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考研英语写作押题密训 --朱伟老师最后点题考研英语写作押题密训--朱伟老师最后点题考研英语写作押题密训--朱伟老师最后点题2014年12月27日高分作文三件事:审题,句法,结构(一)Warm-up句法篇简单句----复杂句InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinth...
考研英语写作押题密训 --朱伟老师最后点题
考研英语写作押题密训--朱伟老师最后点题考研英语写作押题密训--朱伟老师最后点题2014年12月27日高分作文三件事:审题,句法,结构(一)Warm-up句法篇简单句----复杂句InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.(二)结构篇--------必背大作文(图表漫画类)What---描写数据(先写总的趋势,再写细节)Why/effect现象句(可省略)+原因分析句(两点原因)+举例子(一个例子)ConclusionHow总结句+提建议句Analyses---分析规律,对比原因引句:Iintendtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollows.分析结论:Actually,itishardlynecessaryforustothinktwicebeforefiguringoutthistruthofmatterthat…Conclusion:大胆下结论,预测趋势结尾:(1)Asdiscussedabove,itisnotsurprisingtosee.... Inmyopinion,thistrendthatthenumberof(n.)dramatically/steadily/slightly/graduallyrise/turndown/leveloffin领域/地点willcontinueforawhileintheforeseeablefuture.(2)Consideringthesegeneralillustrations/resolutions,wemayreasonablyarriveataconclusionthat…(句子).Thetendencythat(n.)willcontinuallyplaycriticalrolesin领域/地点maybeirreversible.2.Directions:1)Thetwopiechartsbelowshow(a)thethreemaintypesofe-bookreadings,and(b)theproportionthateachtypeofterminalhandlein2009and2010.2)Usingtheinformationfromthecharts,writeashortreport,whichdescribesthesituationin2009andcomparesitwiththesituationin2010.3)Writeabout160-180wordsonyouranswersheet.(What)Elaboratelyandluminously,thesetwopiechartsdisplaytheproportiondistributionofthethreemaintypesofe-bookreadings,whichchangeitssharesovertheperiodfrom2009to2010.(Analyses)Iintendtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollowings.In2009,48%ofe-bookreadingswerepromotedbymobilephones,46%bylaptopsand6%viaotheroutlets.Thenafteronlyanother365days,theshareofmobileterminalsrosesharplyby12%to60%. Meanwhile,theturnoverscontributedbylaptopsdecreasedsymmetricallybyjustover11%to34.5%.Actually,itishardlynecessaryforustothinktwicebeforefiguringoutthistruthofmatterthatthequantityofmobilephones’upsurgeisequivalenttotheoneoflaptops’slide,whichpredictsawholenewbusinesstrendintheforeseeablefuture,thatis,portablemobileterminals,duetotheirmuchlowerpricesaswellasconvenience,willsurelytakemoremarketingsharesincompetition.Also,therearestillsomeotheroutletsholding/whichholdmoreorlesssteady,withaslightdropinshareofonly0.5%.(Conclusion)Consideringthesegeneralillustrations,wemayreasonablyarriveataconclusionthatmobilephonesaretakingmoreofe-readingsthanotherterminals,withtheirshareshavingrepresentedwellover50%ofthetotalcakeyet.Thetendencythatthemobilephonewillcontinuallyplayacriticalroleinourdailye-readingmaybeirreversible.重点预测:网上购物(电子)与实体店购物的销售额比较Shoppingonline(electronicreading)vs.shoppingindepartmentstoreSimplyandclearly,thissingle-serieschartarrangestheincreasingrateandtheturnoversofChina’son-lineshopping,whichdisplaysasteadyandsounddevelopingtrendovertheperiodfrom2006to2015.Tobeginwith,thecurvelineonthetopshowstheincreasingspeedofvirtualshoppingwillslowdown,withthepeakof128.8%in2008andthenslidingcontinuallytothevalleybottomof26.8%in2015.Whilethematurityofon-lineshoppingmarkettriggersthedropofincreases,itssales,asthebarchartbelowshows,enjoygreatandconstantriseinthecoming10years,withthemaximuminthecoming2015nearly100timesofRMB26.31billionin2006.Also,itishardlydifficulttofigureoutthattheshareofvirtualshoppingintotalconsumingmarketisstillatalowlevel.Evenwithone-decadeboom,itcanonlyreach8.6%inthemid-2010s.Thus,wearesupposedtobeoptimisticthatitstillhasabigchancetokeepgoingwiththeupoflivingstandard,includingbettereducationandpopularityofmobile-4Gtechnologytomakeshoppingonlinemucheasier.Surely,thetendencythatthevirtualshoppingwillcontinuallyplayacriticalroleinourcustomers’dailypurchasingmaybeirreversible.