高考短文改错真题

第三部分写作（共两节满分50分）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改1陕西2006DearAnish,HerearetheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.76.Itisabout200milesfarawayfromLondon,andit77.hasaverybigschoolyard.Youcanliveintheschool78.orneartheschool.Theyhaveallsortsofcourse.79.I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit.Iknowyou80.areparticuiarinterestesinHumanRights.SoIwill81.seethatthereisanythingontheirwebsite(网址)。82.I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairport83.______Whenyouarrived.Youmathimafewyearsago,buthe84.______Haschangedalotsincethem,Bothyourauntorlollk85.______Forwardtoseeingyouagain.Seeyousoon.Pat2陕西2007Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyoulife?76．____Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.Wehadto77．____sitatourdesksinsilenceandpaidattentiontowhattheteachers78．____weresaying.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandask79．____usdifficultquestions.Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomework,and80．____handitontime.Wehadtowearschooluniformsandobeylotsof81．____rules.IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.Ireadbooks82．____atthepublielibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.Now83．____IreallyenjoystudybecauseI’mgrowingoldandknowwhatI84．____Wantit.WhenIwasatschool.Iwasjustthewrongage!85．____3陕西2008JohnBrownisaLondontaxidriverwholovegoingtothe76.lovestheatre.Lastweekhismothergavehimtwoticketsforaplay.77.√TheticketswereonSundayevening.ThenJohnreadsome78.forreviewsoftheplay,whichallsaiditwasaterriblyone!He79.terriblewouldn’tgotoseeaplaythatnoonelikedit,Sotwohours80.去掉itbeforetheplaystarted,helefttheticketonthebackseatof81.ticketshistaxi,Perhapssomeonewhowanted∧seetheplaywouldtakethem.82.to.However,whileJohnwentbackhome,theticketswere83.whenstillthere.Inthefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.84.去掉theSomeonehasplacedanotherpairofticketsontopofthem!85.had4陕西2009Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.1._______Shelikeditatonce.Thenshebentdownandpicked^upto2.________lookatapriceonit.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedon3.________hisT-shirt!4.________Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!Mysister5.________wanted^getoutoftheshopasfastasshecouldwhenashop6._______assistantcameovertous.Itw\asturnedouttobeherowncup,7._______thatshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.Theassistantwasclearly8.______asembarrassingasmysister,which9._______forIjustthoughtitwasfunny!10______5陕西2010LastSundaymorning，whenlwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome，Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilm1______withoneofmyfavouriteactor．Ididn’thavemycamera2______withmeatthattime，butIrushedbackhometo3_______get．Unfortunately，bythetimeIgotback，4_______theyhavefinishedthesceneandtheactorcouldn’t5_______beseeneverywhere．Iwasreally6________disappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalked7________outabuilding．Hewasrighttherein8________thefrontofme!Icouldn’tbelievemyluck--notonly9________didIhadmyphototakenwithhim，10________buthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!6陕西2011TodayisSunday.I′vebeeninCanadafortwomonths.ThisisthefirsttimethatI′vebeenawaymyfamilyforsucha76.longtime.WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme,I′ve77.soongotusedtolivewithoutmyparentsaround.Katia,like78.manyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.Webecame79.friendsshortlyafterwemeeteachother.AlthoughherEnglish80.isalittlehardlytounderstand,weenjoychattingandwe81.usuallytalkalotaboutourownfamily.We’rebothsurprised82.thatChinesecultureorRussianculturearesodifferent.Now,83.weareplanningasmallpartyforthenextSunday.There,Katia84.willintroducemetosomeofherfriends,oneofwhohasbeen85.toChinaseveraltimes.Ijustcan’twait.四川2008Assummervacationarecomingsoon,myclassmatesare56._____tryingveryhardlytogettrainticketstogohome.But57._____Ihavemadeupmymindstospendthevacationfarfrom58._____homeforfirsttimeinmylife.Myparentshaveagreed59._____tovisitingme,andIwillhaveadifferentvacation.When60.____theycamehere,Iwillshowthemaroundmyuniversity61._____andthecityjustaswell.Ihavedecidedtobuythem62.____somenicegifts.Itwillbeabigsurprisingforthem.My63._____parentshavedonealotforme,andIthinkitishightime64._____thatIdidanythingspecialtoexpressmythanks.65._____四川2009Threemenwerefishingwhentheangelappearedintheboat66.withthem.Thefirstmangotoverhisshockandpolitelysaidto67.Theangel,“I’vesufferedbybackpainforyears.Canyouhelp68.me?”Theangeltouchedhisback,andhehadrecovered.69.Thesecondmanpointedtohisglassandaskediftheangel70.couldcureherpooreyesight.Theangeltouchedhiseyes,71.buthecouldseeeverythingclearly.72.Theangelthenturnedtothethirdman,threwuphishands73.infear.“Don’ttouchme!”hecries.“I’mondisabilitypay!74.Idon’twanttobeanormallyperson!”75.四川2010AnEnglishladywasfinallydecidedthatshereallyshould66.__________learntodrive.Andaftermanyattempts,shepasther67.__________drivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat,tocelebrate,he68.__________wasgoingtodrivehimovertoFranceforaholiday.But69.__________thenaweekafterthetrip,shesuddenlyannouncedthat70.__________theywouldn’ttaketheholiday.“Howdidyouchangeyour71.__________mind?”heaskedherbysurprise.“Well,it’sallbec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