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写作教程2课后题提示：页码有部分错误，但答案内容正确。P2.PART1Advantages:Itisveryconvenient.Youcanmakeacallwheneverandwhereveryouwantto.Itisespeciallyhelpfulinanemergency.Itsavestime.Youdon'thavetosearchfororawaittheturnforthepublicphone.Youcanalwaysbereachedwhenyouareneededbyothers.Inaninformationage,itcanhelpyoutogettheinformationyouwantinthequickestway.Itmayhelpyoutograspanychancetosucceed.Youcanplaygamesandsurfthenetthroughthephone........Disadvantages:ItisquiteexpensiveItsradiationisharmfultohealthAnsweringcallsinpublicplacessuchasonabusisembarrassingMakingoransweringcallswhiledrivingisdangerousYoucanalwaysbereachedbyyourparentsoryourbossItmayringatthemomentwhenyouleastwantittoYoumayreceivecallsfromstrangersoradvertisingcompaniesandhavetopayforthem..........P3.PART2havebecomeincreasinglyviolentismoreandmoreimportantforyoungpeopleisthekindestneighbourIhaveeverknownhasaprofoundeffectonourhealthP4.2.toospecificBritishEnglishisdifferentfromAmericanEnglishinspelling3.Thisisnotasentence,butafragmentDifferentcountrieshavedifferentcustoms4.toogeneral,tooemotionalThelocalfoodistastelessandgreasyP7.Approach1:Foronething,theyshouldbalancescienceandnon-sciencecoursessothattheydonothavetoomanytime-consuminglabs.Approach2:Theyshouldalsotrytogetamixturebetweensubjectstheyfindfairlyeasyandthosethataredifficultforthem.Example1:Forinstance,thestudentwhodosewellinhistorybutexpectstohaveaterribletimewithcalculusmightplanontakingbothinthesamesemestertobalancetheworkload.Example2:Thestudentwhodosenotplancarefullyandtakesfivetoughcoursesthefirsttermmaywinduponscholasticprobation.P11.4.Paragraph1:Allinventionareeitherbasicinventionsorimprovementonearlierinventions.Paragraph2:Therewasaseriousaccidentinthechemistrylabyesterday.Paragraph3:Nutritionaldeficiencyisamajorproblemoftheelderly.5.Paragraph1:Topicsentence:第一句无关句：Manypeople.....toeachother.和Andnowadays,....moreconvenience.Paragraph2:TS:第一句无关句：Ididn't...lastnight和Iheardthat....ownchildren.（1）Firstofall.(2)secondly(3)Byandby(4)Inaddition(5)InshortP18ParagraphB:Jackshouldnothavetakenthegymnasticscourse.hefellofftheunevenbarsandgotaconcussion.hesprainedhisankle,afterabadlandingoffthebalancebeam.hebrokenthesupportbeaminthebasementofhisparent'shome,showingthemhisskills.hebrokehisthumbwhenhecaughtitonthebarthepommelhorse.hefailsthefinalexaminhisgymnasticscourse.hefailedtograduateduetothelackoftwohoursofphysicaleducationcreditP19TS:SomehistoriansmarkthecourseoftheAmericanRevolutionaryWarinthreemajorperiods.1.Duringthefirstphaseoftheconflict,NewEnglishwasthebattleground,1)TheMinutemenandtheRedcoatsfiredtheopeningshotsofthewaratLexingtonatdawnofApril19,17752)Shortlyafterwards,theNewEnglandcolonistslaidsiegetoBoston.thelocationoftheBritishheadquarters.2.Inthesecondphaseofthewar,whichbeganafterthesigningoftheDeclaration,boththeBritishandtheAmericanmadeimportantmilitarygains.1)TheBritishsoldierscapturedNewYorkinthefallof1776,andayearlatertheyoccupiedPhiladelphia.2)MeanwhiletheAmericanswereabletoseizeNewJerseyandSaratoga.3.Thefightingmovedtothewestandsouthduringthelastphase.1)In1778and1779severalbattlesoccurredinKentuckyandTennessee.2)Thentwoyearslater,thefinalbattleofthewarwasfoughtatYorktown,Virginia.P22.4:排序：410512371591421181361TS：Myfamilyspenttwofun-filleddaysatDisneyWorldlastyear.P23.5.