现在流行网上购物

现在流行网上购物 1. 现在流行网上购物 2.网上购物的利弊 3.我的看法 Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters. Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage. In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect. 1. 很多人开始在网上购买商品 2.网上购物可能存在的问题 3.我的看法 Online Shopping 首段:3句话= 背景+事实描述+举例说明 The past decade has witnessed the huge advancement of Information Technology (背景描述). And shopping through the Internet has gained great popularity among web suffers(主题 事实描述). For instance, it can be noticed that an increasing number of youngsters purchase clothes, books, electrical equipment and the like on Taobao, EBay and Alibaba。(举例法 扩展段落) (或:A case in point is the Group Purchasing, which attracts thousands of customers. 举例+定语从句) 2段:问题4句话 = 主题句+ 危害1+危害2 +危害 In spite of the convenience and low price of this shopping, others argue that we can not turn a blind eye to its negative aspects. Firstly, they point out that the quality may not be as superior as it is described and sometimes, it is possible for customers to buy fake commodities. In addition, many customers find it troublesome to make a change when they are not satisfied. As has been noted, these do exert bad impacts。 尾段:解决措施(即我的看法)3句话 = 总说+建议+展望未来 As a customer, I am convinced that effective measures should be taken to enhance it。(总说看法) To be specific, it is suggested that regulations and rules should be worked out to scrutinize online shop owners. (或者:Specifically, shoppers are well-advised to be alert when purchasing online。) A promising online shopping is just awaiting us if we spare no effort to do so.