六级作文系列 2.3 - 结尾段写法

六级写作系列 2.5 - 结尾段写法 2.5.1 结尾段落的方法 1. 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 . [1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ..... [2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable ....... 2. 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果. [1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of ....... [2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger. 3. 号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意. [1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendcy of ...... [2]. It is essential thar effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency. 4. 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法. [1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is ..... [2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation. 5.方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景. [1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way . [2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/benefical. [3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........ 6 意义性的结尾方式 --------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义! [1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but also benefit ..... [2]. In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly .. 结尾万能公式 1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论 Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议 Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 2.5.2 核心句型一 1. From what has been discussed above （Taking into account all these factors / Judging from all evidence offered）, we may safely draw （reach / come to / arrive at） the conclusion that …. 2. All the evidence （analysis） supports （justifies / confirms / warrants / points to） a（n） unshakable （unmistakable / sound / just） conclusion that …. 3. It is high time that we placed （put） great （special / considerable） emphasis on the improvement （development / increase / promotion） of …. 4. It is high time that we put an end to the deep-seated （unhealthy / undesirable / deplorable） situation （tendency / phenomenon） of …. 5. We must look （search / call / cry） for an immediate action （method / measure）, because the present （current） situation （phenomenon / tendency / state / attitude） of …, if permitted （allowed） to continue （proceed）, will surely （certainly） lead to （result in） the end （destruction / heavy cost） of …. 6. There is no easy （immediate / effective） solution （approach / answer / remedy） to the problem of …, but … might be useful （helpful / beneficial）. 7. No easy method （solution / recipe / remedy） can be at hand （found / guaranteed） to solve （resolve / tackle） the problem of …, but the common （general / public） recognition of （realization of / awareness of / commitment to） the necessity （importance / significance） of … might be the first step towards change （on the right way / in the right direction）. 8. Following these methods （suggestions） may not guarantee the success in （solution to）…, but the pay-off will be worth the effort. 9. Obviously （Clearly / No doubt）, if we ignore （are blind to） the problem, there is every chance that …. 10. Unless there is a common realization of （general commitment to） …, it is very likely （the chances are good） that …. 11. There is little doubt （no denying） that serious （special / adequate / immediate / further） attention must be called （paid / devoted） to the problem of …. 12. It is necessary （essential / fundamental） that effective （quick / proper） actions （steps /measures / remedies） should be taken to prevent （correct /check / end / fight） the situation （tendency / phenomenon）. 13. It is hoped （suggested / recommended） that great （continuous / persistent / sustained / corporate） efforts should be made to control （check/ halt / promote） the growth （increase / rise） of …. 14. It is hoped that great efforts should be directed to （expended on / focused on） finding （developing / improving） …. 15. It remains to be seen whether …, but the prospect （outlook） is not quite encouraging （that rosy）. 16. Anyhow, wider （more） education （publicity） should be given to the possible （potential / grave /serious / pernicious） consequences （effects） of …. 17. To reverse （check / control） the trend （tendency） is not a light task （an easy job）, and it requires （demands / involves / entails） a different state of mind towards （attitude towards / outlook on） …. 18. For these reasons, I strongly recommend that …. 19. For the reasons given above, I feel that …. 2.5.3 核心句型二 1. The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________. 2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________. 3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above. 4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________. 5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________. 6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________. 7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future. 8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________. 9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________. 10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________. 11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________. 12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________. 13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision. 14. Personally, I believer that ______________. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________. 15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________. 2.5.4 具体段落 ① 总结归纳 In conclusion I would like to say that change is a problem confronting most of us today. The changes which have already taken place in every field of our life are irreversible. Continuation of the growth which has already begun is inevitable. During this evolution there are great rewards to be won—by those who are willing to take the opportunities being offered. ② 重申主题 Admittedly, science has created atomic bombs and produced pervasive pollution. But it has transformed the lives of millions of people. It has multiplied man’s energy, hopes, ambitions and understanding. It has elevated and will continue to elevate man intellectually and spiritually. ③ 预测展望 It is time that the government spoke out against corruption and took strong actions to punish whoever takes bribes or embezzles fund. For present official corruption, if permitted to continue, will not only tarnish the government’s popularity, but lead to its ultimate downfall. ④ 提出建议 College athletics plays such a vital role that it deserves close attention and persistent effort. It is suggested that physical training should be regarded as a required course wedged into college curricula, however crowded it may be, and that a fair share of college budget should be devoted to athletic programs. We sincerely hope that this suggestion will be a commitment that all colleges and universities will take up. ⑤ 提出问题 Old people may choose to live alone for themselves and even embrace this living pattern. But in the deep part of their hearts, they must feel lonely. They need their children to stay with, to talk with, and take care of them. Why can’t young people think of the days when they are getting old? ⑥ 引用格言 Many years ago, a great philosopher Francis Bacon remarked that “Knowledge is power.” This can now be translated into contemporary terms. In our social setting, “Knowledge is change”—and accelerating knowledge-acquisition, fueling the great engine of technology, means accelerating change. 4