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一，大学生消费 1. 现在许多大学生普遍花钱大手大脚，消费水平高2. 有人认为社会整体生活水平提高了，大学生花钱多一些无可厚非3. 你的看法 To Curb Spending 【话题分析】 大学生消费是目前家长及教育界比较关注的问题，它所反应的不仅仅是花钱这一表面现象，而是隐藏在这一现象之后的大学生的价值观、金钱观等思想层面的问题。 Nowadays the campus students seem to have no idea of how money comes from, and not to care about their expenditure. They buy whatever they like for themselves, also for their friends, paying no attention to how much these things cost. Some people say that it is not a problem for college students to spend much. After all, the society is progressing and the life is being enriched. With the living standard being raised, it is reasonable to improve the expenditure of students. There is nothing to blame. 　　For me, it is not just a habit of spending more money; it is a reflection of students' outlook on money and value. The students get money from their parents so easily that they have no idea of earning money with their hard work and effort, thus developing an awareness that they want to get things but are unwilling to work hard for their goal. Definitely, that is harmful. The campus students can improve their lives, but with the money earned by themselves. 　　第一段讲述了这一现象，大学生喜欢什么买什么，从不关注钱从何处来，也不关心自己的花销。 　　第二段提出了一些人的看法，他们认为社会进步了，生活水平提高了，大学生多花一点也无可厚非。 　　第三段讲述了作者自己的观点看法。在作者看来，这并不仅仅是花钱习惯，更多地反映了学生的金钱观、价值观。学生从父母那里很容易就能要来钱，所以他们就不会想通过自己的努力来赚钱，渐渐就会培养这样一种想法：希望不劳而获。最后作者强调，学生提高自己的生活水平并没有什么不对，但要用自己赚来的钱。 　　【高分妙招】 　　议论文经常出现在六级作文中，考生要注意合理表达自己的观点，表明自己对问题的看法。在论述中，不要仅仅停留在表面层次，而要深究其内在原因，才能给考官留下深刻的印象。 二 和谐社会 　　1. 建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势2. 我心中的和谐社会是….3. 为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做? 　　【解析】 　　Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of China's modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, "a harmonious society" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of China's development. 　　But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy. 　　To be t true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as possible, spread this awareness to as many people as possible, laying a foundation for this tall building. 　　文章一开始就提到目前中国现代化建设的目标之一，就是构建和谐社会。一时之间，构建社会成为中国发展的趋势。 第二段从六个方面讲述了和谐社会的内涵：1)民主政治，保证人们的最大利益;2)公平正义，保证每个公民的权利;3)诚信友好，为生活和生产提供良好环境;4)充满活力，确保社会的创造力;5)稳定有序，保证生活平稳安定;6)人与自然和谐相处，实现经济可持续性发展。 　　第三段从自身出发，讨论在构建和谐社会时自己该如何做。作为一名学生，作者认为：和周围人发展友好关系，乐于助人，传播“和谐社会”的意识，为这个宏伟目标奠定基础。 　　【高分妙招】 　　六级作文很贴近国家大事，因为对时事政治的了解是对当代大学生的要求之一。出现一个新的命题，考生应多关注其内涵及相关评论，这样写作过程中才能做到“胸有成竹”，写出来的作文才“言之有物”。 三，醉酒驾车 　1.醉酒驾车增多的原因2.醉酒驾车的危害3.如何减少醉酒驾车 　　Drunken Driving 　　Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive. 　　Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society. 　　In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past. 四，公务员 　　1)近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮2)分析产生这一现象的原因3)你对此的看 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出近几年社会上出现的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近几年来报考国家公务员的热潮;分析产生这一热潮的主要原因;谈谈“我”对报考公务员的看法。 　　【参考范文】 　　Test for National Civil Servants 　　In recent years, there are more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants. Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation. And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention. 　　The following reasons can account for this kind of craze. Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test. 　　In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, from the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze 五，购买彩票 　　1)目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票2)分析产生这种现象的原因3)提出你的建议 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩票的现象;分析导致人们购买彩票的原因;针对购买彩票提出一至两点“我”的建议。 　　【参考范文】 　　Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? 　　Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth. Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets. But why do so many people like buying them? 　　The following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries. First of all, most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets. They have a long-cherished dream of making big money overnight. In addition, there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets. Besides, some people buy them just for fun. 　　As far as I am concerned, there are some risks in buying lotteries. People never should count on making big money by buying lotteries. Furthermore, lotteries to some extent are similar to gambling, so people should not spend too much money and energy on them. In a word, people should keep a clear head when buying lotteries 六，外貌比能力更重要？ 　　1)现在很多漂亮的女孩子尽管没有很强的能力仍能找到很好的工作，因此一些人得出结论说外貌比能力更重要2)你是否同意?给出你的理由 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种有争议的看法，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的态度，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前很多漂亮的女孩子找工作更容易的现象，由此引出争议的观点：外貌比能力重要;表明“我”是否同意该观点并说明理由;针对外貌和能力提出“我”的建议。 　　【参考范文】 　　Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability? 　　Old people often tell the young, “Don’t judge a person by his appearance”, meaning capability is more important than appearance. However, nowadays, with more interviewers putting emphasis on looks and the appearance of the applicants, a lot of people come to the conclusion that appearance is more important than capability. 　　As for me, I can’t agree with this argument. Good appearance is pleasant, but capability is more important, because it demonstrates one’s self-cultivation and practical values. It shows the efforts and the glory of acquiring something through one’s hard work whereas good looks bespeak no struggle of the individual. Besides, maybe sometimes a beautiful face can help a girl acquire a good position, but in the long run it is her talent not her look that really works in her career development. 　　