nullnull1.以约30词概括短文的要点
2.以约120词就“中学生要不要请家教”为主题发
你的看法,并包括如下要点:
(1)谈谈请家教的利与弊
(2)你个人会请家教么?
(3)你怎样应对学习上遇到的困难?nullSummary:
基本要点齐全。
after-school tutors, popular, now, two major reasons
表述时能运用亮点句型。
存在问题:
1.须强化字数的要求!一般不超40字为宜。但也不能扼要到只有20个词。
2.因要点较多,包括现象与理由,表述时宜言简意赅,选取重点信息。
3.适时适地采用高级句型,不能为了追求优化而盲目使用。 In order to enter a good university, there is a trend that students need professional help from tutors to keep up with study, which causes lots of commentaries.
BMW In order to enter a good university, there is a trend that students need professional help from tutors to keep up with study, which causes lots of commentaries.
BMW1.能运用定语从句,词汇也有亮点,表述较扼要。
2.但部分要点缺失,reasons? Words came that more and more parents are willing to hire a tutor, considering their children’s study promotion. Actually, it is the difficult subjects and the competitive entrance to university that drive parents to do so.
梓雯 Words came that more and more parents are willing to hire a tutor, considering their children’s study promotion. Actually, it is the difficult subjects and the competitive entrance to university that drive parents to do so.
梓雯1.要点齐全。表述时注意了断句,并非只有一句的summary才是优秀的。适当的断句也有必要。
2.句型优化,言简意赅。 Intending to be prepared for the university entrance exams, hiring tutors has become a trend among high school students, as a result of more difficult subjects as well as increasing competition for selective colleges.
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存在问题
1.论述第一点时要注意篇幅。 利与弊都要涉及到。但应有所侧重,为下文自己的表述观点做准备。有同学的分析虽然深入,但篇幅太长,导致下文无法发挥。
2.第二点的表述应观点鲜明,建议在段首就陈述自己的观点。第三点可与第二点组合成段。null Faced with such a common situation, more parents will be attracted by after-school tutors. From one perspective, thought comes that hiring after-school tutors has become a tendency on education. From another perspective, It’s an efficient way that many students can improve their marks with the help of tutors.
On the contrary, from my personal point of view. I won’t hire after-school tutors. First, it may easily make us rely on the tutors, instead of thinking problems on our own. Besides, it may make us ignore learning knowledges in our daily life. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play, make Jack a dull boy.” Just Concentrating on study, we will lose lots of entertainment.
As far as I am concerned, to solve problems alone is much than hiring after-school tutors. Mostly, I will turn to teachers or friends for help, and surf the internet, which will be more conventional and cheaper.
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null As a proverb goes, “Every coin have two sides.”, hiring tutors does have advantages and drawbacks. No one can deny that professional help from tutors will not only improve a students’ scores, but also promote one’s learning abilities. However, on the contrary, it will be worse if a student relies on the tutors entirely. Besides, it may increase a family’s financial burden in a way.
From my point of view, there is no necessity for me to hire a tutor, for I believe that learning by myself is the best way and the most important. Faced with difficulties in study, what I would do is to work it out by myself before turning to classmates or teachers, through which I can improve my
skills. Moreover, as “attitude is everything”, a strong-will and an optimistic spirit are of benefit, rather than being desperate to hire tutors.
To sum up, I’m greatly convinced that high scores are on the base of hard work and scientific help. As a consequence, do it yourself, meanwhile, with your tutors’ help.
德容skills. Moreover, as “attitude is everything”, a strong-will and an optimistic spirit are of benefit, rather than being desperate to hire tutors.
To sum up, I’m greatly convinced that high scores are on the base of hard work and scientific help. As a consequence, do it yourself, meanwhile, with your tutors’ help.
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