(1)Then(2)morning(3)afternoon(4)Then(5)Afterthat(6)when(7)already(8)afterP33.3.排序：3614752Relationship:Primarily,theorganizationoftheparagraphrepresentsmovementingeographicalspace.P345.(1)into(2)crosses(3)Inthecenterof(4)Outside(5)inside(6)Onthefront(7)over(8)down(9)linedwith(10)AttherearP464.(1)with(2)while(3)slowly(4)Gradually(5)with(6)Bythistime(7)Suddenly(8)final(9)ending(10)applause5.Prepareandlayoutfood;makethespeciallanternsKeepdancingandsingingovernightThrowthefoodandlanternsintoariverorseaWatchthelanternsdriftingwayP52.TS:WorkingasacookattheVentureInnisthebestjobihaveeverhad.Reasons:1.Ihaveasteadyfort-hourworkweek,alongwithachanceforovertimeifiwantit.2.Icaneatwhateverilike,andigetachancetotakesteakandsometimeslobsterhometomywife.3.Idon'thaveanybighasslewithmyboss;ifihavetoreportlateorskipadaynowandthen,allsheasksisthaticallherinadvance4.Theypayisverygood,averagingcloseto$200theweeksthatiworkovertime5.Thejobisseasonal.P57.3.TS:Workinginanappleplantwastheworstjobieverhad.Examples:1:Firstofall,theworkwasphysicallyhardSpecificdetails:1)Fortenhoursanight,itookcartonsthatrolleddownametaltrackandstackedthemontowoodenskidsinatractortrailer.2)Eachcartoncontainedtwelve32-ouncecansorbottlesofapplejuice,andtheywereheavy2:ThesecondbadfeatureofthejobwasthepaySpecificdetails:Iwasgettingtheminimumwageatthattime,$1.25anhour,plusaminimumofanickelextraforworkingthenightshift.3:Theworstfeatureoftheappleplantjobwastheworkingconditions.Specificdetails:1)Duringworkwewerelimitedtotwo10-minutebreaksandanunpaidhalf-hourforlunch2)Thesteelfloorsofthetruckswerelikeice;thequicklypenetratingcoldmademyfeetfeellikestone.ConcludingS:Ifelthumiliatedbythepovertythatforcedmetodosuchabitterjob.P584.Pattern:ItfollowsPattern1andusesmanyexamplestoillustratethecontrollingidea.5.(1)Forexample(2)Furthermore(3)Instillanotherinstance(4)Even(5)his(6)these(7)contemporaryP597.1)I'veneverseenagirlaslazyasArena2)EnglishteachersareapplyingdifferentmeanstoteachtheEnglishlanguage3)Americanshavebeendecreasingtheirworkinghourssinceearly1900s4)MyfatherhasbeenagenerousmantohischildrenP705.排序：213546explainaSpanishwordwhichhasnoexactEnglishequivalentcourageousbehaviourearthysexualityP76Cause:1.Overamillioncarsareabandonedonthestreets3.BothcitygovernmentsorgovernmentalagencieshavefinancialheadachesEffect:lackofparkingincitiesP78Cause:theterroriststrikesEffects:1.TheAmericansfeelveryanxiousandpanicky3.Thepublicwouldwindupignoringtheonewarningthatreallymatters.P822)Cause:(1)gotdrunkattheparty(2)hadtakenthedrugofAccutane(3)adolescentdepressionEffect:BartJr.'ssuicide4.排序：241365Patternofcauseandeffect:singleeffectandmultiplecausesP88sample1subject:thetimemoststudentsspendstudyingforatestTopicsentence:Thetimemoststudentsspendstudyingforatestcanbedividedintothreedistinctphases.Division；1）PhaseOnerunsfromthedaythetestisannouncedtoapproximatelyforty-eighthoursbeforetheexamispassedout.2)Phasetwoisenteredtwodayspriortothetest.3)Phasethree,thefinalphase,isenteredtwelvehoursbefore“ZeroHour.”Sample2:subject:studentsinourschoolTopicsentence:studentsinourschoolfallintothreegroupsaccordingtotheirdifferentintentionsoftakingpartinsports.Division:1)studentswhogototheplaygroundwhentheyfeeltiredafterstudy.2)realsportsloverswhoevenputasidetheirstudiesforagame.P933.1)TS:Universitystudents'entertainmentcanbedividedintothreecategoriesaccordingtowhereittakesplaceDivision:a)entertainmentathomeb)entertainmentoncampusc)entertainmentelsewhere2)TS:Theaverageyoungmarriedwomanintoday'ssocietyhasherlifedividedintothreedifferentroles.Division:a)theroleofwifeb)theroleofmotherc)theroleofself3)TS:NeighboursfallintothreecategoriesaccordingtotheirdifferentattitudestowardsyouDivision:a)thosewhoarefriendlyb)thosewhoareindifferentc)thosewhohateyouP945:排序：7310915842116Subject:ChristmasgiftsTS:Christmasgiftscanbedividedintothreegroups,accordingtotheirafter-ChristmasfateDivision:a)thosethatarewelcomedandputintouseverysoonb)thosethatarehalfwaybetweenbeinghatedandlovedc)thosethatyoubanishassoonaspossibleConcludingS:ByNewYear'sDay,youhaveeitherused,storedordisposedofeachofyourChristmasgifts6.(1)types(2)Though(3)Finally(4)however(5)Eventhough(6)Before(7)third(8)If(9)Then(10)theseP1064.Patternofcomparisonandcontrast:subjectbysubjectP1075.(1)similar(2)although(3)difference(4)identical(5)again(6)while(7)But(8)difference(9)consistency(10)completelyP114paragraphB:Firststatement:Theinventionofmovabletypemadethemassmediapossible.Supportingdetails:Largenumbersofpeoplecouldhaveaccesstolearning.Secondstatement:Televisionbroughtasecondrevolutionbymeansofthemedia.Supportingdetails:Televisionmadeexperiencesavailabletomassivenumbersofpeople.Millionscouldwatchapresidentbeingsworninorburied,aspaceshiplaunched.AnOlympicracerun,comediesortalkshowsatthesametime.Thirdstatement:You,throughthemediumoftelevision,willbeamemberofa“globalvillages”.Supportingdetails；Inthefuture,thisrevolutioninbothinformationandexperienceswillspreadtothefarreachesoftheworldandeventoouterspace.Ultimately,youwillbeabletoseeandtalkinstantlytoanyoneelseintheworld.Generalstatement:Technologywilltakealeadingroleinthemediafutureasitalwayshasinthepast.P1183.TheenormousimportanceoftelevisionnewshadstartedtheprocessofchangeintheprintedpressP1195.A:ProgramsonTVtendtohaveahighlevelofmaturity(1)fosteringmaturityatearlyageorhinderingmaturity(2)misleadingchildrentoimitatingscenesonTVB:TVserialsordramasmayoversimplifycomplexsocialandpsychologicalproblems.(1)enjoyingsimple-mindedsoapoperasandstereotypedcharacters(2)givingafalsepictureofrealityC:Informativeandculturalprogramsarefrequentlyinterruptedbyvulgaradvertising.(1)toomanycommercials(2)aninsulteventotheintelligenceofamoronP1206.(1)Thus(2)When(3)also(4)however(5)Moreover(6)indeed(7)also(8)Yet(9)and(10)ThusP139sample2 Sample1 Sample2 Topicsentence:StanfordUniversityisoneofthefamousinstitutionsofhigherlearninginnorthernCalifornia. Introductoryparagraph:(thefirstpara)themainideaofthecomposition:Itsreputationisbasedonitsintelligentstudents,distinguishedfacultyandgrowthopportunitiesofferedtostudents. Supportingdetail1:Itshighlyintelligentstudentpopulation Bodypara1(thesecondpara)topicsentence:Theuniversity’sstandardsforadmissionremainhigh.Supportingsentences:studentsenrollfromallovertheUnitedStates,andmanyforeignstudentsstudythereaswell.Youngmenandwomenareselectedtoentertheuniversityfromtheupperfifteenpercentoftheirhighschoolclasses. Supportingdetail2:Distinguishedteachingstaff