半(归纳自己的开头句型和中间观点)Accordingtothechart,luxuryconsumptioninChinarosesteadilyfrombillionUSdollarsin2007to14in2011.Likewise,overthesameperiodoftime,thegrowthrateincreasedby6.3%from7.5%to13.8%.Alsowecanseethatamongthesalesofallthebrands,RichemontandLouisVuittonareatthetopofthelist,accountingforaround10%respectively.Bycomparison,Gucciisthesecondbiggestpart,makingup8%.Likewhatisindicatedinthechart,agrowingnumberofChinese,especiallyyoungsters,arecrazyaboutluxuriessuchasCK,Gucci,LVandotherluxurieswithbrandnamesthattheycannotevenpronounce.(如果是英语一的图画题,增加这一部分会更加精彩)Whatmightberesponsibleforthephenomenon?Thankstothepolicyofreformandopening-up,mostpeopleenjoyabetterlifethanbefore.Asaresult,luxuriesfindtheirwayintocommonChinesefamilies,whichsoundsincredibleevenyearsago.However,asisoftenpointedout,thispracticewilldomoreharmthangoodifleftunfettered.Themajoroneisthewasteofnaturalresources.(“生活水平的提高”或“经济的发展”可作为很多现象的原因)Tosumup,thistrendislikelytocontinueforquitealongtimeinthefuture.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisadvisablefordepartmentconcernedtolaydownstrictrulesandregulationssothatwecanputthesituationunderpropercontrol.4.无模板(没有像一般图表作文的常规因果分析)Recentyearshavewitnessedanincreaseinsuperstarsinvolvedinadvertisementsofvariouskinds(很多文章可以采用背景介绍的方法开头,而这里提供的是一个背景介绍的经典句型).Ofallthestars,thosefromentertainmentcircleareatthetopofthelist,accountingforabout45%.However,fromthebarchartwefindtheyaretrustedbyfewerpeople(from80%in1990to20%in2010).Obviously,thechartsintendtorevealthatalargeproportionofcelebritiesaretradingtheirfameforfortune(押头韵)inmisleadingadvertisements.Composedofhouseholdsuperstars,lengthyboastsandfantasticscenes,mostadvertisementsseemimpressive(分词开头是句式多变的一个常用技巧,本句中提到的明星、夸耀、和广告画面在下文一一提及,结构非常严谨。这就是写作评分说明中所要求的“衔接和连贯”)DavidBeckhamplaysfootballwithacanofPepsiinhishand;ordinarycoldmedicineispromotedinanextremelyexhilaratingtoneasifthenarratorweretalkingaboutsomewonderdrug;carsrunthroughjungles,valleys,cliffs,torrentsandanyterribleterrainthatcanneverbeimaginedand,magically,theyremainbrand-new.(下面几句对上面提及的广告各个成分逐一揭露,紧扣“广告误导”这个主题。)Howeverthetruthturnsoutthatcokeisprettyunhealthy,coldmedicineoftendoesnotcureanydiseaseandcarsbreakdowneasily.Inanadvertisement,alwaysthepositivesideofoneproductisthousandsoftimeshighlighted,whileitsnegativesideiscarefullysecretedfromallthepotentialconsumers.Inevitablytheso-calledperfectproductsoftenfailourexpectations,ifwedohavefaithinthem.Thatistheveryreasonwhywecanalwayshearpeopleexclaiming“Oh,itisnotsaidtobesointhatadvertisement!”强调What(描述漫画句+引出主题句)1.描述漫画句(1)反面话题:Whentheissueof(n.)arousewideconcernfromthepublic,canwestillstandthere,hesitatingforwhatoccurs?Aswecanseefromthedepiction,…(n.)如:plasticsurgery/whethertoprovidestrangerswithfavorsreadilyornot/overcuttingdownforests正面话题:Whentheimportanceof…(n.)gainsanoverridingfocusfromthepublic,canwestillstandtheredetachedlyforwhatkindofeffortsweshallmake?Aswecanseefromthedepiction,…(n.)如:blendeddiversecultures/culturalmixture/beingallegedtoyourheart/credit/braveness(2)通用型:直接描述法(素颜版)Ascanbeseeninthepicture,anAmericangirlissmilingbeautifully/brilliantlyinatraditionalChineseMiaocostume.