综合英语6Unit2Bards of the Internet

Unit2BardsoftheInternetWhatdoesthispictureimply?Weareenteringaneraofinformationexplosionwhichisboostedbyadvancedscienceandtechnology.WehavebecomeaccustomedtocommunicatewitheachotherthroughTwitter,Weibo,Facebook,etc.TheInternethaschangedourlifeonewayoranother.PleaseshareanexampleonhowtheInternethaschangedyourlifeorsomehabits.Opentodiscussion.TheInternethasprovideduswithamorespeedyandconvenientmeansofcommunication,whichiscalledforbythequickenedpaceoflifetoday.Onlinecommunicationhasbredastyleofwritingwithnumerousdistinctivefeaturesofitsown.Canyouthinkofsomeexamplestoillustratethedifferencesbetweenonlinewritingandtraditionalwriting?Opentodiscussion.唐家三少—张威Inthisessaytheauthordescribesthecurrentfashionfornetwriting,exploresthecausesofthepoorqualityofwritingfoundontheInternet,andexplainsitsmeritsanddifferencesfrompublishedwritingaswellasjustificationsforitssurvivalandprevalence. CompuServe(Paragraph2) Foundedin1969asacomputertimesharingservice,CompuServedrovetheinitialemergenceoftheonlineserviceindustry.In1979,CompuServebecamethefirstservicetoofferelectronicmailcapabilitiesandtechnicalsupporttopersonalcomputerusers.CompuServebrokenewgroundagainin1980asthefirstonlineservicetoofferreal-timechat.SinceitsacquisitionbyAOL(AmericaOn-line)in1998,CompuServehasbeenawhollyownedsubsidiaryofAmericaOn-line,Inc.Prodigy(Paragraph2)anofficialwebsite,providingInternetaccessandrelatedvalue-addedservices AmericaOnline(Paragraph2) theworld’slargestonlineinformationservicewhichisoftenabbreviatedasAOL.ItisanAmericancorporationheadquarteredinVirginia,ownerandoperatorofonlineandinteractivecomputergames. McLuhan(Paragraph2) HerbertMarshallMcLuhan(1911–1980),Canadianwriterandphilosopher.Hearguedthatitisthecharacteristicsofaparticularmediumratherthantheinformationitdisseminates(传播）thatinfluenceandcontrolsociety. TorBooks(Paragraph3) TorBooks,animprintofTomDohertyAssociates,LLC,isaNewYork-basedpublisherofhardcoverandsoft-coverbooks,foundedin1980andcommitted(althoughnotlimited)tosciencefictionandfantasyliterature.ThecompanyisnowpartoftheHoltzbrinkgroup,nowknownasMacmillanPublishers. MarkTwain(Paragraph3) USnovelistandhumorist;pseudonymofSamuelLanghorneClemens(1835–1910).Aftergainingareputationasahumoristwithhisearlyworks,hewrotehisbest-knownnovels,TheAdventuresofTomSawyer(1876)andTheAdventuresofHuckleberryFinn(1885);bothgiveavividevocationofMississippifrontierlife. TomPaine(Paragraph3) ThomasPaine(1737–1809),18thcenturyEnglishpoliticalwriter.HispamphletCommonSense(1776)calledforAmericanindependenceandTheRightsofMan(1791)defendedtheFrenchRevolution. RevolutionaryWar(Paragraph3) indicatingthewarofAmericanRevolutionfrom1775to1783inwhichtheAmericancolonistswonindependencefromBritishrule.TheRevolutionarypamphleteerswerenotprofessionalwritersbutcommoncitizensengagedinthedebateofideas. Elizabethanera(Paragraph3) Elizabeth(1533–1603),queenofEnglandandIreland(1558–1603);daughterofHenryVIII.Shere-establishedProtestantismasthestatereligion.ThephraseindicatestheperiodoftimereignedbyElizabeth. Gutenberg(Paragraph3) JohannesGutenberg(c.1400–1468),15thcenturyGermanprinter.HewasthefirstintheWesttoprintbyusingmovabletypeandtouseapress. CanterburyTales(Paragraph7) AcollectionofstoriesinpoeticformwrittenbyGeoffreyChaucerandpublishedbyWilliamCaxtonin1478.Today,avisittoTheCanterburyTales,oneofKent’smostpopularattractions,withitsstunningreconstructionof14thcenturyEngland,isjustlikesteppingintotheMiddleAges.Hereitreferstoaveryold-fashioneddressingstyle. WELL(Paragraph9) apioneeringonlinecommunityknownforengagingconversationsandintelligentdebates