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如有侵权，请联系网站删除，仅供学习与交流【精品文档】第PAGE3页Iamproudofmyself优秀作文展评Iamproudofmyself优秀作文展评结构一：讲故事型，通过讲述过去的一件事情，讲自己在某个方面突破自己，取得成绩，为自己骄傲。1,I’mproudofmyself,becauseIovercametheshynesssuccessfully.Oneday,Iwasaskedtogiveaspeechinmyschool.IfeltsonervousthatIcouldn’tsleepwellatnight.ButIstilldecidedtotrymybest.Ilistenedtotheradioandpracticedhardathome.Finally.Istandedinfrontofthepublicandgaveaspeechsuccessfully!HowproudIam!2,Everyoneshouldbeconfidentofhimself.I’mproudofmyselfbecauseofawonderfulexperience.Itwastwoweeksago.Thefirstsportsmeetwasheldinmyschool.Ireallyhopedtowin.SoIdidlotsofexercisetobuildmyselfup.EverydayIgotupearlyandranforatleast30minutes.Atfirst,Iraninthemiddleoftheteam,butafewminuteslater,Iwasoutofbreath.Tocatchupwithothers,Itriedmybestandsucceededinpassingthefinishline.Iwonfirstplace.HowhappyandproudIfelt!.I’mproudofmyselfnotonlyforthegoodresultbutalsoformyhardwork3,LastmonthItookpartinanEnglishcompetition.IhadnevertakenpartinanyEnglishcompetitionbeforethat,soIwasverynervous.Iwalkedaroundtheroomandfeltveryupset.Mymothersuddenlycameinandencouragedme.Ifeltconfidentaboutmyselfanddecidedtoworkhard.Irecitedsomepoems,rememberedgrammarrulestogetreadyforit.Asaresult,Iwonthefirstplace.Itwasmyfirsttimetotakepartinsuchagreatcompetition.Ithinkmysuccessdependedonmyeffort.I’mproudofmyself.4,Iusedtobeashygirl.I’mafraidofshowingmyselfinpublic.Oneday,myteacheraskedstudentstoperformprograms.Myteacherencouragedmetoshowmyself,butIdidn’twanttoperformbecauseIoftenfeltnervous.AtlastIstoodonthestage,ItookadeepbreathandItoldmyselfIshouldbelievemyability.Iperformedtheprogramsuccessfully.I’mproudofmyself,becauseIovercamethedifficulty5,Lastyeartherewasasportsmeetinourschool.Idecidedtotakepartinthe1000meterrace.Atfirst,Iwasn’tthefirst,Iwasalitlenerous，thenItriedtorunfasterandfaster.Icaughtupwiththosewhowasinfrontofmeonebyone.lateron,anotherplayerandIransidebyside.Itwashardtosaywhichofuswouldwon,Atlast,Itriedmybesttopassthefinishlineearierthanhim,Iwonfirstplace.Ireallyfeltproudofmyself.结构二：对比型，叙述自己在某一方面的变化，过去怎么，现在如何，从而体会到什么道理，为自己而骄傲。1,Howtimeflies!Ihavebeeninmymiddleschoolforthreeyeas.IhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudy.SoI’mproudofmyself.Threeyeasago,IknewlittleaboutEnglish,Ialsodidn’tknowhowtolearnit.Ifeltveryworried.MyEnglishteachertoldmethewaytolearnit.Fromthenon,IreadEnglishinthemorningeverydayandlistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass.Now,ImasteralotofEnglishwords,andIalsocanwritewellinEnglish结构三：议论文型，列出自己身上的几个优点或者擅长的方面，为自己而骄傲。1,NomatterwhatchallengesIamfacing,Ialwayskeepbeingconfidentofmyselfandproudofmyself.SometimesIfailedintheexam,maybeIfeltabitdepressedforthelossofhardwork,butatlastIwouldanalyzetheresultcarefullyandpickedmyconfidenceupagain.Ialwaysknowhowoptimismaffectsmylife,soIrefusetoloseheart.Comeon,friends!let’sbeproudofourselvesansseeabigpictureofourfuturelife.2,I’mMachael.I’matopstudentinmyschool.I’mproudofmyself.Hereareseveralreasons.First,Whatevermyteachersaskmetodo,Icanalwaysdoitproperlyandquickly.Second,IstudysohardthatIdowellineveryexamsintheschool.Myclassmatesalltrustme.Finally,Iamalwaysreadytohelpothers,I’mpatientwitheveryonearoundme,somanystudentsliketoplaywithme.Icangetalongwellwithmyteachers,allmyteacherslikemeverymuch.I’mreallyproudofmyself.