【课件】读后续写课件 2023届英语作文备考

一.读后续写步骤Step1Readforelements--两句maincharacter+mainidea（WWW）Step2Studythetwosentences(细读续写首句，构思框架）Step3第一段续写构思：心情+对话（1-2）+动作（1-2）+环境+衔接Step4第二段续写构思：心情+对话+动作+正能量结局/环境+主题升华Step1:ReadforbasicinformationBasicWhoWhenWhereWhatWhyDereckandShirly名词inacar动词DerekandShirleywalkedoutoftheairportbuildingandintothebrightsunshine.Lookingupatthebrilliantblueskyandthenatthefarawaymountainsrisingabovetheswayingpalmtrees,theycouldn'twaittostarttheirholiday.Ataxipulledupswiftlyandsilently.DereckdroppedtheirsuitcasesintothebootandjoinedShirleyinthebackseat.“PalmTreesHotel,please,"Derecksaidexcitedly.“Certainly,sir,"repliedthedriver,asheturnedaroundwithaflashingwhitesmile.DereckandShirleygaveeachotherapuzzledlookasthetaxieasedsmoothlyintothetraffic.“Excuseme,er,yourfaceseemsveryfamiliar-infact,youremindusofthatfamousfilmstar,RockyOverton...butofcourse,youcan'tbe."Para1:DerekandShirleywalkedoutofairporttohaveholidayPara2:they----taxi---driver：remindthemofRocky，afamousstar.DerekandShirleysatinsilentdisbeliefasthedriverexplainedthathewasnotarealperson,butarobotmadetolooklikeafamousactor.“Rocky”explainedthatthetaxicompanyhadpurchasedthelatestmodelofrobotdriverssincetheywereprogrammedtobesaferandmorereliablethanhumandrivers.“So,hereIam.“Rocky”continued,“yourfirstrobottaxidriver!”DerekandShirleyheldeachother'shandsmoretightly.“Relax,”“Rocky”reassuredthem,“thereisnothingforyoutoworryabout.Icanassureyouthatmydrivingskillsareexcellent.I'mequippedwithperfectvisionandsuperiorreactions,andIknoweverystreetinthecity.IaminstantlyupdatedwiththelatesttrafficinformationsothatIcanavoidtrafficjamsandgetyoutoyourdestinationinthequickestandleaststressfulmanner.Pleasesitback,relaxandenjoythejourney."Para3:thedriverisarobotPara4:“Rocky”:relaxDerekandShirley,feelingalittlebetter,leanedbackintheirseatandclosedtheireyes.“Andanotherthing,”“Rocky”added,“mylineofrobotsrepresentstheultimateincomputertechnology.Iambeautifullydesigned,madefromonlythebestmaterialsandsubjectto服从thestrictestqualitychecks.Therefore,youareentirelysafewithme.Nothingcouldpossiblygowrong...couldpossiblygowrong...gowrong...gowrong.…”Para5:“Rocky”继续夸自己，然后gowrong...gowrong...go1)Theplotofthispassage.DerekandShirley下飞机，度假打车，司机像明星司机是机器人机器人一直在炫耀自己，然后，就gowrong...gowrong...了2)Whatarethethechangesofthemaincharacter’semotions?happyandexciteddisbelief--nervous--relaxedpanicStep2:ReadforthegivensentencesParagraph1:DerekandShirleylookedateachotherwithwildpanicintheireyes.?”Paragraph2:“Don'tworry,sir,"camethecalmreplyfromtheotherendoftheline.tohim.Whatmayhappeninthefirst/secondparagraph?P1:衔接，看段2首句P2:happyendingWhatarethemaincharacter’semotions?panicrelieved、happyStep3:第一段续写构思：心情(1-2)+对话（1-2）+动作（1-2）+环境+衔接DerekandShirleylookedateachotherwithwildpanicintheireyes.心情Theyfeltliketheyarefloatinginanoceanofsadness/fear/panic.(/Theytrembledwithfear,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.)对话“whatshallwedo?”Derekwhisperedinalow/tight/…voice.“I..Idon’tknow.”Shirleyrepliedwithfear/sadness/astonishment.动作Sittingtherequietly,theydidn'tsayanywordanymore.环境Therewasadeadlystillnessinthecar.(Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.)衔接Suddenly,theyfoundthelineandclickedthenumber.Step3:第二段续写构思：心情(1-2)+对话(1-2)+动作(1-2)+正能量结局/环境+主题升华“Don'tworry,sir,"camethecalmreplyfromtheotherendoftheline.心情Theireyestwinkledwithexcitement.对话“whatshallwedo?”Dereksaidinacuriositytone.“Waitaminute”herepliedinasoftvoice.动作Sittingtherequietly,theydidn'tsayanywordanymore.环境Thesundroppedthroughandlaidontheirheadandshoulders.结局Suddenly,thecarstarttorunagain.心情Asuddenwaveofjoysweptoverthem.结尾Whatanarrowescape!PossibleVersionDerekandShirleylookedateachotherwithwildpanicintheireyes.Theyfeltliketheyarefloatinginanoceanofsadness/fear/panic.“whatshallwedo?”Derekwhisperedinalowvoice.“I..Idon’tknow.”Shirleyrepliedwithfear.Sittingtherequietly,theydidn'tsayanywordanymore.Therewasadeadlystillnessinthecar.Suddenly,theyfoundthelineanddialthenumber.“Don'tworry,sir,"camethecalmreplyfromtheotherendoftheline.Theireyestwinkledwithexcitement.“whatshallwedo?”Dereksaidinacuriositytone.“Waitaminute”herepliedinasoftvoice.Sittingtherequietly,theydidn'tsayanywordanymore.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidontheirheadandshoulders.Suddenly,thecarstarttorunagain.Asuddenwaveofjoysweptoverthem.Whatanarrowescape!