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谢芸璐(学号:PB12207062) 91 With the development of globalization, culture fusion becomes a hot topic in today's world. Just like the picture above, different cultures ----no matter where they came from or when they came into being---are all put in one hotpot, which is both delicious and nutritious. A general view that people hold towards cultures is shown in this picture. That is, the mixture of cultures benefits human beings a lot. It is not only "delicious "----leading people to a new and strange world they have never been, but also "nutritious "-----giving different ways for people to understand the world better. With culture fusion, Chinese people can read some post-modernism novels written by Donald Barthelme, while an American or an English is able to play some kung fu. Culture communication gives people more chances to see a different lifestyle from theirs, which they may even not image in the past. What's more, as economic and political playing an important part in accelerate the integration of different nation's culture, people will get a new horizon to our world. For instance, there are more and more Confucius Institutes founding in everywhere of the world, letting foreigners understand life and society in "ren " and "li ". At the same time, the number of Chinese who believe in Christianity is increasing day by day, and they can see the world in a different way compared to the people who believe in Buddhism. In my opinion, the trend to culture fusion is unable to hinder. In order to adapt to the developing society and the changing world, we should actively accept it. If we make ourselves understand culture fusion better, we are more likely to have a wonderful world in our life. 文中词汇达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨 With the development of globalization, culture fusion has become a hot topic in today's world. Just like the picture above, different cultures ----no matter where they came from or when they came into being---are all put in one hotpot, which is both delicious and nutritious. A general view that people hold about cultures is shown in this picture. That is, the mixture of cultures benefits human beings a lot. It is not only "delicious "----leading people to a new and strange world they have never been, but also "nutritious "-----giving different ways for people to understand the world better.” With culture fusion, Chinese people can read some post-modernist novels written by Donald Barthelme, while an American or an English reader is able to enjoy some kung fu. Cultural communication gives people more chances to see a different lifestyle from theirs, which they might not have even imaged in the past. What's more, as economy and politics play an important part in accelerating the integration of different cultures, people will get a new horizon of our world. For instance, there are more and more Confucius Institutes founded everywhere in the world, allowing foreigners to understand the life and society in "ren " and "li ". At the same time, the number of Chinese who believe in Christianity is increasing day by day, and they can see the world in a different way compared to the people who believe in Buddhism. In my opinion, the trend to culture fusion is unable to hinder. In order to adapt to the developing society and the changing world, we should actively accept it. If we make ourselves understand culture fusion better, we are more likely to have a wonderful world in our life. 子曰：「人而不仁，如礼何？」人而不仁，如乐何？ The Master said, "If a man be without the virtues proper to humanity, what has he to do with the rites of propriety? If a man be without the virtues proper to humanity, what has he to do with music?" As is vividly described from the picture, the chafing dish is filled with various culture, which seems to be delicious, however, we are supposed to figure out whether it is poisonous or not before we decided to take it. With the rapid development of our society, there has been everincreasing evidence that we live in a time of diverse culture. to some extent, this means that we have the opportunity to learn more an enjoy the mixture of different culture. however, the fact that not every culture suits everyone. Apart from the fact that some individuals may be immersed in unhealthy culture, we are at the risk of losing our own culture. personaly, it is strongly recommended that we should take it seriously. on the one hand , we should give priority to the culture which has positive effects on both families and societies. To sum up , we now should understand the significance of keeping a healthy culture environment more than ever before. if so , wr are bound to benefit a lot from it. 作者能较多样地使用词汇，学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；有效的运用了一些复杂句；结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用 学生:张腾飞(学号:PB12207045) As is vividly described from the picture, the pot is filled with various cultures, which seems to be delicious, however, we are supposed to figure out whether it is poisonous or not before we decide to take it. With the rapid development of our society, there has been everincreasing evidence that we live in a time of diverse cultures. To some extent, this means that we have the opportunity to learn more and enjoy the mixture of different cultures. However, it is a fact that not everyone can accept different cultures. Apart from the fact that some individuals may be immersed in an unhealthy culture, we are at the risk of losing our own culture. Personaly, it is strongly recommended that we should take it seriously. On the one hand , we should give priority to the culture which has positive effects on both families and societies. To sum up , we now should understand the significance of keeping a healthy cultural environment more than ever before. If so , wr are bound to benefit a lot from it. A Tasty and healthy dish – culture hotpot As is shown in the picture, a hotpot is in stew, giving out steam and setting my saliva glands watering. It symbolizes that a nation nurtured with cultural diversity will be strong as it can absorb nutrients from the spiritual food from the tasty and healthy hotpot of different cultures. It is tasty because in it you can find something new in the pot. Men have never limited themselves to a monotonous diet, always trying to find new foods to fill in their stomach and nourish their body, sometimes even at the risk of their life. Because of this spirit, we have come up with many kinds of tasty food in China, such as Sichuan cuisine, Guandong Cuisine, Anhui Cuisine, etc. All of the cuisines have come into being because our ancestors had the courage to taste something new. Now we put different cultures into one pot so that we can have different cultural elements to satisfy ourselves. As a result the pot has become a tasty dish that many people enjoy today. As is the case with different foods which have different nutrients in them, different cultures have their contributions to make to a healthy culture. In China’s history, we enjoyed a strong culture in Tang Culture, which blended with practically all the neighboring cultures. Today, by opening to the outside world, China is becoming strong again. It is human nature that we want to taste new foods because it is beneficial to our health. In the same way, if we dare to assimilate nutritious elements from other cultures, our country will be prosperous and powerful. Internet: As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in the middle of the cartoon stands a hot pot, containing many Chinese culture symbols, such as Beijing opera, Daoism, and some foreign cultural symbols, etc. How impressive the drawing is in describing the common phenomenon that Chinese culture is becoming increasingly integrated into the world. The drawer’s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It holds to be apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive phenomenon with regard to culture. When it come to culture, its great impacts and benefits cant be too estimated. As China opens to the outside world, our traditional culture is embracing the foreign couture, thus making our Chinese culture more diversified, colorful and internationalized just like a melting pot What the picture conveys goes far beyond this. The fact that people from different countries are attracted to each other, indicating that to some extent different cultures can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally. Or put it in another way, Chinese unique culture can become international through worldwide cultural changes. Since the trend of globalization becomes irresistible, cultural integration can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship among different countries In my personal sense, Chinese national culture as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished. Meanwhile, there are good reasons to embrace foreign cultures on the ground that those ideas from other cultures can provide different perspectives for us to observe the world in the long run. However, confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side Only in this way can we promote cultural integration positively, this making our motherland dimensional, colorful and vigorous Syllabus: A Hot Pot of Cultures, Both Delicious and Nutritious. In the picture above is a large hot pot. But different from the traditional Chinese hot pot, in which you see beef or lamb, luncheon meat, mushrooms, and a variety of vegetables, in this hot pot are various “cultural food stuffs” of both Chinese and foreign origins: Confucius, Aristotle, and Shakespeare; Taoism, Greek mythology, etc. What lies behind the picture, or “buried “ in the hot pot, is clear: for the construction of the Chinese culture now and the future, materials of both Chinese and foreign features are indispensable. We are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over the media but also seen and felt in the reality of our daily life. No nation or country can maintain its well-being by living on and by itself. The history of China in the last half of the 20th centaury has provided a whole pack of vivid and convincing experiences, both of successes and failures, in that consideration. Only from the various and varied sources of the other nations, together that of with our own, can we obtain sufficient nutriments for a Chinese culture worth her pride and her leadership in the present and the future world.