(简妆版:只涂了隔离霜)AprettyAmericangirl,ascanbeseeninthepicturegivenabove,sweetandgraceful,isheadingtowardsusinatraditionalChineseMiaocostume.(浓妆版)Sweetandgraceful,aprettyAmericangirlwithanangel-likesmile,(ascanbeseeninthepicturegivenabove),isheadingtowardsusinatraditionalChineseMiaocostume,dancingwithswinginglocks.最懒人版:Elaboratelyandluminously,thecartoongivenabovetellsavividstorythat…/Itishardlydifficultforustofigureoutinthepicturegivenabovethat…2.引出主题句(1)Actually,thesecartoonseries/thisvividcaricatureappear(s)veryurgenttoremindusthat…(2)Actually,itisaMorningCalltosendusamessagethatthetopicconcerning(n.)hasbeeninthespotlightthatattractsattentionfromeverycornerofsociety.Why/Effect现象句(可省略)+原因分析句(两点原因)+举例子(一个例子)1.现象句(1)Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceof(n.)which…(2)反面话题:Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemof(n.1)thanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthedeclinein(n.2)evenoftheeducatedteenagers/youths.如:科技对生活的影响。Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemofelectronictrashesthanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthedeclineinelementallifestyleevenofeducatedyouths.WescarcelywriteahandwrittenletterotherthananE-mail,whichdisplaysfewertouchingemotionsthanthescript,forinstance.再如:人们不读书了Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemofelementalliteracythanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthedeclineinthereadingskillevenofthehigheducatedteenagers,whoshouldhavemadeenoughpreparationsfortheirfuturecompetitionbyabsorbingnutritionfromthebook.正面话题:Butmyownexcitementtodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingpublicityof(n.1)thanitisofthesteadilymoreluxuriousadmirationofthereinforcementin(n.2)evenoftheyouths.如:成功不是拥有多少,而是付出多少(n.1)thenumberofhaves/therichboom(n.2)charityperformanceButmyownexcitementtodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingpublicityoftherichboominChinathanitisofthesteadilymoreluxuriousadmirationofthereinforcementincharityperformanceevenoftheyouths.2.原因分析句+两个原因(内外)(1)Thereseemtobetwoelementsinvolvedin(n.)which….Firstly,….Apartfromtheabove-mentionedaspect,anotherfactorcontributingtothetendencytodenythenecessityof(n.)/promote(n.)isthat…(2)Severalfactorscouldweighheavilyfor(n.)主题,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith,…Furthermore,externally,…(3)Thereasonsforabigrise/anappallingslumpin(n.)主题词arecomplex.Someattributeitto(n.)which/who….Othersmayplaceahighvalueon/blameon(n.)which/who….Stilltherestattachimportanceto/makecomplainsof(n.)which/who…(4)(特别适合正反两种观点对立的作文)Iintendtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollowings.peoplemayattachimportanceto/placeahighvalueon(n.)主题词owingittoits(n.)优点.Yet,therearestillsomeotherswhomakealotofcomplaintsaboutthenegativityofpromoting(n.)主题词duetothefactthat….Personally,Ithinkthelatter/theformerholdswater.如:网上购物Iintendtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollows.Somepeoplemayattachimportancetothemeritsbroughtbyonlineshoppingowingtoitsconvenienceanddiversealternatives/options.Yet,therearestillsomeotherswhomakealotofcomplaintsaboutthenegativityofpromotingpurchasingonlineduetothefactthatconsumersmayencounteralotofdeceptionsinvirtualstores.Personally,bothvisionsgototheirextremesandweneedtomakesomemoderateanalysesasfollowings.3.引出影响句:(1)Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceoftherevolutionaryinfluences(that)theaestheticoperation/thenegativemoodgivesriseto.Tobeginwith,….Moreover,….