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漏洞百出 6 漏洞百出 7. 文章布局： Para 1.你校学生阅读现状： 问题句： Most of students like reading. The school, which is in a good atmosphere. Students in our school devote limit time to reading. Students who in our school don’t like reading books, but most them prefer to magazines and newspapers. Many schools have their own libraries, which offer students books. However, most of the students can seize the opportunity to broaden their horizons. There are many homework to do every evening. The students in our school are very like reading. 范文： From the survey that I made I’ve learnt that the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials. Although every student in our school has access to the library, the majority of us don’t go to borrow books, which is of great disappointment. 骁凡 Few students, however, would like to go to the library to borrow books or read. 学儒 Para 2. 分析导致这种现状的原因： 问题句： That may because our school always advocate reading more. 范文： The reasons behind that are various. First of all, most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading. Secondly, some students haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or the computer. What’s worse, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials. Even worse, teachers and parents usually attach much importance to the College Entrance Exam, making students ignore extracurricular reading. 芮霄 On the one hand, the students in High School are burdened with heavy homework and suffer from pressure as well. 鑫蕊、晓雅 Newspapers and magazines are also popular with students, which cover the current affairs home and abroad. 瑞捷 The reason why students choose fast reading is that they have little time to read, for the are occupied with study. 秋紫 What’s more, they prefer to spend time in playing computer games and watching TV rather than sit down to read a good book. 若翌 Last but not least, some students occupy their break and study time with reading worthless novels, which does harm to both their study and mental health. 舒夏 Para 3. 发表个人观点： 问题句： Reading more books is that we should do at present. Extracurricular books play a valueless part in our life. 范文： As far as I’m concerned, …. The more books we read, the more learned we will become. 万才、高畅，岱瑶，周玥 In my opinion, students should read more books to broaden their horizons. On one hand, we can learn more experience to balance life and study. On the other hand, we can get relief by reading. 雅昕 Focus on relaxation of mind and by reading, and it’ll make for school life. 子宸 It can also keep us informed about current affairs, which can help us study well. 秋禹 Reading is to the mind what food is to the body. 高远 Reading is good for us. On the one hand, reading helps to improve our writing skills and broaden our horizons. On the other hand, it can enrich our life and provide us with great fun. 小伟