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四 、六级写作精华（2003.12） 谨以这份简洁提供给2003年12月四、六级模考班的同学，希望它能帮助大家在这次考试中的写作部分获得理想的成绩———严明( Don ) 题型分类 (Classification of every essay): 一、第一种题型（对比观点选择题；Essay I）: 1、 大多为三点提纲，提纲模式一般为：有一些人……；还有人……；我的看法或观点； 2、 少数时候也会出现两点提纲的情况，此时可以补充成三点提纲来写作。 二、 第二种题型（社会热点话题；Essay II）: 1、 应该为三点提纲，但是通常以两点提纲出现的题目居多，所涉及主题为当时社会热点； 2、 如果是两点提纲，则补充成三点提纲写作。 3、 通常模式为：现象概述——细节（原因、危害、方式等）——自我评论 三、第三种题型（图标题；Report; Essay III）: 1、 以图表作为信息来源的写作模式 2、 通常模式为：描述图表——解释原因——自我评论 四、第四种题型（书信题； Essay IV）: 1、写书信 一、对比观点选择题(Essay I): ㈠ 典型的对比观点选择题的文章模式： Paragraph I : （1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； (2) 简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Paragraph II: (1) 提出一种观点或优点； (2) 本段的支持性分论点； (3) 本段总结（可以省略）。 Paragraph III: (1) 承上启下的过渡句； (2) 提出另一种观点或缺点； （3）本段的支持性分论点 （4）本段总结（可以省略）。 Paragraph IV: (1) 平衡两种看法； (2) 给出自己的观点。 Example: Nobody can have failed to notice that …… have become popular in China in recent years. Wherever you go, you will find people playing them, both in public places and in homes. But we have to ask ourselves whether the …… craze is beneficial or harmful。 The people who approve of …… say that they help to ……. In addition,……. Last but not least,…… However, the opponents of …… point out that …… can have negative side-effects.……. Moreover,……, Weighing up the arguments of both sides, perhaps the best policy is to regulate …… in such a way as to maximize its advantages. At the same time, …… should be banned. Furthermore, young people should be advised that …… is bad for their……. 第一段（引言段）的写作： 1. In recent years, with fast economic growth, …… have appeared in many families in China. People’s attitude towards the …… varies widely. People are divided on the question as to whether ……. Different people will have /offer different views/perspectives/answers on ……. 2. With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a ……. Yet, people’s opinions of …… vary from person to person. varies greatly/widely. public attitude toward it is quite of the contrary. differs sharply. 3. ……has become a hot popular topic among people recently. Opinions vary from person to person. 4. The issue of …… has been widely argued/debated currently 5. There is a public debate/discussion/controversy today about the problem of …… 6. Ever since early this century, …… has become an essential part of our modern life. …… is the driving force behind the swift progress of industry, agriculture , science and technology. Besides, it ensures that we have comfortable and healthy living conditions. Nobody can deny that the development of our civilization depends on …… 第二段的写作： 1. Most people would agree that there can be no substitute for……. They say that ……. Besides, they assert, …… 2. There is no doubt that …… benefit people hugely. 3. Another attraction about …… is that …… 4. Moreover, one of the advantages of …… is that …… 5. But the most important advantage of …… is that…… 6．But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are advantages to ……. More importantly, there can be no substitute for ……. 第三段的写作： 1． Despite In spite of the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/problems/negative effects. For all 2．Like anything else, they also have their own weakness/limits. 3．However, they are not without shortcomings/faults. 4．Yet others speak of the problems …… have brought. They complain that…… 5．However, …… may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. 6．Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by ……, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences. 7. This may be so, but it must be pointed out that …… also has its drawbacks. 第四段的写作： 1．Unquestionably, the challenge of …… means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us. 2．Whether the private car are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence …… can bring will not be eliminated. 3．Anyway/Anyhow/In any case, whether the effect is good or bad is a difficult question to answer, one thing is certain: it has changed and will continue to change the way of our entertainment, our leisure and our life. 4. Given the choice between these two methods of ……, I prefer ……. This is because I am the sort of person who finds it difficult to concentrate on ……. 5. ……, I feel, is the only one in which most people feel comfortable applying all their energies to the all-important task of acquiring …… 6. There is no doubt in my mind that …… nowadays is a far better way to ……than …… 7．In my opinion, the advances made in …… recently have made …… obsolete. 二、 社会热点话题(Essay II): ㈠文 章 结 构 模 式： Paragraph I: （1）引出要评论的事物或观点(general)； （2）提出问题(specific)。 Paragraph II: （1）作者对该现象或问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句； （2）支持性的细节分论点； （3）本段总结（可以省略）。 Paragraph III: （1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。 Example: My View on Fake Commodities Like most people, I welcome the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society. Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation’s economy. At the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people’s health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers and the free market in general. In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things ㈡适 用 句 型： 首段引出话题： 1. Nowadays, …… has become a problem we have to face. 如今……已经成为我们必须面对的问题。 2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem ……. 现在越来越多的人开始关注……的问题。 3. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of …… has drawn/aroused/captured worldwide attention. 最近……现在的日益增多已经引起了全世界的注意。 4. Recently, the issue/problem/question of …… has been brought into focus/ /brought to public attention/posed among public attention. 最近……问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。 5. In recently years, many cities/nations/people have been faced/troubled with the serious problem of ……. 在最近几年里，很多城市/国家/人已经面临……问题/受到……的干扰。 6.Nowadays more and more people come to realize/be aware of the importance of ……. 越来越多的人开始意识到……的重要性。 7. It is undeniable/There is no denying the fact that …… has become the utmost concern among people nowadays. 不可否认，……已经成为人们最关注的问题。 第二段细节论证：（分析原因）： convincing given 1、Among the most reasons cited by people for…, one important offered identified stressed should be emphasized …… mentioned 在人们所提出的对……最重要/有说服力的原因当中，有一点值得强调……。 regard sign of…… see trend result of…… 2、One may view the increase as a response to…… think of phenomenon reaction to…… 这个趋势/增长/现象应当被看成是……的一种象征/结果。 increase change mainly results from 3、The failure in… largely / success partly arises from due to the fact that… is owing to attributable to several factors ……的增长/改变/失败/成功的主要/部分原因是这样的……。 