(2)Thereseemtobetwodirect/sideeffectsinvolvedin(n.),which….Firstly,….Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowis…,which/who….Apartfromtheabove-mentionedaspect,anotherimpact/influencespelledbythepromotionof(n.)/thelackof(n.)/livingina(a.)wayisthat…4.举例子:(1)Ifoneexampleisneeded,Icouldnotbutmentionthefollowing…,who/which…(2)Agoodcaseinpointis…,which/who…(3)Oneofthemosttypical/startlingexamplescomingto/flowinginto/blowingmymindnowis…,who/which…(4)举数据:ItisestimatedbyarecentsurveyImetwithgreatcoincidenceinContemporaryYouththreemonthsagothat…********特别提示:原因之后或者举例子之后都可以跟一句结论性的语言用于点评。句型推荐:Itgoeswithnoexaggerationtosaythat…/Itgoeswithnodenyingthat…如:原因之后(社会道德和责任感下降)Thereasonsforanappallingslumpinmorallevelarecomplex.Someattributeittocritics/complainersthemselveswhoheavilydamntheuniversalindifferenceprevailinginourdailylifeandthen,paradoxically,choosetostandoutofthesituationwheneveritoccurs.Itgoeswithnoexaggerationtosaythatthiskindofsayingonethingbutdoingtheoppositeplaysacriticalroleinsocialmoraldisaster.OneofthemoststartlingexamplesblowingmymindnowistheeventofXiaoYueyue,whichposesachallengetomorals.How总结句+提建议句1.总结句(1)反面话题:Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgment.(2)通用型:Takingintoaccountallresolutionsmentionedabove,wemaysafelyarriveataconclusionthat…(3)通用型:Underthesecircumstances,thequestionofwhatfuturethereisfor(n.)isarealone.(n.)如thecosmeticsindustry2.提建议句(三个建议):Itis,undoubtedly,theverytimethatweshouldtakesomeavailablemethodsto/Itisimperativethatdrastic/reliablemeasuresshouldbetakento(反面)enduptheseinappropriatebehaviors/(正面)formulatesustainableandpositivestep-upof…,suchas/includinglayingdowntheeffectiveregulations/disciplinesto(v.)sth.,shapingamoderatelife/fortune/consuming/world/friendship/success-attainingoutlookandguaranteeingmorerational(n./a.)manners.3.最具逼格结尾句:Takingintoaccountallresolutions/analysesmentionedabove,wemaysafelyarriveataconclusionthatitis,unquestionably,beneficial/unreasonabletobe(a.)inourworkanddailylife.So,alistincludingsomeconstructiveandliberalmottos(toguarantee/restrictsth.)shouldbestuckonourdressingtableassoonaspossible.(至少49个字)组合的力量,接下来就是见证奇迹的时刻。。。反面话题组合示例一(批判类):Whentheissueof(n.)arouseswideconcernfromthepublic,canwestillstandthere,hesitatingforwhatoccurs?Aswecanseefromthedepiction,….Actually,itisaMorningCalltosendusamessagethatthetopicconcerning(n.)hasbeeninthespotlightthatattractsattentionfromeverycornerofsociety.Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemof(n.1)thanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthedeclinein(n.2)evenoftheeducatedteenagers/youths.Severalfactorscouldweighheavilyfor(n.)主题,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith,….Oneofthemoststartlingexamplesblowingmymindnowis…,who/which….Furthermore,externally,….Itgoeswithnoexaggerationtosaythat….Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgment.Itis,undoubtedly,theverytimethatweshouldtakesomeavailablemethodstoenduptheseinappropriatebehaviors,includinglayingdowntheeffectiveregulationsto(v.)sth.,shapingamoderate(n.)outlookandguaranteeingmorerational(n./a.)manners.(200个字)正面话题组合示例一(褒奖类)Whentheimportanceof(n.)gainsanoverridingfocusfromthepublic,canwestillstandtheredetachedly(不偏袒的)forwhatkindofeffortsweshallmake?Aswecanseefromthedepiction,….Actually,itisamorningcalltosendusamessagethatthetopicconcerning(n.)hasbeeninthespotlightandarousedwideconcernatanyinchofsocialspace.Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceof(n.),which….Thereseemtobetwoelementsinvolvedin(n.)which….Firstly,….Ifoneexampleisneeded,Icouldnotbutmentionthefollowing…,who/which….Apartfromtheabove-mentionedaspect,anotherfactorcontributingtothetendencytopromote(n.)isthat….Itgoeswithnodenyingthat….Takingintoaccountallresolutionsmentionedabove,wemaysafelyarriveataconclusionthat….Itisimperativethatreliablemeasuresshouldbetakentoformulatesustainableandpositivestep-upof…,includinglayingdowntheeffectivedisciplinesto(v.)sth.,shapingamoderate(n.)outlookandguaranteeingmorerational(n./a.)manners.(194个字)同一话题两种态度组合示例一(正反两种反应):Itishardlydifficultforusto/Wemayfigureoutinthelefthalfofthepicture/inthetophalfofthecartoongivenabovethat…However,intherightone/intheunderone,….Actually,thiscartoon/thisvividcaricatureappearsveryurgenttoremindusthat….Iintendtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollowings.Firstly,somepeoplemayattachimportancetobuilding/settinga(n.)owingtoits(n.)优点.Yet,therearestillsomeotherswhomakealotofcomplaintsaboutthesideeffectsofpromoting/whoaresteppingonatotallydifferenttrackasaccustomedtoputtingthemselvesina(a.)stateduetothefactthat….Personally,….ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveyImetwithgreatcoincidenceinReaders’Digestthreemonthsagothat%moreorlessofinvestigatedfeel(a.)inthefaceof.Takingintoaccountallresolutionsmadeabove,wemayfirmlyarriveataconclusionthatitis,unquestionably,beneficial/unreasonabletobe(a.)inourworkanddailylife.So,alistincludingsomeconstructiveandliberalmottos(toguarantee/restrictsth.)shouldbestuckonourdressingtableassoonaspossible.(186个字)虚度光阴,人生遗憾范文:(关键字:时间,生活方式,自我管理能力,电视节目低俗化)Para.1:(Whentheissueofwastingtimearouseswideconcernfromthepublic,canwestillstandthere,hesitatingforwhatoccurs?)Aswecanseefromthedepiction,asingleperson,sittinginfrontofatelevisionwhichbroadcastssomekindsofsoapoperas,isappreciatingeverynutandboltoftheseinvariableplots.Actually,itisaMorningCalltosendusamessagethatwehumanbeingsalwaysperformsomethingwastingmuchofprecioustime,thusspoilingyouthaseverysecondelapses.Para.2:(Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemofcommonhousewivesorhousehusbandsthanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthedeclineintimemanagingabilityevenoftheeducatedteenagers.)Severalfactorscouldweighheavilyforthisdegeneration,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith,habitishabit.Wearegoodatgivingourselvessufficientexcusestosupportwhatwealwaysdoinourdailylife.Ifoneexampleisneeded,Icouldnotbutmentionthefollowingwell-knownscientist,whosenameisAndrewD.C,illuminatingthatakindofhabit,representingasenseofspiritualexistence,canneverbechangedaslongascontinuingfor47days,noristhiskindoftime-wastingpracticeFurthermore,externally,oursocietyiswitnessinganoverwhelmingnumberoflowlevelTVprograms,rangingfromentertainingshows,TVtalkshowsandTVseriestosomeotherinferiorproducts,whichdifferinformsaswellasbroadcastingtimebutneverintheiressentialcontents.Then,theconsequenceisdistinct.Itgoeswithnoexaggerationtosaythatsoapoperaruinstheconceptofcherishingtime.Para.3:Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgment.Itis,undoubtedly,theverytimethatweshouldtakesomeavailablemethodstoenduptheseinappropriatebehaviors,includinglayingdowntheeffectiveregulationstorestrictthequantitiesofentertainments,shapingamoderatetimeoutlookandguaranteeingmorerationallifestyles.