回复学校邮件
Dear Sir / Miss,
Thank you for your email to inform me of my application status and gave me my login ID and password. I have checked my application status with the account you provided
me. What extremely surprised me when I saw my application is that I saw I mistook my selection on graduate major and college due to some trouble of the online application system. Honestly, I want to apply for your University's MA International and Multicultural Education, School of Education, which is relate to my academic background in undergraduate level.
So, I am writing to you to inquiry whether I can change my application information since I have already submitted my application online.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, your prompt answer and consideration on me would be highly appreciated, and your agreement and patience means a lot to me.
Kind Regards!
Chen, Yanwen
10/25/1987
chenyanwen1025@136mail.net
Dear Beth,
Thank you for your email to inform me of this important information about my application. I am pretty sorry that I have been so busy that cannot check my application status regularly, now I attached my TOEFL score report on this email and send to your inbox, I have sent my official score to you through ETS, it may make some mistakes so that you didn't receive my score until now.
I am appreciating your patient to wait for my TOEFL score and spend too much time reviewing my application. If there is other that I should provide and help, please feel free to contact me.
Kind Regards!
Jiang, Tianhao!
Dear Sir / Miss,
Thank you for your email to inform me of my application status. Now I
Attached my TOEFL and GRE score report, Transcripts on this email and send
to your inbox, then I will send official documents to you through UPS,I
think you can receive them in recent days. I hope it can do some help before you receive my official documents and will not delay my application.
Besides, I have sent my official language scores to you through ETS mouths ago, and I don't know why you still cannot receive them. If necessary, I will send them again.
I am pretty appreciating your patient and consideration on my application. And I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Kind Regards!
Dear Liu,
I attached my scanned official transcripts both in English and Chinese, Undergraduate Certification and Resume on this email and send to your email. I am pretty appreciating for your help with my credential evaluation.
If you there is other that I can provide and help please feel free to contact me.
Zhang, Weiyi
Dear Sir/Miss,
Thank you for your email to inform me of this news, I am planning to submit my admission deposit and documents that needed.
Before this, I want to confirm an answer about my admission. I am a graduate student now, so I am wondering whether it will influence my admission to your school with this identity.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, if your answer is no, and still want to give me an acceptance, I will submit my deposit and other documents that needed and begin to make a thorough study plan in your school.
With warm regards!
Han, Sufeng!
Dear Sir/Miss,
Thank you for your email to inform me of my application status regularly, I checked my application status with the website you provided, I saw that my official transcript from Tongji University is still incomplete. However, I have sent to you through UPS several weeks ago, I don't know why you cannot receive it. If possible, I will send it again, and I hope it will not delay my application.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, if there is other that I should do and help please feel free to email me.
With warm regards!
Wang, Zhenghan!
Dear Sir/Miss,
Thank you for your email to inform me of this news!
I checked my application status with the website you provide, and I found that all necessary documents are completed now, so I am writing to inquire what else necessary materials that I should provide to complete my application!
I am looking forward to hearing from you; your prompt answer would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Sun, Zhaonan
Dear William,
I am pretty appreciating of your understanding and warm-heart, how about you provide me with an email address, and I will send it to my recommenders and ask them send recommendation letters of me to you directly, or what else some better way you have?
I attached my scanned copy of official transcripts, study certificate and some other necessary materials to you once again and I hope these materials can do some help in my application as well as helping your review work.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, your patient and consideration on me would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Cao, Yifei
Dear Heather,
I am writing to you because I hope you know that I have sent my 450$ deposit fee and acceptance announcement to you with UPS in 12th, April, I think you may receive it in recent days. That is, I am expecting to attend your school and further my study.
I am pretty appreciating your patient to wait for my paper acceptance and deposit fee.
With warm regards!
Han, Xiao!
Dear Sir/Miss,
Thank you for your information, I attached my scanned copy of my official transcript in original language, I hope it can do some help in my application, if necessary I will send you my transcript to you with UPS.
If there is other that I can do and help please feel free to email me.
With warm regards!
Wang, Zhenghan!
