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null英语专业四级考前辅导1 TEM 4 - Writing英语专业四级考前辅导1 TEM 4 - Writingwww.themegallery.com妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull1. 考试大纲、测试要求 Section A: Composition 200字 35分钟 15% Section B: Notes 50字 10分钟 10%妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnullnull2. 评分原则 Global Scoring 总体评分法 1. 作文体现主题思想 50% 2. 组织结构合理 10% 3. 无重大语法错误 20% 4. 语言充实得体 20% 5. 卷面整洁 null3. 写作专项训练 Section A: Composition 200字 35分钟 15% 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.net大作文类型大作文类型1. 对比选择型 6 Yes or No / A or B 2. 给定观点 4（对于给定的观点予以论证） The importance / benefits of… sth. do good to sth. 3. 问题分析解决型 1 The way to solve… / The best way to do 4. 自由发挥型 1 My idea of … / My view on…历年作文类型历年作文类型OUTLINEOUTLINE1. 对比选择型 开头 引入：正反态法 主旨句 中间段 结尾妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull2. 给定观点 开头 引入：背景法 中间段 结尾null3. 问题分析解决型 开头 中间段 结尾 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.net1. 对比选择型1. 对比选择型1）定义：对于给定的两个对立观点中选择一个，或者是否同意题目所给问题 2011 Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution? 2010 Should College Students Hire Cleaners? 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? 2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? 2006 Saving Money or Using Tomorrow’s Money 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull2）写作步骤 第一段：引言句开头，引出要评论的事物，并表明自己态度 第二段：分论点，加以理由支撑说明 第三段：总结观点妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netOutlineOutlineIntroduction: 2~3 Background + Thesis statement Body: 8 Supporting Idea 1 + Examples/Explanation Supporting Idea 2 + Examples/Explanation (Supporting Idea 3 + Examples/Explanation) Conclusion: 1~2 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netEssayEssay TEM-4 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netIntroductionIntroductionNow we live in an era overwhelmed by varies high-tech communication devices and services provided by telecom operators. Many doubt that the frequent usage of phones will probably kill one’s letter writing skill especially the young generation, who regarded phones as indispensable part of their lives. From my part, I don’t believe that letters will ultimately give way to phone calls.Body - Supporting Idea 1Body - Supporting Idea 1For one thing, letter writing has its advantages, which can not be replaced by phone calls. Well organized and properly chosen of words, letters are able to fully convey the writer’s feelings, ideas and thoughts. What’s more, the joy of receiving letters from one’s closest friends, beloved and parents, opening the sealed stamped envelope, holding sheets of paper filled with words, and looking at the unique handwriting which belongs to a certain person is quite different from receiving phone calls. Body - Supporting Idea 2Body - Supporting Idea 2For another, letter writing is one of the required skills to a qualified career person. Take the formal business letter writing skill as an example, one need to know the format, right terms and phrases, and the culture background of whom he or she is writing to. Phone calls cannot handle every aspect of business between companies. Besides, e-mail, the new form of the original letter, is as efficient as phone calls and more detailed at the same time.ConclusionConclusionThus, it’s safe to draw a conclusion that it is impossible for phones to kill letter writing. They have, in fact, coexisted well with each other. 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull How to write Introduction妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netIntroductionIntroductionNow we live in an era overwhelmed by varies high-tech communication devices and services provided by telecom operators. Many doubt that the frequent usage of phones will probably kill one’s letter writing skill especially the young generation, who regarded phones as indispensable part of their lives. From my part, I don’t believe that letters will ultimately give way to phone calls.IntroductionIntroduction1. 正反表态法 Currently, we are living in a society overwhelmed by _____. Thus, a number of people argue that _____. From my perspective, ______. 引出话题 大众观点 我的观点（主旨句）引出话题引出话题如今…被人们广泛讨论。 Recently, / Currently, / Nowadays, / Presently, There is a general debate on… ... has been brought into focus. ... has aroused much public concern in China. It has long been a contentious有争议的 issue as to ….ExerciseExercise如今，人们普遍讨论是否应该网上交友。 Recently, there is a heated debate on whether to make friends on the Internet. 对于大学生或高中生打工这一现象，校园里存在很大争议。 At present, _______ on the campus over the phenomenon _______. At present, there is a heatedly discussed contention on the campus over the phenomenon of college or high school students’ doing a part-time job.大众观点大众观点有些人认为…，有些则认为…。 很多人这么认为…。 Opinions vary from person to person. Some regard … as …. others believe that … When asked about…, the majority of people believe that….null我们应该存钱还是花明天的钱？人们观点各不相同。一些人认为存钱是个好习惯，一些人觉得花明天的钱能够提高生活质量。 