高考短文改错专项训练(带答案)

高考短文改错专项练习1Collegestudentshavealittlewaystopaytheircollegefees.Manystudentshavetheirparentstopaythefees.Somestudentsmayapplytoabankloanandotherswilltrytofindpart-timejobsinandoutofthecampus.Apartfromthis,manygoodstudentcanwinascholarship.Bythiswaytheycanpayatleastpartofthefees.Astome,Iwillletmyparentspayhalfoftheirfeesbecausetheyarerichenough.Besidemystudy,Iwilltakeupapart-timejobbyteachsomehighschoolstudentsmath,physics,chemistryandEnglish,asI’mverygoodattheseimportantsubjects.OfcourseIwillalsoworkveryhardatmylessonsinordertoIcaneasilywinascholarship.2Iamangryabouttheactofdishonestyintheexams.I’mnotsayingthatI’magoodstudentandthatI’venevercheated.Ioncewritetheansweronmyhandforahistorytestbut,unluckily,caughtbymyteacher.Becauseshewasoneofmymostfavorites,therewerenowordstodescribehowsorryIfeltatonce.IthoughtcheatwouldhelpmekeepmystraightA’s.LittleIknowthatIwashurtingnotonlyherselfbutalsomyteachers.FromthislessonIknowteacherswantstudentstosucceedbylearningwiththeirownanddothebesttheycan,notbycheating.3Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’tlivewithoutfriendshipjustaswecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinthefrontofus.Butrealfriendshipisnoeasytocomeby.Truefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstandeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Agoodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadviceswearepersuadingtogotherightway.Thereforemorefriendswehave,thebetterwecanimproveourselves.4Mysecretofstayingyoungissimple:keepingyourmindawakeandyouwillstayyoungallover.Takeaninterestinworldaroundyou,andlearnatleastoneoldthingeveryday.Don’tthinkthatyouareeververyoldtogobacktoschool.Iknowamanwhoenteredmedicalcollegein70.Hegothisdegreewithhonorsandbecameafamousdoctor.Othermanwenttolawschoolat71andisnowaactivelawyer.Youmaysaythatstayingyoungiseasyonlyforthoseliveinthefuture.Infact,youcandoitwhetheryoucareenoughtotrytokeepyourmindawakeandactive,andwhichistheonlywaytobealwaysyoung.5Myswimmingexperienceisextremeinteresting.TherewasatimewhenIswimlikearock.ThiswentontillonedaywhenIwasfishingwithafriendofmineatnearbypond.Islippedintoone.Hadmyfriendnotcometomyrescue,Iwouldhavebeendrowned.Eversincethen,Ihadcometoknowtheimportanceoflearningtoswim.Ididn’tattendatanytrainingclassbutlearneditallbymyself.Strangetosay,Ihavedifficultswimmingatallnow.ThoughthewayIswimlookawkward(笨拙的),atleastitcankeepmefromfloating.Thinkingofthis,Ifeelquietsatisfied.6InasummernightinTaiwan,XiaoHongwasgoingonherwaytoschoolhappilythensuddenlyshefeltthestreetwasstrongshaking.Thetreesweretornupandmanybuildingswereleaneddowntotheground.Evenacarwasdestroyedbythefallenbuildings.Shewasknockeddownbyatreebeforesheknew.Twodoctorscarriedhimtosafetyandshewassettleddowninatentfortreatment.Aftersometime,shehadgotover.SeeingsuchmanygoodsfromthemainlandofChinaandothercountries,shebelievedallthedestroyedhouseswouldbebuilt.7I’mgladtowritetoyou.Itisnearamonthsinceyouhadleftourhospital.I’mstillworriedaboutyou.HowareyougetalongthesedaysIthinkyoumaybemuchbetternow,butI’dbetterhaveagoodrestandtakegoodcareofyourselvessinceyouaresixty-year-oldman.IstillrememberthosedayswhichyouhelpedmetomyEnglish.Withyourhelp,Imakegoodprogress.Buttomyregret,myEnglishremainsverypoorthroughIhavemadegooduseofmytime.Canyougivemesomeadviceonit8OnedayIwasdiningwithmyfriendZhouinMcDonaldwhentwoyounggirlscameinhandinhand.Whileenjoyedahamburger,IfoundZhoulookingaroundatsomethingstrangely.Iraisedmyeyestoseewhatwashappening.Thetwogirlsaremakinggesturesskillfully.Obviouslytheyweredeaf-mutes.Ihadlearnedsomesignlanguagesago,soIshowedvariousgestureswithZhoufollowingmeinlowspirits.Weplayedandlaughedcheerfullyasiftherehadnooneelsepresent.Suddenlywesawboththetwogirlsglaringatus.Beforewecouldexplaintothem,theyhadwalkedoutangrily,leftthefoodunfinished.Theythoughtweweremakingjokeofthem.HowIregretted!9Weoftenthinkinsectstobeharmless.Thisispartlytrue.Manyaninsectareharmful.Fliescarrydiseases.Othersinsectscarrydiseases,too.Farmersareatwarwithinsectsmostthetime.HungerinsectskillcropsinthefieldsFarmersspraythefieldastogetridoftheseinsects.DoesthismeansthatallinsectsareharmfulNo.Manyareofgreathelpfultoman.Beesmakehoney.Withbeesandotherinsects,manytreeswouldhavenotfruit.Silkwormsmakesilk.Someinsectseatotherinsectsthatkillfruittrees.高考短文改错专项练习（答案）1Collegestudentshavealittlewaystopaytheircollegefees.Manystudentshavetheirfewparentstopaythefees.Somestudentsmayapplytoabankloanandotherswilltrytofind去掉forpart-timejobsinandoutofthecampus.Apartfromthis,manygoodstudentcanwinastudentsscholarship.Bythiswaytheycanpayatleastpartofthefees.Astome,IwillletmyparentspayInhalfoftheirfeesbecausetheyare∧richenough.Besidemystudy,Iwilltakeupapart-timemynotBesidesjobbyteachsomehighschoolstudentsmath,physics,chemistryandEnglish,asI’mverygoodteachingattheseimportantsubjects.OfcourseIwillalsoworkveryhardatmylessonsinordertoIcanthateasilywinascholarship.2Iamangryabouttheactofdishonestyintheexams.I’mnotsayingthatI’magoodstudentactsandthatI’venevercheated.Ioncewritetheansweronmyhandforahistorytestbut,unluckily,orwrote∧caughtbymyteacher.Becauseshewasoneofmymostfavorites,therewerenowordstowasdescribehowsorryIfeltatonce.IthoughtcheatwouldhelpmekeepmystraightA’s.Little∧IcheatingdidknowthatIwashurtingnotonlyherselfbutalsomyteachers.FromthislessonIknowteachersmyselfwantstudentstosucceedbylearningwiththeirownanddothebesttheycan,notbycheating.ondoing3Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’tliveimportantwithoutfriendshipjustaswecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingongetwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinthefrontofus.Butrealkindsfriendshipisnoeasytocomeby.Truefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstandnotsincereunderstandingeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Agoodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadviceswearepersuadingtogotherightway.Therefore∧morefriendswehave,advicepersuadedthethebetterwecanimproveourselves.44Mysecretofstayingyoungissimple:keepingyourmindawakeandyouwillstayyoungallkeepover.Takeaninterestin∧worldaroundyou,andlearnatleastoneoldthingeveryday.Don’tthenewthinkthatyouareeververyoldtogobacktoschool.Iknowamanwhoenteredmedicaltoocollegein70.Hegothisdegreewithhonorsandbecameafamousdoctor.OthermanwenttoatAnotherlawschoolat71andisnowaactivelawyer.Youmaysaythatstayingyoungiseasyonlyforanthoseliveinthefuture.Infact,youcandoitwhetheryoucareenoughtotrytokeepyourmindliving或在live前加whoifawakeandactive,andwhichistheonlywaytobealwaysyoung.5Myswimmingexperienceisextremeinteresting.TherewasatimewhenIswimlikearock.extremelyswamThiswentontillonedaywhenIwasfishingwithafriendofmineat∧nearbypond.Islippedaintoone.Hadmyfriendnotcometomyrescue,Iwouldhavebeendrowned.Eversincethen,Iithadcometoknowtheimportanceoflearningtoswim.Ididn’tattendatanytrainingclassbuthave去掉learneditallbymyself.Strangetosay,Ihavenodifficultswimmingatallnow.ThoughthedifficultywayIswimlookawkward(笨拙的),atleastitcankeepmefromfloating.Thinkingofthis,Ilooks去掉feelquietsatisfied.quite6InasummernightinTaiwan,XiaoHongwasgoingonherwaytoschoolhappilythenOnwhensuddenlyshefeltthestreetwasstrongshaking.Thetreesweretornupandmanybuildingswerestronglyleaneddowntotheground.Evenacarwasdestroyedbythefallenbuildings.Shewasknockedleaningfallingdownbyatreebeforesheknew∧.Twodoctorscarriedhimtosafetyandshewassettleddownitherinatentfortreatment.Aftersometime,shehadgotover.Seeingsuchmanygoodsfromthe去掉somainlandofChinaandothercountries,shebelievedallthedestroyedhouseswouldbebuilt.rebuilt7I’mgladtowritetoyou.Itisnearamonthsinceyouhadleftourhospital.I’mstillworriednearlyaboutyou.HowareyougetalongthesedaysIthinkyoumaybemuchbetternow,butI’dbettergettingyou’dhaveagoodrestandtakegoodcareofyourselvessinceyouare∧sixty-year-oldman.IstillyourselfarememberthosedayswhichyouhelpedmetomyEnglish.Withyourhelp,Imakegoodwhenwithmadeprogress.Buttomyregret,myEnglishremainsverypoorthroughIhavemadegooduseofmythoughtime.Canyougivemesomeadviceonit8OnedayIwasdiningwithmyfriendZhouin∧McDonaldwhentwoyounggirlscameinahandinhand.Whileenjoyedahamburger,IfoundZhoulookingaroundatsomethingstrangely.enjoyingstrangeIraisedmyeyestoseewhatwashappening.Thetwogirlsaremakinggesturesskillfully.wereObviouslytheyweredeaf-mutes.Ihadlearnedsomesignlanguagesago,soIshowedvariousbeforegestureswithZhoufollowingmeinlowspirits.Weplayedandlaughedcheerfullyasiftherehadhigh∧nooneelsepresent.Suddenlywesawboththetwogirlsglaringatus.Beforewecouldbeen或去掉twoexplaintothem,theyhadwalkedoutangrily,leftthefoodunfinished.Theythoughtwewereleavingmakingjokeofthem.HowIregretted!fun9Weoftenthinkinsectstobeharmless.Thisispartlytrue.Manyaninsectareharmful.Fliesharmfuliscarrydiseases.Othersinsectscarrydiseases,too.Farmersareatwarwithinsectsmost∧theOtheroftime.HungerinsectskillcropsinthefieldsFarmersspraythefieldastogetridoftheseinsects.HungryDoesthismeansthatallinsectsareharmfulNo.Manyareofgreathelpfultoman.Beesmakemeanhelphoney.Withbeesandotherinsects,manytreeswouldhavenotfruit.Silkwormsmakesilk.SomeWithoutnoinsectseatotherinsectsthatkillfruittrees.