Therefore, those without good appearance needn’t feel depressed because one’s success depends on his capability; those with good appearance have to work hard since good appearance cannot bring a person final success. 七，网络犯罪 　　1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做? 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状;指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法;从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。 　　【参考范文】 　　Cyber Crimes 　　With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses. 　　However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses. 　　As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes. 八，二手货 　　1)目前购买二手货的人越来越多2)分析产生这一现象的原因3)二手货交易可能带来的问题 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈该现象可能带来的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前二手货的交易现状;说明二手货交易增加的原因;分析二手货交易可能带来的问题。 　　【参考范文】 　　Secondhand Goods 　　In recent years, second-hand transactions have become quite common. Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on. Why do so many people like to buy secondhand goods? 　　The following reasons can account for this phenomenon. Above all, secondhand goods are cheaper than new ones. This enables those people who have poor financial abilities to buy the things they want. Moreover, secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands. Besides, Internet provides a more convenient and quicker transaction platform for secondhand goods. 　　However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions. For one thing, the quality of secondhand goods can not be promised and you can not enjoy the good after-sale service. For another, secondhand goods market lacks enough supervision and management, and there exist many dishonest business activities. In a word, I think secondhand goods transaction is a good trading way, but it needs further perfection of the rules. 九，自助游 　　1)大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因3)你的看 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热衷于“自助游”的现象;分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因;阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。 　　【参考范文】 　　Self-help Traveling of College Students 　　So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group. 　　Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal. 　　As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better. 十，信用卡 　　1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用2)分析产生该现象的原因3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。 　　【参考范文】 　　Credit Cards on Campus 　　In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them. 　　The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards. 　　As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards. 热点作文8 十一，名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生? 　　1)近年来很多名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生，一些人强烈反对这样做2)但也有不少人认为这很正常3)你对此的看法是……，为什么? 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一些人对于某种现象的看法，提纲第2点指出对该现象的另外一种看法，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近年来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生这一现象;对比阐述关于该现象的两种不同的看法和各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种看法并说明理由。 　　【参考范文】 　　Should Universities lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities? 　　In recent years, many famous universities lower admission requirements for celebrities. More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination. This phenomenon has become a subject of widespread controversy. 　　Some people object strongly that universities lower admission requirements for celebrities. They hold that this admission pattern will damage the basic fairness rule of education. In addition, they say that if a person who has not enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it would be an insult on college education. However, still other people think it acceptable. They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field. Besides, in their opinions, these celebrities to some extent set a good model for other young people. 　　Weighing these two arguments, I prefer the latter one. For one thing, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning. For another, if they accept advanced education, they could serve the society better. Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities’ efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy. 十二 自主创业 　　　1)现在有不少大学生毕业后开始自主创业，政府鼓励这种行为，而且还给大学生创业提供了许多优惠和便利措施2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前许多大学生自主创业的现象;分析大学生选择自主创业的原因;阐述“我”对大学生自主创业的看法。 　　【参考范文】 　　College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings 　　Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation. The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students. This phenomenon has aroused great concern from the whole society. 　　However, why do so many college students take the way of starting their own undertakings? Firstly, college students are facing severe employment situations. Many college graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses. Moreover, some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own businesses. Besides, the government’s encouragement and the media’s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students’ enthusiasm to take this way. 　　