Should we save money or spend tomorrow’s money? ______. Some regard ____ as ____, while others maintain that _____. Should we save money or spend tomorrow’s money? Opinions vary from person to person. Some regard saving money as a good habit, while others maintain that spending tomorrow’s money can improve our living quality . 主旨句主旨句我认为 In my opinion, From my perspective, From my point of view, As for myself, For my part, As far as I am concerned, Less is more. Omitting “I think” will be more powerfulIntroductionIntroduction1. 正反表态法 引出话题 大众观点 我的观点（主旨句）ExerciseExerciseIs the degree the most important thing at university? 引出话题 大众观点 我的观点 如今，人们都认为学位是学生学术成就重要的衡量。有些人认为这是唯一衡量标准。事实确实如此，但是学位不是上大学的唯一目的。nullIn our society, it is widely accepted that the most commonly recognized standard of a student’s academic achievement is the degree. Consequently, some people regard the degree as the only thing valuable while studying in college. Admittedly, the degree is essential for students who want a prosperous future, but it is by no means the only purpose at university.BodyBody1. 举例论证 2. 因果论证 3. 比较对比妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netBody - Supporting Idea 1Body - Supporting Idea 1For one thing, letter writing has its advantages, which can not be replaced by phone calls. Well organized and properly chosen of words, letters are able to fully convey the writer’s feelings, ideas and thoughts. What’s more, the joy of receiving letters from one’s closest friends, beloved and parents, opening the sealed stamped envelope, holding sheets of paper filled with words, and looking at the unique handwriting which belongs to a certain person is quite different from receiving phone calls. Body - Supporting Idea 2Body - Supporting Idea 2For another, letter writing is one of the required skills to a qualified career person. Take the formal business letter writing skill as an example, one need to know the format, right terms and phrases, and the culture background of whom he or she is writing to. Phone calls cannot handle every aspect of business between companies. Besides, e-mail, the new form of the original letter, is as efficient as phone calls and more detailed at the same time.ConnectivesConnectivesIllustration: Addition: Restatement: Consequence: Contrast: Time:妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netConnectives - CoherenceConnectives - CoherenceIllustration: for example, for instance Addition: besides, also, moreover, in addition, additionally, furthermore, apart from… Restatement: in other words, to put it another way Consequence: as a result, consequently, therefore, hence, thus Contrast: however, but, nevertheless, on the contrary Time: then, afterwards, next推理分析句型推理分析句型A number of statistics / factors could account for… All evidence lends support to the view that… Close analysis indicates that… People tend to cling to the illusion that…null牛顿的事例很好的证明了成功绝不会自己降临。 The popular story of how Newton was hit by a falling apple can well illustrate this view that success will never come on its own.妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netConclusionConclusion How to conclude your composition?ConclusionConclusionThus, it’s safe to draw a conclusion that it is impossible for phones to kill letter writing. They have, in fact, coexisted well with each other. 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull1. 总结式 Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship, but health as well.妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnull2. 重申式 As for me, choosing a useful major is wiser, as far as the future job-hunting is concerned.null3. 引申式 From the above discussion, I hold the view that college students should be careful when they decide whether they should have a company or not. They should remember they are students, and their study in university is the essential preparation for their success in society after graduation.Connectives for ConclusionConnectives for ConclusionIn summary In short In brief In conclusion On the whole Thus, it can be concluded that… After close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that…ExerciseExercise考虑了所有这些因素，我们可以得到结论 Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that…妩媚人生 http://www.5may.net2. 给定观点2. 给定观点  定义：给定观点型就是指，对某一个事物、事件或问题的重要性、必要性和正确性、优越性或危害性以及错误性进行的阐述和论证。也就是通过摆事实、讲道理的方式，来说服读者信服某个观点。 2008 The Benefits for Volunteering 2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities  null写作步骤： 第一步：提出论点。针对命题，对命题所涉及的问题或现状进行阐述，然后，提出自己的论点。 第二步：论证论点。通过举例、使用事实、数据等方式来论证提出的论点是正确的。 第三步：提出建议或。在论证的基础上，重申自己的观点，提出自己的建议或方法来解决问题。