Dear Clarissa,
Thank you for your information, I have no idea whether you have checked out some records on my interview, and I am a little worried about my application. If you are available I would like to attend another interview to complete the final step of my application.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, your prompt answer and consideration on me would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Wang, Zhenghan!
Dear Julianne,
I am so happy to receive your confirm answer, I will further my steps such as pay my deposit fee, contact MS. Tessa Machida.
However, I am still wondering whether this email equivalent to an acceptance offer, should you send me an official email or paper admission letter to make me relax and calm down. If possible, I would be pretty appreciating your patient and warm-heart.
I am looking forward to hearing good news from you, your understanding and consideration on me would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Du, Yiling!
Dear Jeffrey,
I am so appreciating of your friendly reminder, I truly want to further my study in your school, and I know my GMAT score is almost reached the standard marks. However, I am busying with my undergraduate essay research and some other required graduate preparations in United Kingdom, I am totally occupied with such things and had no time to prepare the GMAT exam once again.
If possible, could you give me a chance and take me into consideration with this GMAT score, and I will improve my GMAT later.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, your prompt answer and consideration on me would be highly appreciated!
Chen, Yanan!
Dear Alma,
Thank you for your prompt information about my application. I took my undergraduate study in United Kingdom, the first year I took the pre-course lessons in Bellerbys College and it mainly on my English language improvement, so I only got my certificate from Bellerbys College and have no transcripts. As to my undergraduate level study in University of Exeter, the transcript I print from my academic office just cover the grades like it appeared on the paper. I will ask the staff of my academic office whether I can get the 7th semester grades, if possible, I will print for you and complete my application materials.
I expect your patience on wait for my application, your consideration my application would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Dear Kim,
I am sorry to bother you again since I have a hesitation to inquiry you about my deposit fee.
I accept your admission to the M.S. program in Nano engineering majoring in Chemical Engineering a week ago. Normally, I should pay the deposit fee while selecting "I accept", which means I intend to attend your school; however, the Payment Status of my page is already showed "paid" before I paid the fee.
So I am wondering whether I should pay again to confirm my acceptance or this step doesn't require a deposit fee.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, your prompt answer and consideration on me would
be highly appreciated!
King regards!
Dear Inez,
Thanks for your kindly help during this application process, I have sent my transcript to ECE for credential a week ago and paid the urgent fee. I checked my application status today, I found that expect my evaluated transcript, there still some supporting materials are missing. I have sent my GMAT score report a month ago, but it showed not received yet, now I attached the canned copy of the GMAT score on this email, I hope it can do some help before you receive the official one.
Besides, I sent an email to my recommenders ask them to send recommendation letters to you, and I am sorry that they have been busy with them work.
I expect your patient on waiting for my supporting materials, your patient and consideration on me would be highly appreciated!
With warm regards!
Dear Lindsey,
Thanks for your friendly reminder, I checked my application status and found that there are some supporting materials still missing. I have sent an email to my recommender ask her to help me complete the process of recommendation.
Besides, I have an hesitation that I have sent my transcripts to you a month ago, but it showed that you still haven't received them yet, now I attached the scanned copy of my transcripts and resume on this email and send to your inbox, if necessary, I will send to you through UPS.
If there is other that I should provide and help please feel free to email me.
Warm regards!
Chen, Yanan!
Dear Patricia,
Thanks for your email and patient during my application process. Honestly, I felt a little depressed after reading this email since I was denied by your distinguished program MS in Quantitative Finance. I know this program is highly competitive and there is huge volume of students from different countries applying for it, I acknowledge that I am still not outstanding enough during these elite students. However, I am still hopeful after reading the contents of the following since I think I may suitable to your MS in Business Enterprise program, and I believe I have my
advantages in applying for this program.
I really want to attend your University since your school is my first choice and the place to realize my professional goals. So, I hope your honored could take my advantage aspects into consideration and give me an admission chance to attend your MS in Business Enterprise program.
If there are other materials that I should provide and help please feel free to email me, your patient and consideration would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Chen, Yanan!