高考英语短文改错常见错误：用词错误和篇章错误 用词错误： 1.冠词的错误：a,an的误用,注意特别名词如an hour, an unusual day, 及字母前如 an “f/l/m„”定冠词the是特指。 Eg.After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened. ＿＿＿＿ 2. 名词的错误：单复数，可数及不可数Information, broccoli, meat等 Eg.So that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. ＿＿＿＿    Without enough knowledges you can never learn well. . ______ 3.动词的错误：现在时态和过去时态之间的互换(看通篇时态)另外动词的非谓语也是考查的一个重点（判断主动还是被动） On Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. _____ 4.形容词和副词：形容词和副词的误用。副词修饰动词的原则。形容词修饰名词。另外有一个特例就是系动词+形容词的结构要例外。常见系动词：感官动词：变化动词：还有一个考点：形容词和副词的级也是要注意的。两者之间比较，关键词than; 而最高级是三者或三者以上，一般后面有of/in+.  asked angry if we had finished the work.    ______  5. 介词误用。介词的漏用。这一块难度较大，多背固定搭配的短语。此外像 look forward to, be accustomed to, get/be used to, lead to，payattentionto,stickto,objectto,devoteto,bededicatedto等后面的to 是介词，如果要跟动词一定要变成ing形式。  表示时间的in,on,at at表示片刻的时间，in表示一段的时间，on总是与日子有关 表示时间的since,from since指从过去到现在的一段时间，和完成时连用，from指从时间的某一点开始 表示时间的in,after in指在一段时间之后，after表示某一具体时间点之后或用在过去时的一段时间中 表示地理位置的in,on,to in表示在某范围内，on指与什么毗邻，to指在某环境范围之外 表示“在…上”的on,in on只表示在某物的表面上，in表示占去某物一部分 表示“穿过”的through,across through表示从内部通过，与in有关，across表示在表面上通过，与on有关 表示“关于”的about,on about指涉及到，on指专门论述 between与among的区别 between表示在两者之间，among用于三者或三者以上的中间 besides与except的区别 besides指“除了…还有再加上”，except指“除了，减去什么”，不放在句首 表示“用”的in,with with表示具体的工具，in表示材料，方式，，度量，单位，语言，声音 as与like的区别 as意为“作为，以…地位或身份”，like为“象…一样”，指情形相似 in与into区别 in通常表示位置（静态），into表示动向，不表示目的地或位置6. 代词的错误：常见误用或漏用。如him-her /it-them/its-ours等  人称代词主格：人称代词宾格：形容词物主代词：名词性物主代词：反身代词：篇章错误   一般来说，如果短文的不理解是很难改出这些错误。比如关联词和关系代词/关系副词等。 1. 关联词：常见的有but/however, and, so和or之间的误用。 tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. ＿＿＿＿ 2. 一致关系：包括两个连接成分的一致，人称和数的一致，或者是前面提到的语法一致现象。一般上述的关联词前后比较容易出错。    fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.  _______ 3. 关系代词或副词：比如只用that的特殊情况（详见下），when, where, why, who和whom, which+介词等    Eg.I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China.   _________           只用that的情况如下：（1）当先行词是all, something, nothing 等不定代词时（2）先行词的前面有first, last, only, few, much, some, any, no 等词修饰时（3）先行词的前面有最高级修饰时（4）先行词包含人和物时做的思路 1. 先通读全文了解短文内容。这样做篇章错误的类型就有把握，到底要转折还是要用并列。 2. 逐句先把明显的错误改出来。 3. 利用我们常出错的一般规律来查找隐形错误。在改错中宗会有一、二处一下看不出来，这种情况下，我们要利用大致会出错的地方来。一般来说，改错的地方相对均匀，不会同一种错误出现很多出，介词或动词偶尔例外。 4. 改错题可以一发下试卷就做，因为此时头脑较为清醒；如果做完阅读去做的话，有可能头脑较糊涂，不利于改错。当然这也是因人而异，没有绝对的例题如下：第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）         2011年浙江高考英语试题 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。     I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.