(331个字-293个字-270个字)关键字:梦想,抗挫折能力,充分准备,迎难而上Anexcitingstoryoftengoeslikethis:itisnotpossibleforanyonetogothroughtheriverbyabrokenwoodbridge.Then,aweakbutbravesnailisexpectedtoflylikeabirdandgettotheothersideoftheriverwithoutanyaccident.Unfortunately,storyisasstorydoes.Thetruthisthislittlecuteanimal,evenwithahistorythousandsofyearslongerthanhumanbeings’,wouldputitsfateonthelineanddroptotheriverprobably.Thestory,asthecartoonshows,istotellustoreconsidertherelationshipbetweenidealandreality.Sometimeswemaypaintourselvesaverybrilliantblueprintbeforetakinganyinvestigationintothesituation,whichismoreoftenmuchfiercerthanwehaveeverimagined.Hence,whentherealdifficultycomes,wealwaysappearanxiousandevencannotbelievewhatishappeninginfrontofus.Actually,itisthelackofadequatepreparationsratherthanthedifficultyitselfthatresultsinanegativeoutcome.Thus,itisessentialtoconsidereverythingpossiblebeforeinitiatingaprogram.Meanwhile,dreamisnotabadthing.Youshouldnevergiveupwhentheaimseemsunexpectable.Afterall,thesnailisstillhangingontheendofthebridge.Thereisachance,isn’tthere?Ifyouassurethatyourlifegoaliselevatingandworthtrying,youjustgoandgetit..奢侈浪费关键词:奢侈浪费,优良传统,文化变质Para.1Expensiveanddelicate,avarietyofMooncakesdescribedinthedepictionaregivingoffsomeirresistibletastebutresistiblerates,whichcouldbehardlyacceptedevenbyhaves./Whentheissueofhighconsumption/over-expensivecommoditiesgainsaseriesofconcernsfromthepublic,canwestillstandthere,hesitatingforwhatoccurs?Aswecanseefromthedepiction,avarietyofMooncakesdescribedinthedepictionaregivingoffsomeirresistibletastebutresistiblerates,whichcouldbehardlyacceptedevenbyhaves.Actually,itisaMorningCalltosendusamessagethatthetopicconcerningluxurieshasbeeninthespotlightthatattractsattentionfromeverycornerofsociety.Para.2:Thereseemtobetwoelementsinvolvedinpeople’sfrenzytodeluxegoods,whichhavegonefarawayfromtheirpracticalfunctions./Severalfactorscouldweighheavilyforpeople’sfrenzytohigh–pricedgoods,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith,sometimes,therealpositionofcommoditiesinourmindhaslesstodowithitsutilitythanitsbubble-likeadditionalvalue,whichsatisfiespeople’svanitytoobtainasenseofpriority.Agoodcaseinpointnowisanotablemoviecalled”DaWan”or”BigShot’sFuneral”,directedbyXiaogang,Feng,whichspreadsawell-knownview------theonlystandardofthehaves’purchasingishardlybasedonproduct’sworkabilitybutonitsprice.Meanwhile,externally,oursocietyissparingnoeffortstoproduceabrand-newconceptwithsomeacquisitivemotivetocatertopeople’sunrealisticfantasy,whichmeans,one’ssocialstatusisassociatedtightlywithhisorherpropertymeasuredbyhowmanydeluxecommoditiesheorsheowns..Para.3:Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgmentonlyifdrasticmeasurescouldbetakentoendupthiscraziness,suchaslayingdowntheeffective-and-strictregulationstorectifytheinappropriateprice-makingmechanism,shapingamoderateconsumptionoutlookandsupportingthefrugallifestylebyouractions.Para.1:Virtuousandwarm-hearted,thosetwomostnotabletycoonsnamedBillGatesandBuffetareholdingtheirdinnerpartyinthenameofcharity/philanthropy.Asweallknow,theyarerunningthetop/optimumfundsonthisplanetwhichdoalotoffavortotheworld’shave-notsandnoweventrytopersuadetherichestateverycornerofthisworldtoparticipateinthislove-permeatingassembly.Para.2:Actually,thequestionofwhatthereasonablecriterionofsuccessse
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