年6月四级作文　　 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 1. 有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的看法 Some people think when we read we should read selectively. That is to say, we should select some books we are interested in and ignore the others. Reading selectively can help us concentrate our limited time and attention on those selected books.  　　Others think we should read extensively. No matter what kind of book it is, we should look it over. We should read various kinds of books, whether we are interested in them or not. They maintain that reading extensively can help to enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge in different fields.  　　In my opinion, the two reading ways have their roles respectively in our reading. However, the disadvantages of each methods are easy to see. If we only read the books we select or prefer, the framework of our knowledge may not be complete. Our knowledge would be rather limited. And if we read without selection, we may not have so much time and energy to be specialized in one particular field. Therefore, the combination of the two methods is more reasonable.  ( 176 words ) 2000年1月四级作文 How I Finance My College Education 1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决 2. 哪种途径适合于我（说明理由） 　　Several years ago new tuition fee policy was put into practice and college students were asked to pay a certain sum of money. And now, all the students, no matter what subjects they are engaged in, must pay for tuition.  　　There are many ways for a student to finance his college education. Most students ask their parents to pay the tuition fee and pay for their books, accommodation and other cost. A student can also apply for the scholarship. Most universities set up scholarship to offer money to the poor students who do well in entrance exams and reward those who do well in entrance exams and reward those who work well at university. A student can also apply for the low-interest loans. In addition to the above, taking part-time jobs is also a common way for a college student to get money to pay part of his tuition and fees.  　　So far as I’m concerned, I’d prefer earning the scholarship. This means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my goal. After all, the task of a student is to study. And in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future. (210 words) 2001年1月四级作文 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 1. 面试在求职过程中的作用 2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是...... Nowadays, in an ever tighter job market, great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant. The interview, so to speak, has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job. On the one hand, the interviewer can take advantage of the occasion to learn about the candidates, such as their work experiences, education and their personalities, so as to pick out the right person for the company. On the other hand, the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up, the salary, the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.  　　Therefore, the job interview is very important to a job-hunter. But how can one succeed in it? Firstly of all, the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance. The first impression is always where we start. Get dressed properly and neatly. Secondly, good manners are equally important. Don’t be too proud, and neither too timid. Just be courteous. Thirdly, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about eh job-related areas. Be confident. Last but not the least, the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background, for honesty is the best policy.  　　To sum up, the job interview is indeed important, but there is no need to be nervous. As long as the interviewee has the ability for the job, with careful preparation and a fairly confident and honest performance, his or her success can be ensured.  (265 words) 2003年1月四级作文 It Pays to Be Honest 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实 Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.  Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot.  Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.  In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. (182 words)  2004年1月四级作文 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 1．建议报考的专业及理由 2．报考该专业的基本条件 3．应当如何备考 December 27th, 2003  Dear Bessie,  I’m very glad to learn that you’d like to apply for admission to my university. Since you are good at writing, I strongly recommend you major in journalism. From my point of view, you are dynamic and always curious about what happens around you. You also seem to be a good observer while having the unbelievable ability of accurate description. You are born to be an excellent journalist! Now I should mention some important points you should pay attention to. First, you should get high grades in the College Entrance Examination, for journalism is a very popular major in our university. There ' s much competition in getting enrolled. Besides the preparation for the exam, a good health condition is also necessary. Go over all your lessons and read some books about journalism, and you will be more confident of your application. If you still have time, you ' d better watch TV and read newspapers. All the above is my advice. Try your best, and you will develop your talent to the full in the future. Good luck! (183 words) 2004年6月四级作文 Your role: a tour guide 　　Your audience: a group of foreign tourists 　　Your introduction should include: ● some welcoming words ● the schedule for the day 　　● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.) 　　You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody. A tour guide 　 Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing. To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day. Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”， I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.  　　The following is schedule of the day. The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China. The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago. In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.  　　Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall. Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states. By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts. From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers. It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。  　　Above is my introduction to the Great Wall. If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.  (264 words ) 2005年1月四级作 A Campaign Speech 1 你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作， 2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？ Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students’ union. I am junior in Chemical Department. Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise. I am good at communication and organizing. And I like to help others.  Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc. I am sure that I am qualified for this position. If I become the president, I will try my best to do well. I will organize some suitable activities for you. I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well. I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president. Thank you.  (150 words) 2005年6月18日英语四级作文范文 Teacher’s Day ： 　1. 向老师致以节日的问候。 2. 回忆一件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。 3. 我如何报答老师。 　　This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers’ Day. The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life. What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soul. My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honor you sincerely. No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude. (160 wors) 2005年12月24日四级作文 　1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3．我认为…… Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery on university campus. During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.  In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, and all of them are obviously better than the scenery in the Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism. In a word, I think the university campus should be open to the tourists. (133 words) 2006年6月四级作文 1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师 2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素 3. 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题 Nowadays, some universities in our country are open to students to choose their favorite lecturers for certain specific courses. This freedom renders students a more flexible and more efficient way of learning. At least, active learning can be expected. However, several factors should be taken into consideration for our students when picking out their ideal teachers. On the one hand, the lecturer’s academic fame and practical knowledge play an important role in the decision. An ideal lecturer should impart profound knowledge to his students. On the other hand, students should have acquaintance with the lecturer’s characters. A good lecturer will set a good model for students to follow, who should be appreciated by the students. Of course, free option of lecturers may bring about a lot of advantages to students, such as cultivating students in self-involvement in classroom activities and pressing lecturers for improving their teaching quality. But some unexpected problems will occur and should be considered to perfect this new reform in education. In a word, serious consideration should be taken to this newly-born matter. ( 176 words) 2007年1月四级作文 1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会 2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3. 我的看法 The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China’s most popular annual television events, enjoyed by millions of people from all walks of life on the eve of the lunar New Year. Its far-reaching and magnificent power exerts great and instant influence on our daily-life in the days to come. However, an increasing number of people, especially youngsters, claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern programs because the traditional programs cause sight-fatigue to many of us. They even propose that the old boring programs ought to be canceled from CCTV. Even though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family. Yet to attract more audiences or maintain the interest of the younger generation, the organizing committee should develop more exciting, colorful programs than ever before. Remember: creation and invention are the cardinal rules in entertainment. (148 words) 2007年6月四级作文 1. 社团活动的主要内容 2. 参加社团活动的好处 3. 如何加入社团 Welcome to our club! “Our Learning-for-Fun” English club aims at helping college students to study English in an easy way. Various exciting activities will be held almost every week in our club, such as English Corner, English Films, English Talk Shows, and English Songs Competition, etc. If you are admitted into our club, you will conclude that you have made a big choice. Firstly, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make our college life more enjoyable and meaningful. Secondly, you may practice and improve your English in a very relaxed and comfortable way. Last but not the least, you may participate in all these activities free