As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings. However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, ability to endure hardship and a feasible project. Therefore, think it over and make full preparation before you decide to start your own business 十三网络和隐私 　　1)网络几乎已经渗透到人们生活和工作的方方面面，包括我们的一些个人隐私2)网络会对个人产生哪些影响3)你认为应该如何保障我们在网络上的个人隐私 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的负面影响，提纲第3点要求说明应该如何防止该负面影响，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述如今网络在人们生活和工作的重要地位，引出网络对隐私的侵犯这一问题;分析网络对个人隐私产生的主要影响;说明应该如何保障网络上的个人隐私。 　　【参考范文】 　　Internet and Piracy 　　Internet has penetrated into all the aspects of our life and work. We can study and work by it; we can find a job by it; we can communicate by it; we can entertain by it; we can buy and sell by it. We can do almost everything on the Internet, and almost anywhere anytime. 　　However, at the same time Internet provides services for us, it is inevitably invading our privacy to some degree. The services on most websites require our registering. If we want to enjoy these services, we have to provide much private information, including our names, gender, address, telephone number and sometimes bank account. Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold. Even sometimes the information will be misused by the criminals. 　　Considering the above-mentioned, we must enhance the alertness when using the Internet. First, when we need Internet service, we should always log on those big legal websites. Second, if the service requires important private information, you should think twice before you type in it. 十四 月光族 　　1)现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光，他们被称作“月光族”2)有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念，但很多人反对这样消费3)我对此的看法是…… 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述“月光族”现象，引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。 　　【参考范文】 　　The Moonlight Clan 　　Nowadays, more and more people, especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while other people object to this kind of consumption style. 　　Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that “the moonlight clan” knows how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. However, other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position in case of unexpected expenses. 　　Weighing these two arguments, I prefer the latter one. In my eyes, though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, in the long term, it is unfavorable to their family and career. Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day. 十五 假文凭 1)目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜2)这种现象造成的危害3)我们应该怎么做 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一种不良社会现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象造成的危害，提纲第3点则要求提供解决，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述假文凭的猖獗程度;说明假文凭对雇主及应聘者造成的危害;从预防与惩治的角度提出解决问题的举措。 　　【参考范文】 　　How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas? 　　Nowadays the flooding of fake diplomas is becoming more and more of a problem in our society. It is reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job market. In addition, there are a variety of fake diplomas or certificates. 　　It is very clearly seen that fake diplomas are bringing great damage in many aspects. Above all, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a certain post, causing a great loss to their companies. Furthermore, it’s unfair that one fails to get his job just because his rival has a fake diploma or certificate. Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading. 　　First of all, companies and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks. Moreover, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by laws and totally exposed through media. Besides, companies should keep detailed information of the diploma holders and the diplomas should be issued with fake-proof mark. Only through these ways can this problem be tackled. 十六，经典名著被改写成各种版本 　　1)近来，许多经典名著被改写成各种版本以供大众娱乐2)这种现象产生的原因 3)改写经典名著可能产生的问题 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述经典名著被改写的现象，提纲第2点要求说明这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求分析这种现象可能导致的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述经典名著被改写的具体表现;分析改写名著的原因;阐述改写名著可能产生的问题，说明自己的观点。 　　【参考范文】 　　The Adaptation of the Classics 　　Nowadays many classics are being adapted in many ways, which has aroused great concern. In those adapted works, all plots are changed and all characters become somewhat watered down. In addition, some familiar characters in the classics have been distorted. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 　　Among all these reasons, readers’ preference plays a critical role. Moreover, the concept of creativity is prevailing in every aspect. Besides, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of entertainments including the adaptations of the classics. All these above reasons contribute to the adaptation of the classics. 　　As far as I am concerned, the adaptation of the classics does more harm than good. For one thing, since the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of China, the act of adapting may ruin its charm. For another, those adapted works may confuse with history. Therefore, the real classics should be presented on the bookshelves to lead people to appreciate the real art. 十七 大学生就业难 　　1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象2)产生这一现象的原因3)如何解决这一问题 　　【思路点拨】 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现;说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等;从几个方面提出解决方法。 　　【参考范文】 　　College Students’ Job Hunting 　　Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation. 　　Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy. 　　Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future.