Sausalito(Paragraph9) asmallcityinnorthwesternCalifornia,acrosstheGoldenGatefromSanFrancisco,anotedartistscolonywithapopulationofabout8,000 NewYorkTimes(Paragraph9) oneofthemostimportantpapersinthehistoryofAmericannewspapers,whichwasfoundedonSeptember18,1851byHenryJarvisRaymondandGeorgeJones.RaymondwasalsoafoundingdirectoroftheAssociatedPressin1856. WallStreetJournal(Paragraph9) Foundedin1889,theWallStreetJournal,theflagshippublicationofDowJones&Company,istheworld’sleadingbusinessnewspaper. CommunicationsDaily(Paragraph10) America’spreeminentdailytelecomnewssourcepublishedbyWarrenCommunicationsNews,thepublisherofmust-readdailynewspublicationscoveringthetelecomandtelevisionindustry DesMoines(Paragraph12) thecapitalofIowa,inthesouthcentralpartofthestate,withapopulationofabout200,000 BrookFarm(Paragraph13) anexperimentalcommuneinWestRoxbury,Massachusetts,setupbyagroupofUSwritersinthe1840s theGlobeTheatre(Paragraph13) atheatreinSouthwark,London,erectedin1599,wheremanyofShakespeare’splayswerefirstpubliclyperformed PhillipElmer-DeWittisasenioreditorofTimemagazine.Since1982,Elmer-DeWitthaswrittenaboutscienceandtechnologyforthemagazine.Asastaffwriterforthatpublication,hehaslaunchedtwonewsectionsinthemagazine:in1982,“Computers”andin1987,“Technology.”In1993,Elmer-DeWittalsospearheadedTimeOnline,theinteractiveeditionofthemagazine. Elmer-DeWitthasproducedoverfourhundrednewsandfeaturestoriesonsubjectsrangingfrominvitrofertilizationtocomputersex.HisTimemagazinecoverstoriesinclude“ComputerViruses”(1988),“Supercomputers”(1988),“CuringInfertility”(1991),“Cyberpunk”(1993),“InfoHighway”(1993),“VideoGames”(1993),“HumanCloning”(1994),“TheInternet”(1994),and“SexinAmerica”(1994).StructurePartIPartIIPartIIIPartIVPartV Keywords: Net-writing Poorquality cause gem merit Part1(Para.1-2) introductorylead Thefirsttwoparagraphsareanintroductorylead-inthatpresentsananalyticalcomparisonbetweenwhathappenedtowritingwhenthetelephonewasinventedandwhatishappeningoncomputernetworksnow.1.Oneoftheunintendedsideeffectsoftheinventionofthetelephonewasthatwritingwentoutofstyle.Oh,sure,therewerestillfull-timescribblers—journalists,academics,professionalwordsmiths.Andthegreatcentersofcommercestillfounditusefultokeeponhandpeoplewhocoulddraftamemo,abrief,apressreleaseoracontract.Butgivenachoicebetweenpickingupapenoraphone,mostfolkstooktheeasyrouteandgavetheirfingers—andsometimestheirmind—arest. unintendedadj.notdeliberateorplanned anunintendedslight Thegrouparguesthatmanyoftheproposedreformswillhaveunintendedconsequences.e.g. “Oneoftheunintendedsideeffectsoftheinventionofthetelephonewasthatwritingwentoutofstyle.”Whentelephonewasinvented,noonerealizedatthattimethatitwouldoutdatewriting.Paraphrase “...andgavetheirfingers—andsometimestheirmind—arest.”Explanation...andpreferredtousethetelephoneratherthanthepen(inahumorousway). Paragraph1:Question Whydoestheauthorrelatewhathappenedtothetelephonewithwhatishappeningtothecomputer?Bydoingso,theauthorseemstosuggestthatwriting,whichwentoutofstylewiththeinventionofthetelephone,isexperiencinganunexpectedcomebackwithonlineletterwriting. 