2016-2010陕西高考
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2016-2010高考英语短文改错题(陕西卷)
2016(全国一卷)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that love .Though not very
big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with cust-omers at meal times .Some People even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that
our business will grow steady.
2016(全国二卷)
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday . We can chose between staying at home and take a
trip. If we stay at home , it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby . I
thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a
lot.
2015
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
2014
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky---- they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a
impressive lesson about gravity!
2013
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
2012
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was
wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 2011
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my
luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
2010
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!
2016年全国卷I
71. that ?where 72. but去掉 73.had?have 74. honest? honesty 75. or? and
76. using ?used 77. becoming前加of 78. the?a 79.our?his 80. steady ? steadily
2016年全国卷II
1.how改为what 2.chose改为choose 3.take改为taking4.but改为and 5.about
后加the 6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为shoul
d 9.thought改为think 10.many改为much
2015
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for
删掉in something
him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,
best
so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I
decided steps insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really
well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was
good when/while packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who
the
made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just?get
to some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits
enjoying
with happy laughter!
2014
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with ,
to came bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was
having
flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.
immediately at Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from
None were
the sky----they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was
删除were或looked and
injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a
an impressive lesson about gravity!
2013
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and
went our
headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.
Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted
After impatient to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a
but was sudden pull at the pole and ?fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my
a minutes grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and
feeling
barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
2012
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit(visited)
Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but(and\so) it is easy to go to(删除to)
anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably(comfortable) double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were (was)the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for (with)my friends many photos
taking(taken) in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. (dishes)
It is such?(a)great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me(mine)
who is going to Beijing.
2011
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came
across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
Making actors
I didn’t have my camera With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get ?.
So/and it
Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t
had
be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked
anywhere disappointed
out ? a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my
of 删除the
luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
have
2010
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at
were
once. Then she bent down and picked ^ up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots
It the
of tea splashed on his the T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!
Her hard
My sister wanted ^ get out of the shop . It was turned out to be her own cup, that
To 删除, which she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my
embarrassed sister, for I just thought it was funny!
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