[教学]2013 四六级 英文丹青作文模板

[教学]2013 四六级 英文丹青作文 写作:写作分三段～每段都是围绕中心写的:,120-180字, 作文题型: 1. 提纲式作文——观点对比选择题 2. 图表式作文——观点论证题,例子:用于抽象题目～举学习, 3. 图画式作文——现象阐释题,正面,/问题解决题,负面:国家～人民, 4. 简单应用文 写作段落分析,两点提纲可分三段,:【2、3题型】 /例子?评价,问题解决/现象阐释,/例子描述,两幅图/表,?原因/意义 ?(3-4句) ?(7-8句) ?(3-5句) 写作步骤: , 审题,2-3min,:确定所写内容和结构 , 构思提纲(3-4min):文中词写不出时～套用事物本质,列出词语套入文中 , 写作,22-23min,:字数够,整齐不能抄情景句 , 审查,2-3min,:主谓、时态、冠词、固定搭配、拼写错误 一 负面图画作文 【环境问题,温室效应,天天网吧,考试压力,就业压力,浪费时间】 1 图画描述段:What the drawing is trying to present is the phenomena of environment destroyed/greenhouse effect/the side effects of Internet abuse /the employment pressure/Values, which seems to be humorous and preposterous, but thought-provoking on second thoughts. As is shown in the first cartoon, people are fleeing from voracious sand dunes because they cut down all the trees. On the contrary, the people have returned carrying tools water and samplings for the reforestation of the land. 2 图表描述段: What is shown in the table/chart/graph above indicates that dramatic changes have taken lace in people’s daily expense between 1999 and 2008 ,and the us population grew/fall from about 2 million to 4 billion In contrast, at least 70 wildlife species bid farewell to the country over the same period of time. It is obvious that the extinction of wildlife resulted from the population explosion. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another. 3 意义阐述段:Undoubtedly, the symbolic meaning of the picture subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration—the purpose of the pictures are to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decline of ocean resources/ the side effects of Internet abuse /The employment pressure/Values. Owing to have no rational use and cherish our valuable assets. If we let this situation go as it is. We do not know how we will be in the future. By that time, our environment/we will suffer a great destruction/failure. 4原因阐述段: Currently, more attention has been attracted to this thought-provoking the phenomenon. As the central task of our society is to “build a well-off society in an all-round way”, people in mounting numbers of improving the living standards. But why is (_) so prevailing. There are, to my mind, plenty of contributing causes, among which the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. One of the most serious ones is that(_). Another fundamental reason which should not be neglected is that(_)What is more, the biggest harm of(_)is that it is an obstruct to our building a harmonious society. 5 建议措施段:In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential/ vital to tackle it. The first way to cope with it is to appeal to the authorities to workout laws and regulations to ban the Wasted resources / greenhouse effect/the side effects of Internet abuse /The employment pressure/ A waste of time. Besides, concerted effort should be made to eliminate the negative influence of Wasted resources / greenhouse effect/the side effects of Internet abuse /The employment pressure/ A waste of time. As for people, they should develop conscience to resist the temptation to (_) with proper laws and an alert public, we can safely predict that it will only be a matter of time before(_) becomes thing of the past. It is goes without saying that a more brilliant future will be waiting for us. 环境措施段:This simple picture is a wake-up call for the whole of the human race. If this vivid image of the grim future of our planet is not to become a reality, we must take positive steps right, now to put an end the plundering of the Earth’s natural resources. It is clear that the drawer of the picture is urging us to start with a campaign to save the forests, which is something all of us can join by urging our local authorities to take positive measures to save the trees. If the sense of responsibility is greatly aroused, harmony between man and the environment will not be far away. 二 利弊型图画作文 1 观点/现状说明 【假冒伪劣】As the picture given depicts, the socialist market-oriented economy in our country is developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a high seed. But the general public is surprised to find that there are more and more fake and inferior products seriously hampering the expansion of our market economy. Consumers have to be very careful in purchasing goods and services they need; otherwise they will fall into the traps set by the illegal manufacturer 【汽车太多】As the picture given depicts, the socialist market-oriented economy in our country is developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a high seed. But, the picture presents a real traffic scene in which endless columns of vehicles have jammed the road, making movement impossible. Much valuable time is wasted and many important businesses are delayed in the helpless waiting for progress. It’s no exaggeration to say that the inconvenience and losses caused by traffic jams are inestimable. 2 利弊说明=原因阐述 3 归纳总结=建议措施 三 正面 【具体事物:可持续发展,2008奘运会】 【抽象事物:爱心,诚信】 现象/现状说明段: What the picture conveys goes far beyond only a humorous joke, instead, it carries (honesty /cultural) meanings. The fact indicates that to some extent accompany the society developing, more and more people become dishonest. Since the trend of globalization become irresistible, honesty is of utmost importance to us humans /cultural communication can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship .One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is that we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to more independent in life, Another special consideration in this case is that maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help step out of their difficulties. 举例说明段: I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example when a student was late for school because he got up late lied to the teacher. He said there is a traffic jam. In addition, there are more and more fake and inferior products seriously hampering the expansion of our market economy. With more emphasis put on “building a harmonious society”, people begin to realize the importance of solving the problem of inequality honesty. 归纳总结段: Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that honesty as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished. However, when we are confronted with dishonest, we should be resist it (sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side).Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous. If everyone behaves considerately towards others and social ethics people will live in a better world. I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in. 原因阐释段: 一、 挥霍时间和金钱,为未来充电 ，spends all his time and money playing Intenet games and studies diligently， 1、 limited communication with teachers, many students are unable to focus on their future goal. 2、 Students should not only keep their ambitions in mind, but also seriously strive towards them. 二、假冒伪劣商品，fake and inferior products， 1、inferior quality medicines not only aggravate a patient’s condition, but also tend to threat his life. 2、inferior quality affect the marketing of many high-quality goods. 三、垃圾污染，garbage pollution， 1、most of garbage technological products that are difficult to be decomposed through natural processes, such as plastics and glass. 2、most of garbage pollute air, water, and earth.. 四、住房问题，the housing problem， 1、with the rapid increase in population, the lack of housing is becoming more evident than ever becoming more evident than ever before . 2、the provision of living space still falls far short of demands. 五、生活压力，stress in modern life， 1、a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation. 2、stress contributes to one’s mental decline and hence endangers his health. 3、it can lead to poor performance and ill health.