现代生活节奏紧张,忙碌使许多人感到疲惫不堪,但忙碌对生

现代生活节奏紧张，忙碌使许多人感到疲惫不堪，但忙碌对生活却有着十分重要的 意义。孰 ，孰不知“业精于勤”“勤有三益”不闻“勤能补拙” ，Importance of Being BusySometimes life becomes so busy that you feel as if you are the only person to whom the wholeworld has been merciless and that you are the only person who is working harder than anyone else.Yes the grass on the other side of the fence is always greener and fresher.However the more things one has to do or one is into the greater the involvement in a mentalphysical or social way in these things.? Due to this one’s own personal problems are out of ssight because all the time one’ mind is thinking of completing the undertaken tasks.? Problemsonce they are out of sight are out of mind.Each thing that we do adds a new dimension to our personality. It shapes our thinking and makesus more organized experienced knowledgeable and creative. The time and sweat that we put ineveryday into our tasks is the brick and mortar of our future. So friends it is always better to bebusy rather than idle. Now hasn’t everyone heard that an idle mind is the devil’s workshopBehind every successful man is a devotedly followed busy schedule rather than a woman.200 words行文点评文章结构总分总。首句使用了 so ... that 句 型，强调现代生活的忙碌程度。第二句用 grass 作比喻支持了首句。第二段以 However 开始，笔锋一转，指出忙碌使一个人投入到所做的每一件都会对我们有好 处，并引用谚语 an idle mind is the devil’s workshop，从反面说明闲散的危害。结尾 以改编名言的形式画龙点睛。文章短小精炼，正文中没有出现 important 或 importance 等词，却将忙碌的重要性论述得合情合理，水到渠成。文章使用比喻、 谚语等写作手法使语言生动活泼，句式多变新颖，如第二段首句使用 the more the greater 句型，不仅在上强调了第 3 段首可而且在可式上显得有 所 变 化 ， 避 无 单一 。 第 三 段第 二 句 中 则 以四 个 并 列 的形 容 词 organized experiencedknowledgeable and creative 深化观点。好文妙译忙碌的重要性有时候生活 变?萌绱朔泵灾劣谀憔醯梅路鹉闶俏?灰桓鍪澜缍阅阄耷榈娜耍夷闶鞘澜 缟衔?灰桓霰人ぷ鞫夹量嗟娜恕,娜罚诩曳疾葑苁歉獭?孪省,欢桓 鋈嗽接惺虑橐龌蛘谧觯度氲秸庑?虑橹械木?辶蜕缃痪驮蕉唷,纱 耍桓鋈司涂床坏阶约旱母鋈宋侍饬耍蛭男睦镒苁窃谙胱湃绾瓮瓿沙械,娜 挝瘛,侍庖坏?鄄患耍囊簿筒环沉恕,颐亲龅拿考露蓟崽嵘颐堑娜烁聍攘 Α,茉煳颐堑乃枷耄梦颐歉咦橹裕芯椋陡?哺叽丛炝Α, 颐敲刻煳瓿扇挝袼氖奔浜退鞯暮顾褪墙ㄖ颐俏蠢吹囊蛔?煌摺,虼耍 笥衙牵底鼙任匏率潞谩,蠹也皇嵌继坝问趾孟械耐纺跃褪悄Ч淼淖鞣 弧闭饩浠奥鹈扛龀晒δ腥说谋澈笫且徽啪ぞひ狄档姆泵Φ娜粘瘫恚皇且桓雠 恕,驶阏遄胢erciless a. 无慈悲心的，残忍的undertake vt. 承担，担任，着手作答应， 保证dimension n. 方面，特点尺度，深度面积creative a. 创造性的，有创造力的mortar n. 砂浆，灰浆devotedly ad. 忠实的，一心一意的schedule n. 时间表，进度表，计划， 安排佳句临摹?【注释】the more ... the ...越…越…【临摹】The truth of life is that the more you want the less you get.生活的真谛就是你想要的越多，反而得到的就越少。 ?【注释】out of sight 看不见了，不让人看见【临摹】They looked for the cyclist but he was already out of sight.他们找那个骑自行车的人，但是已经看不见他了。思如泉 涌Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.进步是今天的活动，明 天的保证。Better wear out shoes than sheets.宁可磨破鞋子，也不要蹭破床单宁奔波 健身也不贪睡而得病。