高考书信作文李辉

高考书信作文李辉 篇一:李辉范文更新版 1. 建议信 假设你是张华，你们班刚刚转来一名新同学叫李明，一时 无法融入班集体，感觉很苦恼。请你给他写封信，帮他解决 烦恼。分析原因; 给出建议; 说说你自己帮助他的具体措施。 Dear Liming, How are you doing? I learned that you have trouble in getting along well with your new classmates, feeling rather annoyed. So, I write this letter to give you a hand.There are two main reasons for your problem. For one thing, so shy are you that seldom do you chat with others. For another, you have few friends here. Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. First and foremost, only when you start to talk with us can 1 you make new friends. Additionally, if I were you I would participate in more afterschool activities. Last but not least, you’d better make others know more about you. As the vice monitor, I will introduce my own friends to you. Hopefully your problem would be solved soon. Yours sincerely, ZhangHua 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才 能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视; 3. 学唱中文歌曲; 4. 交中国朋友。 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are several suggestions for you. To begin with, attending a language course will provicSpeNgBo.COm :高考书信作文李辉)de you with some widely used words and expressions. Moreover, some local books and magazines as well as some CCTV programs can help you know more about our culture. What’ more, it is 2 also beneficial for you to learn some songs, like Above the Moon, which can not only cultivate your interests but also broaden your horizons. Finally, if I were you, I would make some friends from China, in that it is practice that makes perfect. Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help for you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. Looking forward to your good news. Best wishes! Yours truly, LiHua 【2007安徽卷】 假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创 办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。 请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下: 1.示赞成。 2.提出你喜欢的栏目。 3.简要说明理由。 注意: 1(词数100左右。 2(信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3(适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3 4(参考词汇:栏目一column June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.__________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully Li Hua 【李辉老师范文1】 喜欢“美国电影”栏目 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. I think it is a great idea. I can’t agree more! When it comes to which part is my favorite, I would choose American Movies. As for the reasons, first and foremost, we high school students are so busy that we seldom have any time to go to the cinema. Additionally, it will not only provide us with colorful and useful knowledge but also broaden our horizons. Last but not least, it must be entertaining as well as educational. 4 To make the magazine better, I have some suggestions for you. For one thing, the latest movies of each week should be introduced carefully. For another, both lines and background information are supposed to be included. Only in this way, can we enjoy the magazine more. 【李辉老师范文2】 喜欢“交朋友”栏目 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. I think it is a great idea. I can’t agree more! When it comes to which part is my favorite, I would choose Making Friends. As for the reasons, first and foremost, we high school students are so busy that we seldom have any time to make friends abroad. Additionally, it will not only help students from different countries to communicate with each other but also broaden our horizons. Last but not least, it must be entertaining as well as educational. To make the magazine better, I have some suggestions for you. For one thing, our interests and hobbies should be introduced carefully. For another, our email address and 5 micro-blogs are supposed to be included. Only in this we can we enjoy the magazine more. 