4、We may blame …for…, but the causes for the problem criticize roots phenomenon go far deeper. 我们应当在……方面批评……，但这个问题的产生是有更深层次的原因的。 三、图 表 题(Essay III): ㈠ 文 章 模 式: Paragraph I:（1）描述图表：趋势描写； （2）描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。 Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点； （2）细节性分论点（支持自己观点）。 Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法； （2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点。 ㈡ 适 用 句 型：（参见社会热点话题） 1. As we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram, …… 2. As can be shown in the table ……, 如图所示…… 6. B has the largest percentage/proportion of …… B在……方面占有很大的比重。 7. …… account(s) for/ take(s) up 10%. ……占有10％ 8.On the top of the list is ……, which accounts for 60%. 占比重最高的是……，占60％。 9. At the bottom is ……, which accounts for 10%. 占比重最低的是……，占10％。 10. A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%. A占最高比重，紧随其后的是占30％的B和占25％的C。 11. The number of …… increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably /sharply/steeply from 1900 to 2000. 在1900到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 12.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of …… from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量有了急剧的增长。 13.The number of …… increased/rose steadily/gradually/slowly/slightly from 1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 14. There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/rise in the number of …… from1990 to 2000. 在1990到2000间，……的数量在持续稳定的增长。 15. 下降：decrease/fall/drop; a decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of …… 16. The situation/figures reached/hit a peak/a high at 60% in ……. The situation/figures peaked at 60% in ……. 情况（数据）在……达到定点，为60％。 17．The situation/figures bottomed out at 20% in ……. The situation/figures hit a trough at 20% in ……. 情况（数据）在……达到最低点，为20％。 18. A is twice/three/four times what it was in 1990. A is twice/three/four times the amount in 1990. A is twice/three/four times as much/many as …… in 1990. 与1990相比，A是原来的2（3、4）倍。 19．The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between 1900 and 2000. 从1990到2000间，数字大约是原来的2（3，5）倍。 四、书 信 题 ( Essay IV ): （一）开 头 段： 1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你） Dear Sir/Mr. Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department. / I am a … at your … / I am a … at your college, enrolled in the … course. / My name is …, I am …. 2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友） Dear Prometheus, Hello/Hi. How are you? / I hope everything is fine. / How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in/getting along with……? 3、解释写信的原因 （1）致谢： I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises. / I am greatly indebted to you for (the double) you have gone to on my behalf. / Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada. / I am writing to you to express my heartfelt gratitude. / I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for……. / I would like to thank you most sincerely for……. （2）抱怨： I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room. / I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at … / I wish to make a complaint about……. / I am writing to draw your attention to……. / I am afraid I have got a complaint about……. （3） 致歉： I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects. / I am writing to you because I am unable to……. / I an terribly sorry that……. / I would like to express my apologies for not being able to……. （4）询问： I would like to obtain/request/seek/inquire about some information about… / I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. / I would like some detailed information on/about…… （二） 结 尾 段： 1、发出请求 （1） Please give this matter your immediate attention. （2）I would very much appreciate it if……as soon as possible. （3）Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision. 2、提供帮助 （1）I hope these ……will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information. （2）……will be taking over responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you. 3、再次表示歉意或感激 （1）Thank you for your kind assistance. （2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always. （3）I am sorry that I cannot……, and trust that you will understand. （4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused. （5）I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience. （6）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 4、期盼回信 （1）I look forward to your prompt response. （2）Looking forward to a prompt reply. （3）I expect to hear from you very soon. （4）I hope to receive your reply shortly. （5）I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter. CET Band 4.6： It Pays to Be Honest Directions: Write a composition about 120/150 words based on the following outline: 1） 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2） 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实 English version: Nowadays, there is a sharp increase of dishonest phenomena. Some students cheat in exams for higher marks; some corporations issue fake messages in irresponsible advertisements in order to gain profit; and for the same purpose some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines, sometimes endangering the patients’ health and even their lives. These behaviors have already aroused growing concern from the public. Undoubtedly, honesty will benefit not only others but also ourselves profoundly. On the one hand, one’s honesty can bring other people sheer facts which can lead to their sound judgments and effective solutions to the problems. On the other hand, people with integrity can win trust and friendship from the public, which will in turn bring more opportunities to themselves in the long run. Taking into account the above factors, we can draw a conclusion that everyone should try to be honest in whatever he says and does. Since honesty is a must in both daily communications and business activities, without it there will never be a harmonious and prosperous society. 写作构思万能理由： 1、方便：convenient\convenience 2、效率：efficient\efficiently\efficiency 3、节省和浪费：save time\money\space; economical, thrift waste time\money\space; costly, lavish 4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance ; selfish, isolated, conservative 5、人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6、娱乐：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax tired, boring, lonely 7、环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8、安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9：经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10、人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 本资料谢绝转载。原因嘛——地球人都知道了！——谢谢合作！ 严 明 PAGE - 7 -