Bodypara2（thethirdpara）Topicsentence:Stanfordhasattractedtoitsfacultysomeoftheworld’smostrespectedscholars.Supportingsentences；TheuniversitystaffhasincludedseveralNobelPrizewinnersinphysics,medicineandchemistry.Stanford’sundergraduateschoolofengineeringanditsgraduateschoolsofbusiness,law,andmedicineareespeciallywellregarded. Supportingdetail3:itscampuslife Bodypara3(thefourthpara)topicsentence:Culturally,theuniversitycampusisamagnetforstudents. Supportingsentences；Plays,concerts,andoperasareperformedintheuniversity’sseveralauditoriumsandinoutdoorFrostAmphitheater.Guestlecturesfrompublicandacademiclifefrequentlyappearoncampus,.Intheevening,manystudentsgathertosocializeintheStudentUnion‘scoffeehouse.Forthesports–minded,theStanfordcampusoffershighlydevelopedathleticfacilities.Teamsports,swimming,andtrackandfieldactivityareallverymuchpartoftheStanfordpicture. Concludingsentence:Itisconsideredcomparableinqualitytootherlongerestablisheduniversities. Concludingpara(thelastpara)conclusion:Stanfordisnowgenerallyconsideredcomparableinqualitytosuchotherlongerestablished,majorAmericanuniversitiesasHarvard,Yale,Princeton,andColumbia.P1453.GamblingistherootcauseofmanysocialproblemsThefutureofeducationliesintheinnovationofeducationaltechnologyViolenceontelevisionhasanegativeimpactonchildren'sviewofsocietyWomenshouldbegivenequalopportunitiesineducationandcareerdevelopmentEffortsshouldbemadetopreservenaturalbeautyindevelopinglocaltourismP1476.(1)usually(2)often(3)Since(4)ontheotherhand(5)also(6)but(7)AlthoughP1585.排序：837159132612411106:1.While2.inthemorning3.intheevening4.While5.until6.while7.before8.atsixo'clock9.Assoonas10.Unfortunately11.What'smore12.After13.thenextmorning14.next15.Luckily16.until17.atlastP1736:(1)cozy(2)soft(3)Ononesideoftheroom(4)Nextto(5)muted(6)Ontheothersideof(7)nap(8)orange(9)lighted(10)sizzlingP1833.TS:Ifblindpeoplecansensecolordifferences,thenperhapswe,too,areaffectedbycolorsunconsciouslyParagraph1:(Introduction/thesisstatement)Paragraph2:(Supportingparagraph)Topic:discoveriesofmanufacturersExamples:sugar,foodsandcosmeticsParagraph3:(Supportingparagraph)Topic:discoveriesofexperimentsExamples:red,blue,yellowParagraph4:(Conclusion:resultofthediscoveries)P1845.(1)confirmed(2)findings(3)than(4)whereas(5)as(6)if(7)together(8)leadto(9)where(10)adultsP1856.Purpose:toinformdriversthattheyshouldkeepthefour-secondruleinsteadofthetwosecondruleonhighwaysinordertoavoidcollisionorpileupsTopic1.1)speedsover55milesperhour3)keeptwosecondsaheadwhendrivingTopic2.Onhighwaysdriversshouldusethefour-secondrule,notthetwosecondrule1)ThedistanceneededtostopacarshouldTopic3.1)overthelasthalfofthestoppingdistance2)Somepracticalexamplesaregiven3)ForgreaterdetailsthereadermayrefertotheattachedtabletodeterminetherighttimeallowedtoavoidaccidentsP1994.(1)However(2)open(3)too(4)because(5)asaresult(6)Secondly(7)unless(8)even(9)prolong(10)delays(11)benefitsMainproposition:IamnotcompletelysatisfiedwiththefamilydoctorsystemMinorpropositions:1.Doctors'officehoursareinconvenient2.TherearedelaysinseeingadoctorSolution:1.toprolongdoctors'surgeryhours2.fordoctorstosharepatients