第1段中文译文 电话的发明，产生了一个始料不及的后果，书写过时了。诚然，全职的写字工仍然存在，包括记者、学者以及职业写手。大型商业中心仍然很有必要保留一些能草拟备忘录、会议纪要、新闻稿或者合同的人。但是在举笔和拿起话筒之间选择的话，大多数人都会走便道，让手指——有时还有大脑——休息片刻。 2. Whichmakeswhat’shappeningonthecomputernetworksallthemorestartling.Everynight,whentheyshouldbewatchingtelevision,millionsofcomputeruserssitdownattheirkeyboards;dialintoCompuServe,Prodigy,AmericaOnlineortheInternet;andstarttyping—E-mail,bulletin-boardpostings,chatmessages,rants,diatribes,evenshortstoriesandpoems.JustwhenthemediaofMcLuhanweresupposedtorenderobsoletethemediumofShakespeare,theonlineworldisexperiencingthegreatestboominletterwritingsincethe18thcentury. “Whichmakeswhat’shappeningonthecomputernetworksallthemorestartling.”ExplanationHere“which”isarelativepronounreferringtothesituationmentionedintheprecedingparagraph.Thesentencewouldbegrammaticallyacceptableifitwererestructuredas“Allthismakeswhat’shappeningonthecomputernetworksallthemorestartling.” rendervt.tomakesomeoneorsomethingbeorbecomesomething;toexpress,show,orperformsomethinginaparticularway Hisrudenessrenderedmespeechless. Thesingersrenderedthesongwithenthusiasm.e.g. obsolescentadj.(cf.obsolete) becomingreplacedbysomethingnewerandmoreeffective Theamateurmoviegaugesof8mm,Super8and9.5mmareobsolescent. Muchofourexistingmilitaryhardwareisobsolescent.e.g.NoteThingsthatare obsolete areoutofdateornolongeringeneraluse. Thingsthatare obsolescent arefadingfromgeneraluseandsoontobecomeobsolete. boomn. anincreaseintheactivityofaparticularindustryorpartofacountry'seconomy Thisyearhasseenaboominbooksales. Theinsurancebusinesssufferedfromaviciouscycleofboomandbust（繁荣与萧条）.e.g. “JustwhenthemediaofMcLuhanweresupposedtorenderobsoletethemediumofShakespeare,theonlineworldisexperiencingthegreatestboominletterwritingsincethe18thcentury.”Contrarytowhatisexpected,atatimewhenthemediaofMcLuhan(e.g.television)weresupposedtomakethemediumofShakespeare(i.e.letterwriting)outofdate,letterwritingontheInternetisenjoyingthegreatestdevelopmentsincethe18thcentury.Paraphrase Paragraph2:Question Whatisimpliedwhentheauthorsays“...themediaofMcLuhanweresupposedtorenderobsoletethemediumofShakespeare...”?Thephrase“themediaofMcLuhan”referstothenewmediathatbecamepopularinthe20thcenturysuchasradio,televisionandmovies,while“themediumofShakespeare”referstothetraditionalwayof“letterwriting”inthemainclauseofthissentence.Thesentenceimpliesthat,insteadofbeingrenderedobsolete,letterwritingisexperiencingthefastestdevelopmentsincethe18thcentury,thoughitisinthe“online”form. 第2段中文译文 与之相比，当前计算机网络上发生的现象就更为惊人了。每个夜晚，当人们本应该看电视的时候，成千上万的计算机用户坐在键盘前，点击进入“电脑服务”、“奇才”、“美国在线”或互联网，并开始打字——发电子邮件、发布信息、聊天、夸夸其谈、谩骂，甚至创作短篇小说和诗歌。当麦克卢汉所说的媒介正在淘汰莎士比亚时代的媒介时，网络世界正经历着18世纪以来信件书写最为迅猛的发展。 