高考英语作文润色

高考英语作文润色高考英语写作中用到的高级词汇和高级句型结构一．高级词汇1．occur替换thinkofSuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.2．devote替换spendHespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.3．seek替换want/lookforTheysought(wanted)tohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.4．average替换ordinaryI’manaverage(ordinary)student.5．but替换veryThefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.6．seat替换sitOnhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated(sitting)bytheroad,lookingworried.7．suppose替换shouldHeissupposedto(should)havedrivenmoreslowly.8．appreciate替换thankThankyouverymuchforyouhelp.→Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch./Yourhelpismuchappreciated.9．extraordinary/outstanding替换good10．on替换assoonasAssoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch..11．dueto替换becauseofHearrivedlatedueto(becauseof)thestorm.12．cover替换walk/readAftercovering(walking)10miles,weallfelttired.13．contributeto替换 behelpful/usefulPlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.14．aroundthecornerapproach替换comingsoon/nearbyThesummervacationisaroundthecorner/approaching(coming).Doyouhaveanyplans?15．Itoccurstomethat…替换Irealize16．benefitalotfrom…替换learnfrom..17．comeupwith替换thinkofJackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith(thinksof)newideas.18．setaside替换saveSomestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.19．beofn.替换adj. beofimportance/beofhelp替换beimportant/behelpfulTheproductsareofhighquality(verygood)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.20．referto 替换talkabout/of,mentionTheprofessoryoureferredto(talkedabout)isveryfamous.21．cannotbut/cannothelpbut替换havetodoIcouldnotbut(hadto)gohome.22．moreoftenthannot替换usuallyMoreoftenthannot(Usually),themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.23.becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedin24．belongforsth./belongtodosth.替换wanttodosth./wishforIwanttoseeyouverymuch.→Iamlongtoseeyou.25．becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedinHeiscaughtupin(veryinterestedin)collectingstamps.26．morethan替换very①I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.  ②IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.27．perfect(ly)替换good/verywellHespeaksperfect(good)English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly(verywell).28．dosba/thefavor替换helpWouldyoupleasedomethefavor(helpme)toturndowntheradio?29．theotherday替换afewdaysagoTheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.30．employment/occupation替换掉job（就业,工作）31．themajorityof替换mostThemajorityof(Mostof)theintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.32．consistof替换bemadeupofOurclassconsistsof(ismadeupof)50students.33．bewornout替换betired/broken①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout(tired).②Myshoesarewornout(broken).Pleasebuymeanewpair.34．extremely/desperately替换掉very/hard（非常地，极度地，拼命地）35．attendto替换lookafter36．onconditionthat替换aslongas37．approach/method替换掉way（方法，）38．fundamental/significant/vital/crucial替换掉important（重要的）39．sparenoeffortstodo替换tryone’sbesttodo40．manya替换many41．beneficial替换掉good（有益的）42．ahandfulof替换alittle/some43．meanwhile替换atthesametime44．asamatteroffact替换infact45．beneath替换under46．occasionally替换sometimes/onceinwhile47．forinstance替换forexample48．seldom替换notoften49．wealthy替换rich50．amazing替换surprising二．高级句型结构◆It句型①Itwillbesometimebefore…Itwon’tbelongbeforehumansvisittheMars.②Itisadj./n./done/that从句/forsbtodosth. Itisveryimportantforustolearncomputerwell,becauseithaschangedourlifesomuch.HesaidsinceitwasanewmodelinChina,itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts.Itislikelythatyoucouldsufferfrombadhealthifyoukeepsmoking.Itisobviousthattheteacherthinkshighlyofthestudent.Itisanhonortohavethechancetostudywithsomanyexcellentstudents,some-hearted,somediligentandsomekind.Itsuddenlyhitmehowdifficultitwasforawomantogetmedicaltrainingatthattime.Itissaid/reportedthat……Itisastonishing/amazing/shocking/exciting/surprisingthat……③Ifeel/find/think/consideritanhonortobeinvitedtoyourparty.Ifinditextremelyhard/difficulttofinishthetaskinsuchashorttime.Ifinditastonishing/worthwhilethat……Ifeelitnouse/uselessarguingwithhim.Herhardworkaswellasdeterminationmakesitpossibleforhertoachieveherfinalsuccess.④Itis被强调部分that…可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。ItiswhatYangLiweihasdonethatencouragesusalot.Thosewholikereadingextensivelysayitisthroughreadingthatwegetourknowledge.Itwashisoptimismanddeterminationthatmadehimovercomealldifficulties.Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizedher.◆more…thananyother/can’t…too示最高级Amongtheoptionalcourses,spokenEnglishandcomputerstudyaremorepopularthananyoneelse.Jackstudiesharderthananyotherstudentinhisclass.Wecan’tattachtoomuchimportancetothestudyofEnglish.◆名词从句Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.Whatreallycountsisthatweshouldsetalifegoal.Whatsurprises/amazes/astonishes/shocks/impresses/satisfies/confusesmemostisthat从句.Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofindshewassuchafineswimmer.I’mexcited/amazed/astonishedtofind/see/learn/knowthat..…I’mexcited/amazed/astonishedatthefactthat……Whetheryoucanachieveyourgoalswillmostlydependonwhetheryoucanworkhardandnevergiveup.Thereisnodoubtthat……(Itis)nowonder(that)……◆定语从句TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.→TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.Asmymotheroftensays,helpingothersmeanshelpingourselves.Icanwellremembertherewasatimewhen…….Thereasonwhyhedroppedoutofschoolwasthathecouldn’taffordtheschool.There’remanykindsofteainChina,ofwhichLongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.◆分词结构①Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.②We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.③Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.BorninAmerican,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.⑤Equippedwithagoodeducation,heismorelikelytofindasatisfying/goodjob.Facedwithmanyproblems,theydidn’tloseheart．⑥Agreatnumberofbuildingsweredestroyed,leavingasmanyas10,000,000peoplehomeless.◆with结构①Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.②Hewascarryingabedrollandalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.◆倒装句①Thelibraryistotheeastoftheteachingbuilding.→Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.②Althoughwearetired,wearehappy.→Tiredasweare,wearehappy.③Onlyinthiswaycanhegrowtobeausefulman.◆被动语态①Aboveall,somethingmustbedonetostoppolluting.②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.◆其它1.Theactingissoconvincingthatitmakesyoubelievethatitisoneofthebestmealsthathehasevertasted.