nullOutline Introduction: Importance / Benefits Body Imporatnce1 Importance2 Importance3 Conclusion 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netnullThe Problem of Rural Workers 妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netIntroductionIntroductionEvery day, millions of workers from the countryside are seen to flow, by every means of transportation, into big cities. Then they will settle down and work for years there. Although they have made noticeable contributions to the urban expansion, the problems they bring about are not to be ignored.BodyBodyWhat arouses a series of complaints on the part of city residents is centered round the following problems. Violent competition stands out for job opportunity. Struggling for the already-scarce positions, thousands of the migrants put great pressure on the government as well as on city dwellers. Besides, they are also responsible for the increase in crime rates. Aside from those who are hardworking, some are tempted to steal and rob because of overpopulation against insufficient job openings. What’s more, the problem of sanitation is worth mentioning. Since they move into cities without any physical examinations, the spread of some infectious diseases is likely to occur. ConclusionConclusionTo make the powerful force of migrants exert its part to the full, city governments must pass a law that will get rural workers registered with a special organization, helping them obtain a job and instructing their life. And some medical teams need to be sent around to make sure that every worker is in good condition and cared for by our governments. 给定观点型给定观点型模板In recent years there has been a big growth in the area of ____.提出自己的论点: _____is popular that it has become an indispensable part in our life. 提供论据,证明自己的观点:______contribute both to ______and to ______. Besides, ______offers ______. And most importantly, ______ help to promote ______. 结论: ______plays a vital role in people’s life, and it deserves further attention from (the government/ authorities).nullPractice： 1. The problem of children’s addictive computer games 2. The declining rate of college student’s employment妩媚人生 http://www.5may.net3. 问题分析解决型3. 问题分析解决型1．定义：问题分析型作文就是，命题内容是关于社会现象或社会问题的，要求作者分析该问题产生的原因或造成的后果，这类作文属于说明文体。作文通常要求考生使用“因果法”或“比较法”的写作技巧来成文 . 2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthynull2. 写作步骤 第一步：提出问题或现象。针对命题，概括性地提所要论述的社会问题和现象的主要特点。 第二步：找出、分析问题的原因或后果。说明问题产生的原因是什么，并且要分析说明原因造成的后果是什么。 第三步：提出建议或解决问题的方法，或对目前无法解决的问题提出展望。null Your understanding of the problem Juvenile Delinquency and your solutions to this thorny issueIntroductionIntroductionJuvenile Delinquency Today, the problem of juvenile delinquency has become serious and widespread in most modern countries. Towns and cities of the most western countries suffer from teenage lawlessness and crime; alcohol drinking and drug-taking have increased everywhere; gangs of youth, male and female, attack law-abiding citizens, or rob shopkeepers. Juvenile courts are overcrowded with offenders. And neither government nor schoolmaster can cure the trouble.ReasonsReasonsThere are many reasons for juvenile delinquency. First of all, an attitude of personal irresponsibility in modern society affects young people which encourage rebellion against all forms of established authority. Therefore, drug-taking, violence, and other crimes play their disastrous part, and teenagers become the first victims of the crimes. Additionally, many evils are made fashionable by a large number of TV plays, films and books with violence and pornography, which are poisonous to the teenagers’ mind. Apart from the views above, some juvenile delinquency stems from the unstable family where parents got divorced. Thus children cannot receive due care and guidance, and as a result they are heading for crimes.SolutionsSolutionsPersonally, I think that society in every country has the responsibility to care much more for the juvenile. This care begins in the home and involves concern, love and interest by parents; the school can only supplement, but never replace this. Secondly morals must be firmly, yet kindly taught from an early age. TV plays and books concerning violence and pornography must be strictly banned in public places as well as in schools. Finally, also most importantly, teenagers must be encouraged to set a real goal in life and pursue their great ideals. With education from school combined with the care and concern from parents and society, juvenile crimes, may not be completely eliminated, but can be at least reduced to a minimum. null问题分析解决型写作模板妩媚人生 http://www.5may.netIntroductionIntroductionPerhaps nothing is more (dominant/popular/important/harmful/dangerous )in (the modern world/Chinese family/school/society) than ____. According to a recent (study/investigation/poll)80% teenagers (people/women) are (addicted to/indulged in /interested in) doing ____. True, it does some good to us, but when we applaud its benefits, we must acknowledge its enormous potential to affect us.BodyBody1.分析原因: In my opinion, the (phenomenon/problem/failure/change) in ___ (is partly…/ mainly /largely attributable to…/due to…/owing to….) ___. The fact that ___ has several factors. First, ___. Second, ___. Finally, ___ 2. 分析结果: It is important for people /teenagers to realize that ___ ,for it  will( produce/ exert/have) a remarkable (impact/influence/effect) on ___. First of all, ___. Also, ___. Finally, ___.ConclusionConclusion1.There is (no denying/little doubt) that (special/adequate/considerable/further) attention must be paid/called/devoted to the problem of ___.If we ignore/fall in/ are blind to the problem, it is very likely that ___. 2. 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