Part2(Para.3-4) featureandqualityofnetwriting Inthisparagraphanumberofpeople’sremarksarequoted.Thesequotationsserveasevidenceofthefactthatdeviationsfromthetraditionalmediumofletterwritingarenotrareinhistory.Theimplicationisthatweshouldnotbesurprisedbytheboominnet-writing. 3. “ItismyoverwhelmingbeliefthatE-mailandcomputerconferencingisteachinganentiregenerationabouttheflexibilityandutilityofprose,”writesJonCarroll,acolumnistattheSanFranciscoChronicle.PatrickNielsenHayden,aneditoratTorBooks,compareselectronicbulletinboardswiththe“scribblers’compacts”ofthelate18thandearly19thcenturies,inwhichmemberspassedlettersfromhandtohand,addingalittlemoreateachturn.DavidSewell,anassociateeditorattheUniversityofArizona,likensnetwritingtotheliterarysceneMarkTwaindiscoveredinSanFranciscointhe1860s,“whenpeoplewerereinventingjournalismbygraftingitontothetall-talefolktradition.” OthersharkbacktoTomPaineandtheRevolutionaryWarpamphleteers,oreventotheElizabethanera,when,thankstoGutenberg,agenerationofEnglishwritersbecameintoxicatedwithlanguage. likenvt. likensomeone/somethingtosomething tosaythatsomeoneorsomethingissimilartosomeoneorsomethingelsee.g. Shelikenedtheexperiencetosinkingintoawarmbath. Oursmallcompanycanbelikenedtoabig,happyfamily. reinventvt.tochangesomethingthatalreadyexistsandgiveitadifferentformorpurposee.g. ThestoryofRomeoandJulietwasreinventedasaLosAngelesgangstermovie（黑帮片）. He’soneofthosesportsmenwhoreinventthemselvesasTVpresenters.reinventas/reinventyourself:tochangethewaythatyoubehaveorthethingsthatyoudosothatpeoplethinkofyouasadifferentkindofperson她一直努力把自己重新塑造成一位演员。(reinventas)Shekepttryingtoreinventherselfasanactress. graftvt.:toaddsomethingandmakeitbecomeapartofanotherthinge.g. Apieceofskinwasremovedfromherlegandgraftedontoherface. Themanagementtriedunsuccessfullytograftnewworkingmethodsontotheexistingwaysofdoingthings. thetall-talefolktraditionn. thetraditioninwhichpeopletellastoryorataleinafancifulandexaggeratedmanner. Atalltale/storyisataleorastorythatishardtobelieve,becauseitissoexaggeratedorunlikely.Heretheauthorreferstoauniquekindofjournalisminwhichpeoplereportnewsinmuchthesamewayaspeopletelltalltales. DavidSewell...likensnetwritingtotheliterarysceneMarkTwaindiscoveredinSanFranciscointhe1860s,“whenpeoplewerereinventingjournalismbygraftingitontothetall-talefolktradition.”DavidSewellcomparesnetwritingtotheliterarysceneMarkTwaindiscoveredinSanFranciscointhe1860s,“whenjournalistswerefondofwritingnewsreportsinthetraditionaltall-talestyle.”Paraphraseharkbacktosomethingtorememberortalkaboutsomethingthathappenedinthepaste.g.Theyalwaysharkbacktowhattheycallthe'goodolddays'.导演的新片回归到早期的电影风格。(harkbackto)Thedirector’slatestfilmharksbacktotheearlyyearsofcinema. pamphleteersn. Thoughmostpamphleteerswerenotprofessionalwriters,theywerepassionateadvocatorsofNorthAmericanindependence. Paragraph3:Questions 1.Whatdoestheauthormeanwhenhesays“...E-mailandcomputerconferencingisteachinganentiregenerationabouttheflexibilityandutilityofprose”?TheauthormeansthatE-mailandcomputerconferencingdemonstratetoawholegenerationofpeoplethatthelanguageweusedoesnothavetobealwayssoformalasintraditionalletterwriting;itcanbeusedinacasualmannerwhilestillservingitspurposeeffectively. Paragraph3:Questions 