高中英语作文建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的词汇、表达：1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)price价格2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……6.makesb(not)dosth7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建议：Dear….,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出话题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建议句型积累：1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It’snecessaryforsbtodosth4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…It’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosthIt’sbettertodosth8.MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和，用英语给这位家长回复。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.写需清晰、工整。Hi，SadMother，Ihavelearnedthat_____________________________________________ 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作文范文：Hi,SadMother,Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor(微小的)mistakes.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子： 主格 宾格 形容性物主代词 名词性物主代词 反身代词 第一人称 I me my mine myself we us our ours ourselves 第二人称 you you your yours yourself you you your yours yourselves 第三人称 he him his his himself she her her hers herself it it its its itself they them their theirs themselvesdaughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith(面对)theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错：1.Therearesomeadvice.2.Don’tsad.3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesoworried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.建议信(3)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,JamieHiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.Yours,JamieHighlights:1.First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.2.What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.3.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingaboutyourtrouble.4.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.5.It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.6.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.7.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.8.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.9.It’scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffectonyournormalstudyandlife.建议信(4)高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；?3、适当锻炼；?4、保持乐观心态。注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；?????3、文章开头已给出；???????????4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。作文范文：WiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhasaffectedsomestudents’life,preventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagoodphysicalstate.Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.句型及短语积累：1.Myadviceisasfollows.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagoodwaytoreducepressure.8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeepenergeticandactive.9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.10.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.11.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.12.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghellotous.13.Goouttobreathefreshairandrelaxyourbrain.14.Keepingahealthydietisessentialtoyou,whichhelpsyoukeepfit.15.ThemostimportantthingIthinkistoseekforthebalancebetweenstudyandpleasure.16.keepabalancebetweenstudyandrelaxation17.keepfit/healthykeep(in)goodhealthkeepingoodcondition/shapekeepinagoodstateofhealth18.withtimegoingby/astimegoesby19.takeexercise纠错:1.Exerciseeverydaysothatyouwillbemuchstronger.2.remainaoptimisticattitudetowardslife3.Eatmorevegetables,whichcanstrengthyourhealth.4.Inaddition,haveabalanceddietcankeepyourhealth.5.Onlyifyoubelieveinyourselfyoucancarryonasnormal.6.takegoodrest7.Underpressureofstudy,notonlydoourlivesaffected,butalsoweareinpoorcondition.(两处错)8.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticisagoodwaytoliftyourspirits.9.Takingexerciseproperlycontributestomakeyoufullofenergy.10.Youshouldeatsomethingwhichagreeswithyou.11.Atthesametime,wearefacedwithmuchstressthatresultsinmanystudentscan’tsleepwell.12.Herearesomeadviceonhowtosolveit.13.Onlyyouensureenoughnutritioncanyoustudybetter.14.Finally,keepanoptimisticattitudetolife,itwillbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)occur---______________---______________---__________