【官方参考范文】 June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers' Advice and Students' Voice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. In Teachers' Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students' Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies. I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【2008年山东卷】 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学 李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根 6 据下列要点用英语给他写封信: 1、帮他分析原因; 2、给他提出建议; 3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。 注意:词数120 ~150 Dear Li Ming, Best regards, Zhang Hua 【李辉老师范文1】 Dear Liming, How are you doing? Our teacher told me that you had some trouble in getting along well with our new classmates. So, I am writing this letter to give you a hand. From my perspective, there are two main reasons accounting for your problem. For one thing, so shy are you that you don't often communicate with other students. For another, seldom do you take part in afterschool activities; consequently, you have few friends here.Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. First and foremost, chatting more with our classmates will make others know more about you. Besides, only when you be braver can you become more outgoing and make more close friends. Last 7 but not least, if I were you, I would join some clubs, where we can find more common interests. Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you. As the vice monitor, I will spare no effort to help you. For example, I will introduce my own friends to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. I have the confidence that you will adapt to the new environment before long. Sincerely looking forward to your good news. Best wishes. Yours truly, Zhanghua 【李辉老师范文2】 Dear LiMing, How are you doing? Our head teacher told me you couldn’t get along well with our classmates. As the vice monitor, I am writing to give you a hand. In my opinion, there are two reasons accounting for your problem. For one thing, you seldom chat with us, consequently, we don't know you well. For another, you are so shy that you have trouble in expressing yourself. Here are several suggestions for you. First and foremost, you are supposed to talk with others more, so that you can 8 make some close friends. Additionally, you can take part in some afterschool activities. Last but not least, if I were you, I would often answer questions in class. As your friend, I will do my utmost to help you. For example, I will introduce you to my own friends who are as friendly as I am. Hopefully would adapt to the new environment before long! If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. Best wishes! Yours truly, Zhang Hua Dear LiMing, How are you doing? I heard you have trouble in getting along well with your new classmates. So, I am writing to give you a hand. There are two main reasons accounting for your problem. For one thing, so shy are you that you are not fond of afterschool activities. For another, seldom do you communicate with others. Here are several suggestions for you. On one hand, chatting more with us will be beneficial for you. On the other hand, if I were you, I would join some clubs, which will 9 bring me more friends. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. As the vice monitor, I will introduce you to other classmates during the class meeting. I am looking forward to your good news. Best wishes! Yours truly, Zhanghua 【官方参考范文】 Dear LiMing, I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below. First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly.Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities 10 together and I can introduce you to others. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above. Best regards, Zhang Hua 【2008全国II】 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视; 篇二:2014郑州市高三一测作文分析及佳作赏析 2014郑州市高三一测作文分析 及佳作赏析 作文题目 阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分) 近日，作家李辉在“东方历史讲堂”重温八十年代时透露，著名画家黄永玉写信给曹禺:“你是我的极尊敬的前辈，所以我对你要严～我不喜欢你解放后戏，一个都不喜欢，你心不在戏里，你失去了伟大的通灵宝玉 ，你为势位所误。”身为北京人艺院长的曹禺非但不生气，还郑重地把信夹入大相 11 册，在美国剧作家阿瑟?米勒来访时念给他听。当时的青年作家张辛欣在《收获》上发文批判曹禺，惹了麻烦，毕业分配没着落，巴金介绍她到北京人艺当导演，曹禺也没拒绝。 要求选择好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。 [答卷情况] 审题立意: 六大题 18小题 满分60 总人数 实考人数 平50748 48336 这则材料的中心含义是: 从曹禺的角度:正确对待别人的批评。虚心纳言，大度处事;善纳逆耳忠言;宽容;善待错误，人生境界顿开。正视批评，成就谦谦君子之风。腹有雅量气自华。闻吾过，心窃喜。人言可敬。闻过则喜;谦虚的姿态。 从黄永玉张欣幸的角度:敢于批评，勇于批评。敢于挑战权威。 以上立意从材料的总体上把握，均为一类立意。 二类立意只抓住材料的局部，如不为势位所误，心无杂念，批判力量大等。 三类立意为尊敬，谦虚等。 精美标题: 《腹有雅量气自华》《闻过则喜，宽容面对》《宽容是一种虚怀若谷的气度》《包容为帆助远航》《倾听逆耳忠言》《胸怀宽容，接纳忠言》《大度为人，谦虚为学》《闻过则喜，难 12 能可贵》《以德报怨，宽以待人》《你若宽容，便是晴天》《有心胸者，方能成事》《博大胸襟筑辉煌》《闻过则喜真名士》《笑纳批评，昂首人生》《博大胸襟方纳百川》《以宽博之心勇对批评责难》 经典素材: 1.梅兰芳虚心求教，宽容一位老者之批判。 2.铁凝、莫言面对《咬文嚼字》的淡然与诚恳，接受指摘的气度。 3.唐太宗以魏征为镜，明其得失，从善如流，闻过则喜。 4.面对质疑，三峡总指挥潘家铮说其实三峡建设中最应该感谢的人是那些反对的人们。 5.伟大的黑人领袖曼德拉在自己的总统就职 典礼上，邀请了曾经虐待自己的狱卒。他的宽容与善良征服了狱卒，更征服了全世界。 6.胡适一生名满天下，他有一句名言:“容忍比自由更重要。”他从不以激烈的言辞攻击自己的反对者，而是正视别人的批评。 存在问题: (1)审题偏颇，立意跑偏。例如《让成功之花绽放谦虚枝头》(40分))《敢于正视自我》(30分))《笼》(30分，把权力比作束缚鸟儿的笼子)。 (2)泛化立意，没有抓住要害。比如，样卷中《接纳是 13 一种美》(36分)只谈到接纳，《学会纠错》(35分)只强调有错就改，没有扣紧材料“正确对待别人的批评”。 (3)事例论证不严谨不准确。一是事例不能很好地证明论点;二是例证不准确，材料有误;三是例证太长，一例到底。例如《态度》(42分)一文把无臂钢琴师“刘伟”写成“李伟”，闹出了笑话。 《学会宽容，享受人生》(44分)审题结构都很好，但是后两个分论点有明显问题——因为宽容，苹果公司能拥有人才，成为全球股价最高的公司。员工在辞职后的两年时间内,公司仍为其保留职位,可以随时返回公司工作。这个事例是说“爱惜人才”，非宽容。因为没有宽容，夏海峰杀死两名城管。应为沈阳小贩夏俊峰在被城管暴打时,拿出水果刀自卫过度,杀死两名城管,这和不宽容也不能等同。 (4)另取炉灶，字数严重不足。有的文章不谈材料，另外谈对其他文章的理解，有的文章另取炉灶写母爱，有的文章不足200字，没标题，这些文章都在10分以下。 佳作赏析: 腹有雅量气自华(59分) 面对他人的指摘，你是恼羞成怒还是坦然接受,作为一名剧作家，曹禺，他坦然接受。当黄永玉来信批评他时，他不生气;当张辛欣发文批评他 篇三:2015全国新课标I卷高考英语作文 14 2015全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为:假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)，请给外教露西写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括: 1、出发及返回时间 2、活动:包饺子、表演节目等 2015年全国新课标II卷高考英语作文题目是我们在之前的预测活动中提到过的“邀请信”“告知信”等应用文题目，在这一系列中，需要考生们掌握“建议”、“请求”、“感谢”等功能性语句。书信体作文用到我们提到过的“书信三段论”，需要注意的是中间过渡段的用词以及避免不必要的语法错误。 根据题目要求以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲: 第一段:问候+辉式自我介绍+辉式写信背景(去敬老院)+辉式写信目的(邀请同去) 第二段:主题句+辉式拓展句1(出发及返回时间)+辉式拓展句2(活动，such as……) 第三段:我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你会喜欢这个活动)。感谢你(读我的信)。请回信(告诉我你的决定)。 【李辉老师范文】 Dear Lucy, How are youdoing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school.Recently, our class plan to 15 visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to helpthe old there and eich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I wouldlike to invite you to come with us. Here are somedetails about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities suchas making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not onlymeaningful but also interesting. Hopefully, youwould like the plan and join us. I have the confidencethat we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I amlooking forward to your reply and your decision. Best wishes, Yours, LiHua 以上就是新东方在线高考英语名师李辉关于2015高考新 课标二英语大作文的点评及详细解析，我们也会在后续继续 为广大考生第一时间带来其他科目的名师权威解读，希望大 家持续关注。最后，新东方在线祝愿广大2015高考考生取 得优异成绩，金榜题名。并祝2016高考考生备考顺利。 16