2.Whatdoestheauthorwishtoconveyinhiscomparisonbetweennetwritingwith“scribblers’compacts,”MarkTwain’sdiscoveryofnewjournalisminSanFrancisco,RevolutionaryWarpamphleteersandtheachievementsoftheElizabethanera?Andwhatdoeshefindwithhiscomparison?Theauthorusestheseexamplestotellthereadersthattherearesomesimilaritiesbetweennetwritingandthoseexperimental,eveninnovativewritingmodesinhistory,andsonetwritingcouldberegardedasakindofrenaissance. Buthefindsinthiscomparisonthatmuchofnetwritingisawfullybad—sloppy,meandering,ungrammatical,poorlyspelled,badlystructuredandevencontentfree. 第3段中文译文 “我确信电子邮件和网上会议正在教会整整一代人写文章是多么有用，可以灵活到何种程度，”《旧金山纪事报》的专栏作家乔恩·卡洛尔这样写道。石山图书出版社的编辑帕特里克·尼尔森·海顿把当今的电子公告板比作18世纪末19世纪初的“文字盒”：这是个小盒子，盒内的文章在多人间传递，每人经手时都会增加一些句子。来自亚利桑那大学的副主编大卫·塞维尔则将网络写作喻为马克·吐温在19世纪60年代在旧金山所发现的文学景象，“当时人们将新闻报道嫁接到夸张的民俗传统故事之中，创造了新的新闻报道方式”。（续） 第3段中文译文（接）更有甚者，有人想起了汤姆·潘恩和美国革命时期政治小册子作家，甚至还想起了伊丽莎白一世时期，古腾堡活字印刷术的发明，令一代英国作家沉迷在语言之中。 4. Butsuchcomparisonsinviteaquestion:Ifonlinewritingtodayrepresentssomesortofrenaissance,whyissomuchofitsoawful?Foritcanbeverybadindeed:sloppy,meandering,puerile,ungrammatical,poorlyspelled,badlystructuredandattimesvirtuallycontentfree.“HEY!!!1!”readsanalltootypicalmessageontheInternet,“ITHINKMETALLICAIZREELKOOLDOOD!!!!” sloppyadj. doneinaverycarelesswaye.g. Spellingmistakesalwayslooksloppyinaformalletter. Anothersloppypasslikethatmightlosethemthewholematch. meandervi. ariverorroadthatmeandersfollowsapathwithalotofturnsandcurves totalkorwriteforalongtime,changingsubjectsorideas,sothatpeoplebecomeboredorconfusede.g. ameanderingriver alongmeanderingspeech Thefilmmeandersalongwithnoparticularstoryline. puerileadj.(n.puerility) likeasillyyoungperson,orlikesomethingtheywouldsayordoe.g. Hecanbeverypuerilewhenhe’shadacoupleofdrinks. Someofyourcolleagueshavebeencomplainingaboutyourpuerilityintheoffice. “Foritcanbeverybadindeed:sloppy,meandering,puerile,ungrammatical,poorlyspelled,badlystructuredandattimesvirtuallycontentfree.”Foritcanbeverybadindeed:careless,pointless,childish,withmanygrammaticalandspellingmistakes,andstructuralmistakes,andsometimesithasnorealmessageormeaning.Paraphrase “ITHINKMETALLICAIZREELKOOLDOOD!1!!!” —ThisisanexampleofsloppyandvacuouswritingontheInternet. 第4段中文译文可是这种比较又引出一个问题：如果说当今的网络写作代了某种复兴，但为何这么多网络作品又如此糟糕呢？网络写作可能会低劣不堪：文体拖沓、漫无边际、愚蠢幼稚、不合语法、拼写糟糕、结构不当，有时甚至毫无内容可言，正如网络上典型的短信息所示：“嗨！！！！我觉得金属乐队酷毙了！！！！” Part3(Para.5-9) reasonsanddefense Para.5-6 Inthesetwoparagraphstheauthorexploresthereasonswhythequalityofnet-writingissopoor.Onceagaintheauthorquotessomeremarksmadebyotherpeople. Para.7: Inthisparagraphtheauthorbeginstociteexamplesindefenseofnet-writing.Hefirstpointsoutthatthereareactuallysomereallygoodwritings(gems)ontheInternet. Para.8-9 Inthesetwoparagraphstheauthordiscussestworeasonswhytherearesome“gems”ontheInternet:oneisthatthe“Darwiniansurvivalprinciplehasstartedtoprevail,”whichmeansthatonlygoodwritingwillsurvive;andtheotheristhe“collaborative”workincomputerconferences,atwhichideasareknockedagainstoneanother“untiltheyspark.” 5. Onereason,ofcourse,isthatE-mailisnotlikeordinarywriting.“Youneedtothinkofthisas‘writtenspeech’,”saysGerardVanderLeun,literaryagentbasedinWestport,Connecticut,whohasemergedasoneofthepreeminentstylistsontheNet.