2009年北京高考英语书面表达部分属于

2009年北京高考英语书面达部分属于 2009年北京高考英语书面表达部分属于“常规命题”。作文难度适中，易于下笔。但是，若求卷面文笔畅达、优美，稳获接近满分的成绩，还需细致的作文培训。 下面，就情景作文的四幅图，我使用“4步写作法”，展示高分写作。 “4步写作法”，即“挖掘画面要点”、“英文描述要点”、“初步扩点成句”和“美化句型结构”等4大应试写作步骤。 „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. 第一幅图 ? 第1步:挖掘画面要点 【按】:下笔情景作文，首先要善于挖掘画面要点。画面要点分为“显性要点”和“隐性要点”。 第一幅图的显性要点: 4月12日晨、班级活动、骑车植树、乡间小道 第一幅图的隐性要点: 朝阳斜洒、大家笑语欢声„„ 第2步:英文描述要点 【按】:要点纷繁，捡最关键的写，捡你会写的写。尤其注意动词时态～ 4月12日晨 = on the morning of the 12th of April 班级活动、白天外出 = our class organized a day trip 骑车、乡间小道 = rode bicycle along a country lane 植树 = planted trees 大家笑语欢声 = talked and laughed together, and shared the pleasant moment with each other 朝阳斜洒 = the sun slanted across the field 第3步:初步扩点成句 【按】:将众多要点连接成句，我称之为“扩点成句”。 On the morning of the 12th of April, our class organized a day trip to plant trees. The sun slanted across the field and we rode bicycle along the country lane. We were talking and laughing together. 第4步:美化句型结构 【按】:第4步最能凸显考生实力。你要在第3步基础上，利用平日学过的“独立结构”、“分 词结构”、“定语从句”等知识，灵活驾驭句型，写出具有浓郁“英语味道”的佳句妙语。 On the morning of the 12th of April, our class organized a day trip to plant trees. With the sun slanting across the field, we rode bicycle along the country lane, talking and laughing together, sharing the pleasant moment with each other. „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. ? 第二幅图 第1步:挖掘画面要点 【按】:下笔情景作文，首先要善于挖掘画面要点。画面要点分成“显性要点”和“隐性要点”。 第二幅图的显性要点: 到地方了、开始干活、挖洞、栽树、新树浇水 第二幅图的隐性要点: 自由分工、热火朝天„„ 第2步:英文描述要点 【按】:要点纷繁，捡最关键的写，捡你会写的写。尤其注意动词时态～ 到地方了 = reached a suitable spot 开始干活 = began to carry out the task 挖洞 = dug a hole 载树 = put young trees into the soil 浇水 = watered the young trees 自由分工 = self-appointed tasks 热火朝天 = we were full of enthusiasm 第3步:初步扩点成句 【按】:将众多要点连接成句，我称之为“扩点成句”。 We reached a suitable spot, and began to carry out the task. The tasks were self-appointed. Some were carrying young trees; some were digging holes and planting young trees. Others were watering them. We were full of enthusiasm. 第4步:美化句型结构 【按】:第4步最能凸显考生实力。你要在第3步基础上，利用平日学过的“独立结构”、“分 词结构”、“定语从句”等知识，灵活驾驭句型，写出具有浓郁“英语味道”的佳句妙语。 Having reached a suitable spot, we began to carry out the tasks which were self-appointed. Some were carrying young trees; some were digging holes and planting young trees. Others were watering them. Full of enthusiasm, we did a good job in greening the suburbs. „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. ? 第三幅图 第1步:挖掘画面要点 【按】:下笔情景作文，首先要善于挖掘画面要点。画面要点分成“显性要点”和“隐性要 点”。 第三幅图的显性要点: 干完活了、立警示牌 第三幅图的隐性要点: 油漆牌子、„„ 第2步:英文描述要点 【按】:要点纷繁，捡最关键的写，捡你会写的写。尤其注意动词时态～ 干完活了 = completed the task 立警示牌 = put up a sign 油漆牌子 = a painted sign 第3步:初步扩点成句 【按】:将众多要点连接成句，我称之为“扩点成句”。 We completed the task, and put up a painted sign. The sign reminded people about protecting the young trees. 第4步:美化句型结构 【按】:第4步最能凸显考生实力。你要在第3步基础上，利用平日学过的“独立结构”、“分词结构”、“定语从句”等知识，灵活驾驭句型，写出具有浓郁“英语味道”的佳句妙语。 After we had completed the task, we put up a painted sign which reminded people about protecting the young trees. „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. ? 第四幅图 第1步:挖掘画面要点 【按】:下笔情景作文，首先要善于挖掘画面要点。画面要点分成“显性要点”和“隐性要点”。 第四幅图的显性要点: 集体照、摆姿势 第四幅图的隐性要点: 辛劳后的兴奋„„ 第2步:英文描述要点 【按】:要点纷繁，捡最关键的写，捡你会写的写。尤其注意动词时态～ 集体照 = group photo 摆姿势 = posed for a photo 辛劳后的兴奋 = the excitement of the green action 第3步:初步扩点成句 【按】:经过第2步，就该将众多要点连接成句，我称之为“扩点成句”。 Before leaving, we posed for a group photo. The photo captured the excitement of the green action. 第4步:美化句型结构 【按】:第4步最能凸显考生实力。你要在第3步基础上，利用平日学过的“独立结构”、“分 词结构”、“定语从句”等知识，灵活驾驭句型，写出具有浓郁“英语味道”的佳句妙语。 Before leaving, we posed for a group photo which captured the excitement of the green action. „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. ? 全篇通览 Green Action in Our Class On the morning of the 12th of April, our class organized a day trip to plant trees. With the sun slanting across the field, we rode bicycle along the country lane, talking and laughing together, sharing the pleasant moment with each other. Having reached a suitable spot, we began to carry out the tasks which were self-appointed. Some were carrying young trees; some were digging holes and planting young trees. Others were watering them. Full of enthusiasm, we did a good job in greening the suburbs. After we had completed the task, we put up a painted sign which reminded people about protecting the young trees. Before leaving, we posed for a group photo which captured the excitement of the green action. „„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„.. ? 踩分亮点统计 纵览范文，共计篇8个句子。 为求英文句子开端之变化，由介词(On, With, Before)起头的句子计3个;由分词结构(Having reached, Full of enthusiasm)起头的句子计2个。 全文共计3个定语从句，分别是: the tasks which were self-appointed a painted sign which reminded people about… a group photo which captured the excitement of…