如何提高英语书面表达的档次

如何提高面达的档次 本文由qaz96plm贡献 ppt文档可能在WAP端浏览体验不佳。建议您优先选择TXT，或下载源文件到本机查看。 书面表达篇 如何提高书面表 达的档次 Xuzhou Senior Middle School 胡波 暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期， 暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提 出了不同看法， 出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇有关讨论 的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。 的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。 优点 待在家中 外出旅游 花费少、舒适方便、 花费少、舒适方便、 避免疾病的传播 缺点 不能亲身了解外界、 不能亲身了解外界、 不能强身健体 增长知识、开阔眼界、广 花费多、旅途不便 花费多、 增长知识、开阔眼界、 交朋友 注意: 短文必须包括表中所列要点 短文必须包括表中所列要点， 注意:1.短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表 述。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 可适当增加细节 3.参考词汇:眼界―horizon(或view) 参考词汇:眼界 参考词汇 或 How to write? Step1 Read the title Step2 Confirm the tense Step3 Pay attention to the subject Step4 Find out some important phrases Step5 Analyze the structure 第五档21-25 覆盖所有内容;应用较多的语法结构和词汇;应用 第五档 覆盖所有内容;应用较多的语法结构和词汇; 语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 第四档16-20 覆盖所有主要内容 语法结构和词汇基本准确 些许 第四档 覆盖所有主要内容, 语法结构和词汇基本准确,些许 错误主要是因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 错误主要是因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 主要是因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 第三档11-15 覆盖所有主要内容，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的 第三档 覆盖所有主要内容，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的 错误，但不影响理解，应用简单的语句间的连接成 错误，但不影响理解， 分。 第二档6-10 第二档 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，语法结构单调， 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，语法结构单调， 或未描述清楚一些主要内容 词汇有限，有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影 词汇有限，有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误， 响了对写作内容的理解。 响了对写作内容的理解。 明显遗漏主要内容,语法单调 词汇单调 明显遗漏主要内容 语法单调,词汇单调 缺乏语句间 语法单调 词汇单调,缺乏语句间 的连接。 的连接。 第一档1-5 第一档 增强书面表达效果的技巧 1. 减少常见错误的出现 技 巧 3. 使用较 的 用 文章 词 使用 章 的 少。 少。 连 词 使文 。 可以 避免出现较多的错误 连贯流畅。 可以使文章连贯流畅。 词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少。 多少。 2. 使用较高级的词汇 4. 使用 的连 Instead of going out have had Recently our class had a meeting to discuss the plans students ? In ? made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the staying one hand, some students like to stay at home not go out , because ? stay it will save a lot of money. Also, staying at home is comfortable and ? confortable ? convenient convenience and can avoid many diseases. But the bad things arethat students will unable to know the world by themselves. They ? are won’t have chances to build up their strength ? build more stronger body. On In the other hand, Some students supportto go out for traveling. some go Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know it before they and broaden their horizon ,also, They can make some new friends make their horizon larger from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, Each point has its good each things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the Situtions .But I will stay at home as we all so busy in daily life. situations are ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases. But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves. They won’ t have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, each point has its good things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the situations. But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life. 一.减少常见错误的出现 错误类型一: 汉式英语)错误 错误类型一:Chinglish(汉式英语 错误 汉式英语 不少 考生在写英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯的影 响，所写句子虽然语法正确，却不符合英语表达 习 惯。 误:Stay at home is comfortable and convenient. 正:Staying at home is comfortable and convenient. 误:They won’t have chances to build a more stronger body. 正: They won’t have chances to build up their strength. 书面表达常见错误类型 错误类型二: 错误类型二:句子不完整或结构错误 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部 分，如果把句子的某一部 分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。 误:But the bad things are students are unable to know the world by themselves . 正:But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves . 书面表达常见错误类型 错误类型三: 错误类型三:重复累赘 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需 要 不能再出现某一单词，而学生基本功不够扎实， 常常出现累赘现象。 误:Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know it before. 正:Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before . 书面表达常见错误类型 错误类型四: 错误类型四:句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性 一个句子必须表达一个完整，前 后语意一 致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放在同一个句子 里或一个句子表达不完整，就会 出现逻辑问题。 书面表达常见错误类型 错误类型五:语法， 错误类型五:语法，词法错误 许多考生在写作中易犯关系不一致， 词性混用， 选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误，指代不清，语序不 当等方面错误。 误: Recently our class had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. 正:Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. 书面表达常见错误类型 错误类型六: 错误类型六:拼写错误及误用标点符号 考生出现单词拼写错误的原因: 一是以 内发音错误导致拼写错误，二是因为不知 道动词的不变化所导致的。 误: How to choose should depend on the situtions. 正:How to choose should depend on the situations. Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases. But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves. They won’ t have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, each point has its good things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the situations. But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life. 高级 二、怎样使用较高级的词汇 怎样使用较高级的词汇 1.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 2.Suddenly I thought a good idea. A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me. 3.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there. 4. So the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(使用V-ing 形式). On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. 2. He surprises that the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 三、怎样使用较丰富的句式 四、使用恰当的连接词 时间顺序 空间顺序 转折顺序 因果顺序 条件顺序 让步顺序 递进顺序 过渡性插 入语 first, second, then, finally/at last , soon immediately, suddenly here, there, on one side„on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to but, however, while, though, otherwise because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where )ever what’s more, besides, to make the matter worse, what’s worse I think, I’m afraid, you know, As we all know Rewrite these sentences 1. Some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money. Some students prefer to stay at home rather than go out, because it will save a lot of money. 2. Staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases. Staying at home is both comfortable and convenient ,what’s more, it can avoid spreading many diseases. 3.On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them„ On the other hand, some students are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them„ 4.But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life. (accompany) But it would be much better to stay at home accompanying my parents as we are all so busy in daily life. Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the one hand, some students prefer to stay at home rather than go out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is both comfortable and convenient, what’s more, it can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they won’t have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion, each point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the situations. But it would be much better to stay at home accompanying my parents as we are all so busy in daily life. 增强书面表达效果的技巧 1. 2. 3. 4. 减少常见错误的出现 使用较高级的词汇 使用较丰富的句式 使用恰当的连 接词 Homework 据报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万志愿者为之服 据报道， 务。请你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic 请你以“ Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志 愿者 为题，用英语写一篇短文， 应该做什么，不应做什么。短文包括下表中的内容 应该做 什么，不应做什么。 Dos 待人礼貌、友好 坚守岗位 介绍中国历史和文化 Don’ts 避免不得体的言行 不忘 履行自己的职责 不损害祖国的形象 如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应 该做什么。 (内容由考生自己拟定) have had Recently our class had a meeting to discuss the plans students ? made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. ? to stay On theIn one hand, some students like staying at home Instead outgoing out ? not go of , stay because it will save a lot of money. Also, stayingat home is comfortable ? and convenience and can avoid spreading many diseases. But ? convenient that will the shortcomings are students are unable to realize the outside world? ? by themselves and that they won’t have chances to build more build up their strength? stronger body. On ? go In the other hand, some students support to goout for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know it before ? and broaden their horizon ,also, They can make some new friends ? make their horizon larger from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey ? maynot be convenient. ? each In my opinion, Each point has its strength and weakness. How ? situtions to choose should depend on the practical situations . But I will stay at ? home and accompany my parents as we all so busy in daily life. ? are Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they won’t have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, each point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the practical situations. But I will stay at home and accompany my parents as we are all so busy in daily life. Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. On the one hand, some students prefer to stay at home rather than go out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is both comfortable and convenient, what’s more, it can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they won’t have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them learn knowledge they don’t know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion, each point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the practical situations. 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