“Thesethingsarelittlemoreconsideredthancoffeehousetalkandalotlessconsideredthanaletter.They’renottohaveandhold;they’retofireandforget.”Manyonlinepostingsarecomposed“live”withtheclockticking,usingrudimentarywordprocessorsoncomputersystemsthatchargebytheminuteandinsomecaseswillshutdownwithoutwarningwhenanhourrunsout. emergevi. tocomeoutofsomethingoroutfrombehindsomethingtobecomeknowne.g. Thefactsbehindthescandalaresuretoemergeeventually. She’sthemostexcitingBritishsingertoemergeonthepopsceneforadecade. preeminentadj.(n.preeminence) betterormoreimportantthananyoneoranythingelseinaparticularactivitye.g. Sheisthepreeminentauthorityinhersubject. Hispreeminenceinhissubjectisinternationallyrecognized. “...GerardVanderLeun...hasemergedasoneofthepreeminentstylistsontheNet.”...GerardVanderLeun...hasbecomeknownasoneofthemostimportantstylistsontheInternet.Paraphrase “They’renottohaveandhold;they’retofireandforget.”Theyareoflittleliteraryvalue,sopeoplewritethem,sendthemandforgetthem.Paraphrase “Manyonlinepostingsarecomposed‘live’withtheclockticking...”Manyonlinepostingsarewrittenspontaneously,withnopreparationwithinaveryshorttime...(i.e.Theyareimprovisedundergreattimepressure.)Paraphrase Paragraphs5-6:Question Whatarethereasonsthatcouldaccountforthepoorqualityofnetwriting?First,things(suchasE-mail)writtenontheInternethavelittleliteraryvalue,sothey’renotmeanttobepermanent.Theyjustcomeandgoandnoonewilleverrememberthem,oncetheyareread.Second,manyonlinepostingsareproducedundergreattimepressure.Third,thereisactuallynothresholdontheInternet,sothatanyonecanlogonandsendoutwhattheyhavewritten. 第5段中文译文 当然，原因之一就是电子邮件不同于常规写作。“你得把它看成是‘写下来的话’，”康涅狄格州西港镇的文学作品经纪人杰勒德·凡·德·勒恩如是说，此人是最近在网络上窜红的文体家,“这种东西和咖啡屋里的闲谈相差无几，但和书信相差甚远。它们不用储存保留，而是要删除遗忘。”许多网络公告内设“实况”计时系统，利用计算机系统中基本的文字处理器，这类公告以分钟收费，往往一小时后不给提示就自动关闭。 6. ThatisnottosaythatwithmoretimeeverywriterontheInternetwouldproduceasparklingcopy.Muchofthefictionandpoetryissecond-rateorworse,whichisnotsurprising,giventhatthebarrierstoentryaresolow.“Intherealworld,”saysMaryAnneMohanraj,aChicago-basedpoet,“ittakesahellofalotofworktogetpublished,whichnaturallyweedsoutalotofthegarbage.OntheNet,justafewkeystrokessendsyourwritingouttothousandsofreaders.” ahellofalotof (usedasanemphasizer)agreatdealof helln. usedforsayingthatsomethinghappensthatmakespeopleangryorupset,andtheystartfightingorarguinge.g. Ohhell,I’veforgottenmykey! Whatthehellwasthatnoise? weedn. someonewhoisthinandweak weedout toremoveapersonorthingthatisnotsuitableorgoodenough,especiallyfromagrouporcollectione.g. Helookslikearealweedinthoseshorts. weedoutdandelions weedoutunqualifiedapplicants “...ittakesahellofalotofworktogetpublished,whichnaturallyweedsoutalotofthegarbage.”...ifyouwanttohaveyourbookpublished,youneedtodoalotofwork.Inthiswayalotofuntalentedwritersarepreventedfrompublishingbadworks.Paraphrase 第6段中文译文 这并不是说，所有的网络作家多花一点时间都能生产出惊世之作。网上许多小说和诗歌都属二流水平或者更差，这倒并不足为怪，因为入这行的门槛太低了。“在现实世界中，”芝加哥诗人玛丽·安妮·穆罕拉吉说，“文学作品要出版，要做非常辛勤的劳动，这自然就剔除了大量的垃圾。而在网络世界，区区几次按键就可以将自己的作品发给成千上万的读者。” 7. Butevenamongthereamsofbadpoetry,gemsaretobefound.MikeGodwin,aWashington-basedlawyerwhopostsunderthepenname“mnemonic,”tellsthestoryofJoeGreen,atechnicalwriteratCrayRe